- (PS: The protagonist is an ordinary person. The character you want to see is embodied. In the second template, I need your corrections. I want your help. I am not sure when writing Douluo on Tomato alone.)
Protagonist Lin Yan
(Former author of Earth's Serious Sickness website) traveled to an abandoned village at the western foot of the Star Dou Forest in Douluo Continent. This place had been reduced to death due to the migration of soul beasts, and he was the only one left. Relying on his young body, he hunted low-level soul beasts in the wilderness and collected basic materials for soul guidance devices to make a living. In three years, he completed the deep integration of soul and body. At the age of 16, when his soul power reached the standard, he awakened the special weapon soul - [Book of Divine Inspiration].
Reader comments
It's been a long time since I've seen a Douluo article on Yang Persimmon. I think the author has a good temper.
Don't ask me why I gave it five stars. I am a person who has read all the poems such as short pseudo-humanities, White Snake, Kiss Your Wife, etc. [Smile]
It's okay. The main character's character is a good person, but he's not the Virgin. I haven't seen that in fan fiction for a long time.
The writing is okay, better than most Douluo Continent, especially the portrayal of Wuhun. And descriptions of combat. The disadvantage is that there seems to be no obvious description of emotions.
It's been a long time since I've seen a Douluo article on Yang Persimmon. I think the author has a good temper. Don't ask me why I gave it five stars. I am a person who has read all the poems such as short pseudo-humanities, White Snake, Kiss Your Wife, etc. [Smile]
It's okay. The main character's character is a good person, but he's not the Virgin. I haven't seen that in fan fiction for a long time.
The writing is okay, better than most Douluo Continent, especially the portrayal of Wuhun. And descriptions of combat. The disadvantage is that there seems to be no obvious description of emotions.