Straight Male Passerby a Just Wants to Follow the Plot [Quickly Pass Through]

I feel that the author will read the comments carefully, so I give five stars for encouragement. How should I put it, I feel that the characters are a bit flat, as if they have set a framework and then filled it in through a series of means. It is a bit stiff. How can a straight man become soft-hearted so easily? The author has always emphasized straight men, but the protagonist softens too quickly. Gong only pretends to be soft-hearted. Is it rare that he doesn't know the consequences of being soft-hearted? Although it was said that the memory was erased by the system, you must know that readers have memories. If one sentence cannot make the readers agree, I thought that if you are a straight man, you should write well. Through the development of the plot, you will struggle with your heart and change your approach. There is also the plane of the little marquis. Why is it not an only son? I have been waiting for this sentence, but there is no It feels like selfishness. Whether I thought about it or not depends on the author. I thought he could compromise on anything except leaving, but he couldn't help but give in if he was threatened. I really like this kind of setting. The author just wants to see it. He only wants to get it, but doesn't pay more for it. Many people care about the reputation of marriage in modern times, not to mention the only son of a marquis in ancient times. Personal thoughts But the fact that I have read it for so long shows that the author's writing is pretty good. But the more I read, the more I think about it, and then I can no longer follow it. I will wait for the author's next book, and I hope it will get better and better. Don't change yourself because of bad reviews, but you can also read more similar articles and take the essence and discard the dross.

I struggled with this review for a long time. I wanted to give it one star at first, but I didn't feel very good about it, so I ordered three stars. I hesitated again, so I gave it five stars. Logically speaking, it's a free article, so I didn't like it, so I just returned it, but I felt too aggrieved, so let's talk about it. I have seen that the writing in the first world was average. I am not sensitive to this. I think it is okay. I feel that the first world is okay and I have the desire to watch it. But in the second world, I feel really frustrated. The male protagonist doesn't love the protagonist at all, does he? The impression given to me is that I treat him as a possession, and treat his anger as a little temper that I find cute, ha! Just like the anger of humans towards small animals, they just think oh, how cute! I felt really depressed when I watched it. I even thought to some extremes that if I were treated like that, I would just want to kill the other person or myself. I also know that there may be reasons for the first time or something, and there may be some plot later, but I really can't stand it, and I feel so frustrated. This is my true opinion. I was actually very interested in the first world when I saw it. My comments may not be very good, so please forgive me.

This book is really good, but when I saw other books, I was a little embarrassed, but not this one. The writing is pretty good. It's a bit warm, and then I read in the book that the second world is crazier, so I read it from the second world. The plot is very coherent and very interesting. I'm currently working on the first world.

Starting from the third world, I started to delete my memories, and I couldn't stand the fact that I didn't mention the memory deletion process before. I re-read the introduction and there is no mention of memory deletion at the beginning.

Beautiful and well written

Very good, very good

Good! Good! So beautiful 👀 ´ₒ⦁⩊⦁ₒ`

Very interesting, the plot is attractive

Very pure love, very tender

Big cheers for the author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Look good, good, good, good [love]

It's very pretty. Can I have some dessert?

The third small world begins by erasing memories and stops here. Babies who cannot accept the erasure of memories can also avoid lightning.

Why do I have no memory after starting from the third world?

It's fun, it feels like redeeming each other a little bit

It looks good, come on, come on, come on, you can do it

Very beautiful, sweet writing, thank you to the author

Come on, good-looking teacher! [Blowing kiss]

It looks good, but I have little talent and knowledge. What I want to say is that it looks good and is very comfortable.

The plot is quite good, and the author has a sense of life. He also said that he has a goal of one million words. For this goal, I have to give it five stars.

It's very interesting, and it's very well written for everyone (灬º‿º灬)♡