Star Iron: General Yuheng of Luofu Immortal Boat

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on! . ~Meow

Personally, I feel pretty good, but how can I put it, I always compare myself unconsciously with the Xianzhou Keqing next door🐱 [Laughing and crying] You two were the only ones who impressed me deeply in writing about Beng Tie Ke Qing, which is really good. It's a pity that there are few updates [laughter]

It's not the Ke Qing of Teyvat, it's similar to a fetal transmutation, but it can basically be regarded as the Ke Qing of the parallel world, and there are very few other OOCs. The protagonist and Keqing in Teyvat are not exactly the same. After all, the environments are different, the choices are different, and the people are different. But the protagonist doesn't have any big hangups. He basically comes through it step by step. It feels like it comes naturally. The writing is also good. It's not a holster, it's not a system, it's not a hanging silk performance, it's not 5678 vests. Although there are no particularly passionate scenes, the author writes many scenes very smoothly (the protagonist also goes to the battlefield and commands the Cloud Cavalry, and is even the key factor in the victory of the Immortal Boat). There are no invincible scenes, nor does it highlight any particularly firm beliefs (but this is also one of the advantages. After all, this kind of scene seems too abrupt in the style of this book, and it is easy to collapse if it is not handled well) All in all, the biggest advantage of this book is that it is smooth and not OOC. To be honest, I was so touched that I could find such smooth fan fiction on Tomato. I hope it can be maintained.

The plot is quite interesting, and it took me a long time to get to the level of this book. It's completely fine. Although some settings are very inconsistent with the game, it's understandable. After all, there isn't much plot in Xianzhou [face covering] Nine keys, some typos, sorry

So far it looks okay, the logic is clear and the plot arrangement is reasonable. The emotional line is okay, and the proportion of stickers is also good. It's not too ambiguous, but I personally hope that it won't be too linear in the future and become a hundred. At present, this kind of change is quite good. Personally, I prefer the simple friendship between girls and the daily life of having fun. If they really become gay, forget it.

It's quite good to read it in one go. I clicked in at the beginning because I wanted to see what kind of life a character like Ke Qing would have in Xianzhou. As for how far Ke Qing would develop, I didn't think about it at the beginning. At first, my focus was actually on my daily workplace life. The daily part at the beginning was really okay, and most of it was about the life of Keqing, who had integrated into Xianzhou, which was interesting. Very few, minor issues are acceptable. It's just that the section about the War of Fertility that is about to jump into feels a bit too long, and the whole section is a little out of touch with daily life (after all, you really can't take any time off from fighting). The plot is somewhat thoughtful, and it gives Keqing an interesting position, but it's been written for too long, and it's still a bit tiring to watch. However, I have already finished the chapter of War of Fertility, and I just happened to watch the return to the Fairy Boat after the battle. The overall impression is not bad. I actually look forward to more daily interactions in the future, but writing daily routines is really laborious. Just think it's for the sake of readers and five stars, please do more daily life, the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

Not bad, not bad. I just hope that the subsequent plot doesn't really involve the main character fighting the boss and then disappearing and being picked up by a train. After all, it's really a similar situation and I'm a bit tired of seeing it. Being kissed and ordered by Lan is better than this (personal opinion). Overall, the book is quite good. For readers who don't look for faults, there are basically no obvious poisonous points worth reading [Sentiment]

The book is quite nice, but the cover is a bit familiar [laughs crookedly]

It's rare that he didn't follow the main plot, and his control over Keqing was also very good.

Xing Tie Fan is a rare fan, the others are almost all about romance, and it's exhausting to watch. Although the protagonist is Ke Qing, it's not OOC at all. I feel like Ke Qing would be like this if she was in Xianzhou.

It's okay. Keqing's combat power is a little weaker than I thought, but it's okay. I just don't know how to strengthen the combat power in the future. And didn't Keqing travel through time? Knowing that Genshin Impact knows Star Iron and knows about Honkai, let's not say what has changed. Then the setting at the beginning is not as good as just saying that Genshin's Keqing traveled to Star Iron and didn't know anything. The setting didn't work. Then I saw the latest chapter, so I stopped following it because I personally felt it was just average.

How come it only has a rating of 7? The writing is obviously very good, and the carved cat is also very cute. I finished reading it without paying attention. After reading it all, some of the descriptions are a little deliberate, but it's okay.

Yes, it's pretty good-looking. But it would be better to change the introduction. At present, it can only be seen that Qingque really wants to fish, but Keqing can't see it very well.

It's so beautiful. Mihayoujia has only played Genshin Impact, but it didn't affect my reading at all. The characters of Genshin Impact running into other worlds feel so smoothly blended, without any harshness at all. The old bookworm who has read for more than 5,000 hours approves.

So far it seems to be okay, I can keep watching it, the only thing that makes me uncomfortable is that Yan Qing appeared too early, at least fifteen years in advance. During the third Fengrao People's War, Yan Qing was not born yet.

Keqing, Qingque, Yanqing, Bailu, and Tingyun, they formed the Five Xiaos under the Cloud and ran away to death for various reasons, leaving Yanqing alone to take over Jingyuan's squad [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

Suddenly I realized that this cover picture is not too serious [laughs evilly]

The writing is very good, and I think that the character of Inona is not OOC, which is what Keqing would do. I think the author still intends to follow the main plot and learn from Inona, but not completely follow the main plot. The points and reasons for the intervention of the main plot are also valid. It can also reasonably skip some plots and original plots. However, in my opinion, the writing of Onfalus Star in Inona is a bit broken and I don't have a good grasp of the speed. I hope the author can learn from the experience, come on!

It looks great. I like this style very much. I hope the update will be faster. Reminder message The author stops writing, as if a handsome man has stopped fighting; the readers are raising their heads, as if they are waiting for orders. Gaiwen is like a war, and serialization is like attacking a city. If you stop for one day, the barriers will be weakened, and if you stop for three days, the morale of the army will be scattered. In the past, Sun Tzu said: "The soldiers heard of clumsy speed, but did not see the long time of cleverness." This chapter is left unresolved, the foreshadowing is hidden but not revealed, like encircling but not attacking, encamping but not advancing, it is not the work of a wise man. Readers are like soldiers, chasing updates like coins, and updating orders day and night, as if waiting for the strike of thunder. Moreover, "Soldiers are more valuable to win, not more expensive to last." Wealth is more valuable to continue, but not more valuable to stagnate. I hope the author writes like a sword, and the sequel is like breaking the formation, quickly resolving the suspense, so as to comfort the readers. Otherwise, it would be like using a blunt weapon to frustrate the sharp, and it would be a waste of sharpness.

It's very interesting. Compared with some cosplay and system articles, the track is normal and I can read it. It's not like those system articles, which are so embarrassing and awkward that I can't stop reading them. I can still read articles like this. Come on.

It's been a long time since I read this book and I haven't rated it yet. Although the rating so far is only 7.9, I think it's better than some books with ratings of 8.6 Or above. It can only be said that those who suppressed the score still worked hard and pushed the score below 8.0. Seeing that the grade of his own food has been reduced to such a low level, the food protector still has something to say (although he said it very late)

It's okay, it's pretty cool, but the general's combat power is too low. With no environmental restraint or anything like that, General Yao Qing and Yue Yu can be held back by two tribal leaders at an extreme disadvantage. They don't even need generals, and all the Jing exiles from the Yunwu period have been cut down as vegetables [eating melon]

The viewing experience is good and the plot is very smooth. If you want CP, I would like to ask, is it marriage? Hundred? Still nothing [thinking]

Children, I am Akaishi Sage, and finally let me eat a carved cat. In this book, the heroine Ke Qing fights a war in the early stage, becomes a general in the middle stage, and becomes a bit dull in the later stage, without much room for action. But overall it's still very good, especially the extra chapter about meeting Zhongli, which fills up readers' imagination. I hope to continue

Keqing is so cute. Personally, I feel that the description of the battle is a bit boring. Ciallo～(∠ω< )⌒☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆

The characters are vivid and vivid, and they belong to the slow-burning type. As long as you have the patience to read it, you will become addicted to it. The ideas are also very interesting, but you need to think about the previous chapters carefully, otherwise it seems impossible to distinguish the time clearly. After all, the time span of this book is large.

Pam: I firmly believe in the eternal power of development, but Jizi's coffee doesn't take it seriously. This is where our differences lie. The more complete the development, the stronger Jizi's coffee will be, Pa.

It's quite interesting. To put it simply, the protagonist is a woman who can become a mother [laughing evilly]

I would like to call it one of Tomato's top second creations😋👍Although it changes the timeline a bit, it is still within the acceptable range

It's more daily life, and the main plot goes by very quickly, so you can still look forward to it.