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The writing is very good, and I have an indescribable feeling. I was attracted by the setting at first, and then slowly read on, but could the author do a better job of counterattacking? He is so miserable that I feel that there is no good person in Yue Ning, from the emperor to the servant.

Well, I feel like a lot of the descriptions are for the sake of description, the emotional transitions are too blunt, and some of the lyrics are a little pretentious due to some repeated or abrupt words (I know that's not what the author wants to express, but the effect is that). It can be seen that the author is very much a novice. But the plot is very novel and thoughtful. I have a feeling that the author will be great when he perfects it [Like]

The writing is good. It is rare to see articles written in the order of the solar terms. The author's conception is also great. The pursuit of treasure is really miserable. The pedantry of the family, the stupidity of the monarch, and the insensitivity of his colleagues have all become his instincts that crushed him and deprived him of his character. It was his unwavering support, careful care, and straightforward pursuit that melted the ice little by little, making it possible to During the breath, Gong Bao is really good at flirting after he regains consciousness, and Shou also likes to be disciplined. The two of them are sweet in the back, and Gong Bao can show the unruly nature he should have at his age in the chapters where he loses his memory at the end. I think this book is really well written, and the foundation of the text is very solid. The only flaw is that there are repetitions in some places. Others are great [Love] [Love] [Love] I can't do it anymore. This book of attack and control is really good. It's really not a trick to kill people. I'm a local dog and I like to watch [making faces] and [love].

This is a rare and good article. The author's writing style is very good and the characters are also very good. I'll keep reading! [Sending Hearts] Gong Bao was having such a hard time, he felt distressed and drooled at the same time (I like this kind of character (｢･ω･)｢Hey)

I feel like I can just watch it directly from the extras. The extra story is about sweet mutual favor. Either the text doesn't look good, or I think the attack is too miserable. . . If you violated the rules of nature in your previous life, you will be tortured like this in this life. In the early stage, Shou also kept humiliating and attacking. But because Gong had been tortured to the point of numbness by others, Gong even felt that the behavior he suffered was considered light. With just a little bit of warmth, Gong can grasp it like a moth to a flame. It was painful to watch.

It's very interesting, but some words are repeated several times. The doubts in the eyes for the first time can be replaced with other words. The plot is also very innovative. It starts from flashbacks and writes memories of the past, and the emotions are very smooth.

The writing is a little green, but the emotions are delicate enough and the rhythm is tight, suitable for immersive viewing. The main emotion is The story and environment rendering are well expressed. The narrative style is a bit immature. In the early stage, certain segments were repeatedly described to emphasize certain emotions, but it got better in the later stage. Some "narrations" in the third person are a bit abrupt, such as two hearts finally getting together, but they do not affect the reading experience; similarly, these situations gradually improve in the later stages. The author's writing ability has grown visibly.

I particularly like this kind of long-lasting emotion. It's delicate and not rash, and it doesn't make people feel inexplicable.

This is my favorite of the three books on the author's homepage. . The text basically prays for good harvest all the time, and I feel sick and sick. There are two big mountains pressing on me, one is the clan, and the other is the imperial power. Even with all the injuries, I still can't hide my splendor. . . At the beginning, He Lan was quite impersonal, especially like a childish primary school student who didn't know what to do when he met someone he liked, so he would just pull their hair or kick their stool. . . There's just no way around it. . After being dragged along like this for a while, the brainless Helan finally understood how to treat people well, and then began to carefully raise Broken Qinian. . The text is almost finished in the end. . Helan also took revenge for Qinian. . The extra chapter is pure sweetness, praying for happy daily life on the grassland. . If you don't want to be tortured, I actually feel like it doesn't matter if you just watch the extra chapter. . Mutual favor can be eaten. If you can accept that Qinian is the strong one, you can give it a try. Although Helan was a bit annoying in the early stage, he changed it very well later on. .

The whole thing has that classic feeling of redemption, beauty, weakness and misery. And the worst thing is the offense. Anyway, he has been miserable so far, so be careful in attack and control. Of course, it is good to be attacked. As for the insults and abuse in the introduction, it seems excessive, but compared with the previous experience of attack, it is just a drop of water (it means that people have been abused crazy, and it is like a primary school student to accept such operations). And basically, Shou understands his own feelings very quickly and then quickly enters the main line of heartache and redemption. Shou's character is that of a small sun and a large dog. But on the profile, I didn't match any of the character tags of Tong Gong. His coldness is actually numbness and resignation, and his strong desire to control is even more irrelevant now. I don't know if this label is for the later period, but in the early stage, he is completely a rag doll character.

It's a great book. It can be seen that the author has a strong literary foundation. The author is also very humble. The only flaw is that although the words are gorgeous in the early stage, the writing is a bit immature, but the overall novel is also very good!

Very little to see! Feelings are as smooth as a long stream of water ୧ʕ•̀ᴥ•́ʔ୨I will continue to squat (take out a small bench) (sit down) (knock on the empty bowl)

The writing is quite good. You can read the love and partiality of each other and attack and control (in my opinion). Gong is really sick and weak. Come on, the author. I look forward to the next one [Blowing Kisses]

Woohoo, so pretty! ! ! The descriptions are delicate and the plots are rich. It's too hard to hunt for treasures. You must be happy. I hope they will get better and better in the future!

Super beautiful, I really like this kind of unwavering love! ! I just love love that goes both ways! Nian Nian is really super cute hahahahaha, and we congratulate Danyu too, he really looks like a big dog hahaha

Little lovers 99 don't explain

Don't be dissuaded by the immature approach in the past. Looking back, I think both sisters who really dote on each other and sisters who dote on each other but are a little aggressive can watch it.

Sweet honey, I love you little couple!

The emotions are very delicate, and it describes the helplessness in the struggle between an individual and his family.

It's so sour [I'm about to cry] that I feel uncomfortable in my heart. The emotions are written very delicately. I like this process of slow exploration.

Nice! Nice! Nice!

Very nice novel

It's so fragrant, it's like a fairy The young couple is like this 99

Very good, it made me cry a lot

Now that I have seen the fox part, I want to see Shan Yu go to the Central Plains to save Nian Nian.

Wow woo 1 baby, it's really miserable. I hope you two can have a good time, 0 baby [crying][shy][shy]

He's good-looking but too pathetic for his attack. Fortunately, he has Shou accompanying him [crying]

It really suits my taste! [Laughing] I'm really sad why I didn't meet Niannian and Aheng earlier! [Almost crying] Why didn't I meet my wife earlier [crying]

It's okay. It's the first time I've seen the extra chapter about the twenty-four solar terms. It's very heartwarming.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking