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It's okay for now, just used to pass the time.

It feels semi-toxic, like it's behind the scenes, but there's also something endemic about it that's just too right. In terms of characters, I almost don't feel that there is any major development. If I have to say it, it is neither good nor bad. It can't arouse emotions and the settings in some places are also weird. But what is worth mentioning is that the author's skills are pretty solid (except for the fact that too many exclamation points are a bit noisy), and the protagonist group also has a basic sense of morality. Based on this, I think it can also be given some points.

You can make the protagonist more believable [like]

It's okay, it's too short at the moment, let's see how the plot develops in the future.