Water Margin: Entry Plunder, First Kill Tiangang Disha

This description, this writing is amazing, exciting, full of sense of plot substitution, top-notch intelligence, the system appears just right, the writing is wonderful, very good, I love reading it You can't read more than 50 chapters at a time, because the more you read, the more you realize that it basically repeats the description of the battles and is boring. I always feel that something is missing.

It must be epic and good-looking. I am personally a super picky eater and a super old bookworm (I have changed this account twice). I can objectively evaluate this book. In terms of plot, the handling of things is very clear and detailed. The fighting is also exciting, and the protagonist has a brain. We will also adopt pertinent suggestions. The system is a very ancient Chinese-style system, with nothing particularly outstanding, like plug-ins. The character descriptions are also very full, and the arrangement and positioning of each character is very clear. However, because it is an ancient Chinese-style system, the overall trend of the novel is relatively hard, and it mainly depends on personal taste. The summary is that it is very beautiful, and it can be called the gold found in 10 miles.

After reading the seventy-sixth chapter, I found no poisonous points. The characters' personalities are quite successful. They act cautiously and decisively. The insight and layout of the human nature of the situation are amazing. The logic is rigorous. It is a good book. Just killing one Tiangang and three earthly evil spirits has more than a dozen skill effects and combined skill effects, which is already a bit messy. After that, if you continue to kill more than a hundred Tiangang earthly evil stars, the skills may become more complicated. I hope that various skills can be integrated into a systematic and comprehensive combat system. In terms of skills, it is best to integrate them into several powerful skills.

The score of 7.8 Is really low. It seems that the writing is very good so far. I don't know why the score is so low. A rare masterpiece in Tomato. The writing style is a bit vernacular, and the image of the Water Margin characters is also well written. I have finally conquered the Four Mountains, and I am looking forward to my favorite part of farming development.

Brother, it's just so well written that I can't stand it. The gorgeous words and appropriate wording are not refreshing when piled up, and the writing feels like a swish. It's just so well written. I am used to eating radish and green vegetables, but you serve me a table of delicacies from the mountains and sea. As the saying goes, wild boars can't eat healthy food, so that's what happened to me.

So pretty, so pretty! It's rare to see such a beautiful book. I hope the brothers who read my comments can give me some time to read what I said. If you are tired of reading mindless and cool novels, but don't want to read overly brain-burning suspense novels, this book is very suitable for brothers. It's great. The protagonist is very powerful. Although the plug-ins are powerful, the protagonist has worked hard to do it time and time again. The rhythm of the whole text is very good, it is refreshing where it should be, and detailed where it should be. It feels like a trumpet account opened by a boss. Let's talk about characterization. It's very powerful, the author's writing skills are really great. There are so many characters in Water Margin, but the author controls the rhythm very well, with clear organization and complete logic, so that it does not feel confusing at all. Writing style. To be honest, there is really nothing to say about the author's writing style. When he writes about scenes, he can set things off, when he writes about things, he thinks about people, when he writes about people meeting group portraits, when he writes about group portraits entering troubled times. Get blood where it should be hot, and be cool where it should be cool. Brothers, if you want to read a truly enjoyable article, just follow the author's protagonist and read it!

A rare and good book, in which there are pitiful people, hateful people, deplorable people and deplorable people! I have never read the original work of Water Margin, but I remember watching the TV series when I was a child, and I thought it was full of heroes, and they gathered together in the Liangshan Mountains! How happy it is to eat big mouthfuls of meat and big bowls of wine! I just feel that the Song Dynasty is weak and incompetent, the officialdom is dark, I hate Song Jiang for being selfish, and it is pity that General 108 will accompany him to his death! When I read it today, I felt like where did the heroes come from? They were just a bunch of monsters and monsters. How many real good men are there? The author's writing just makes me feel full and hearty!

I can't say it's perfect, it's as fun as Fu Zhan, it just depends on how it's written later.

I have read more than 30 chapters. The writing is good, the details are well described, and the characters are well drawn. I will continue to maintain this book as a 9. The world framework evolved from the novel Water Margin. It is not a historical text, it is just made up. The author has also explained this, and the parts that are not historical cannot be used as points of criticism. Come on write [like]

The writing is good, the subject matter is very novel, the author's writing style is also good, but there are too many skills now and I can't remember it. Is it possible to integrate it at some time? The characterization is also good, a masterpiece.

It's wonderful, the characters don't talk much, they don't talk too much when they encounter problems, they just find ways to solve them. There are girls in the article. Finally, the characters are very three-dimensional. Girls also have their own ideas and career ambitions. Finally, it is not a cliché plot that is picked up by bullies. The characters are vivid and have their own characteristics...

This is the most beautiful Water Margin fanfic I have ever read. The characters are well portrayed and the characters of the minor characters are also highlighted. If the later parts are as good as the previous ones, it would be a good book. Unfortunately, with the framework of Water Margin, it cannot be regarded as a masterpiece.

I used to think that Water Margin was a novel that Ren Yuan could read, but after the founding of the country, it felt too cumbersome and unreadable. The chapters so far are still very good, with flesh and blood, and the emotional descriptions of the characters are also more delicate. It doesn't drag on, and you kill when you need to. Except for a few plots that feel a bit mediocre, there's nothing wrong with me, old man, just read it, and it will give you a good review.

Five stars first. Finally, there is a book in which the main character is not all the 108 generals from Liangshan, but also those who killed, set fire to, and cannibalized human flesh. It really broke my heart. The good thing about this book is that both the protagonist and the supporting characters have online IQs. They are not the fateful protagonist "Long Aotian". The protagonist has a growth process and is not at the peak from the beginning. I was greatly disappointed, and more and more I "pretended to be sophisticated" for the sake of being "profound", but in reality I didn't see how sophisticated the protagonist was. After Wuyou Cave came out, I wanted to kill him three times. The people in Wuyou Cave were all pawns pushed out by high-ranking officials and nobles. So what if I killed them all? Just introduce a group of "spokespersons". If the author wanted to show the protagonist's scheming and foresight, he wanted to kill the person behind Wuyou Cave, so that it would be a deterrent. Killing the minions in Wuyou Cave will only expose your own power and manpower, and will not change anything. Also, the conversation with Li Sisi felt too pretentious. I didn't think the protagonist was awesome, I just felt awkward. If you want to write the protagonist as a knight-errant who enjoys revenge and revenge, then the protagonist's behavior can be understood. But before, the protagonist was always written as a tycoon who competes in the world. After Wuyou Cave was revealed, his words and deeds were too contradictory. The character collapsed, and the novel was not far from collapse.

It's good to watch, but it's too little and not enough to watch. The main character's changes in mentality are well written, and the character creation is also good. I look forward to the main character making his own name in the future. Now I'm feeling itchy when I watch An Zurou's development period [shy][shy]

The author put a lot of thought into it! ! ! It's so exciting, but I have a small suggestion. It's better to keep the superimposed entries simple and concise. A long and lengthy introduction weakens the development of the story @ Eat Iron Tu Huo Cui Sheng Mound [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] Come on👏

The overall description is okay, some places have some flavor of the original work of Water Margin, the plot progress is a bit slow (too much description, but it is quite acceptable), and I personally feel that some parts are not reasonable. For example, a few people were frightened by the Zhaojiazhuang at the beginning. Later, Shi Jin was so angry that he added more fire to Shizhuang. He did not listen to Zhu Wu's advice and chased Li Ji. When he and the protagonist chased Zhu Wu and three people, then Three people fell into a chain trap (this chain trap is quite exquisite) [face covering]. At this time, the protagonist is nearby. It would be a coincidence if the trap was laid in advance. Yang Chun is being chased later. Since he is chasing Yang Chun, there are traps laid out in advance [Thinking]. The above is just my personal opinion. Generally speaking, the author's writing and creativity are quite good. Come on [Like]

It's so beautiful. It's much better than the author's previous original work. I can't stop reading it, linking one link after another. It's so capable. It's not only delicate and delicate, but also the style is first-rate. The author is also very active. It really makes me happy [Like]

The writing style is the old pretentious Jiahao style, but the content is quite novel. I want to see what kind of monsters can be synthesized.

The writing is quite coherent~ Goldfinger is the most detailed description I have ever seen~ The subject matter is also very novel~ I didn't expect it to be novel~ Come on, author~ Write it carefully later~ Sublimate it~ Don't fall into the cliche~ Stay calm~ Concept~ Pattern~ Try to figure this out~ At this stage, you should think more about how others write ~ and then write your own stuff ~ be unconventional ~ relax ~ there are too many regrets in Water Margin ~ 108 characters ~ there are too many story lines to tell ~ my language organization ability is limited ~ I can only give a general idea Thoughts~ In other words, I hope this book is good~ I hope I can see the plot I want to see~ Just like Madara in Naruto~Obito~Kisaki Kisame~Scorpion~Deidara~Kimimaro thought he was the villain at first glance~I felt he had a different stance after reading it~I felt a bit sad after reading it again ~I can understand it later, but I will slowly come back to it because of the different standpoints~ It is not just a book that is thought-provoking~ But a book that can make people think about it deserves to be recommended~ and remembered~ The author, I really think this book has great potential~ Come on~ Go ahead~

The writing is good, the characters are three-dimensional and full, and the protagonist's arrogant calculations, boldness and hegemony all the way, show his sharpness. I can see that the background of the opening chapter has the meaning of studying the family history, and it can attract readers more from the current mainstream point. It also has an appropriate and thoughtful interpretation of the original Water Margin characters. It does not compare with the original work and uses modern white language. The text restores and reproduces the characters and inner monologues of the stars of Tiangang and Earth to a large extent. Shi Jin is youthful and frivolous, lonely and courageous, Lu Zhishen is open-minded and generous, pity all living beings, Zhu Wu's clever calculations, and Li Zhong's deception. After reading this, I am looking forward to this book more and more. I hope the author can persevere, and I hope other viewers will enjoy it with their heart.

The killing was very enjoyable and in line with the values ​​of ordinary people. Those beasts with human faces and animal hearts should be treated with the most brutal methods. I look forward to seeing Li Kui and Wu die in the Song Jiang way. These three people must bear the greatest responsibility for the tragedy of Hu Sanniang [smile]

When I first read it, I thought it was a traditional fanfic, so I continued reading it with the idea that I could read it, but I didn't expect that it gave me a big surprise. I usually don't have hope for novels on Tomato that deal with family emotions. After all, the families in many novels are not as real as primary school students' compositions. And this book just gave me a way to deal with real emotions. Parents truly love their children without saying too much, and all their actions have reasons. They may not have read many books, but they are very wise in doing things. Secondly, this book combines transcendence and destiny, which really gives me the feeling that Water Margin should be like without any sense of violation. The later martial arts fight scenes themselves are also a test for this kind of book. Every fight scene in this book is very exciting. This is the only fight scene in this book that makes me very excited. I will not miss every fight scene. [I just suggest to the author that there should not be too many fight scenes about Xiao Zha San or ordinary evil spirits, as it will lower the character of the protagonist]. Also, can the author update five times a day? Three updates are not enough.

Not bad, there is no other kind of invincibility, it has the appearance of a little hunter slowly rising up, and the enemies are not infinitely stupid. Also, the author's descriptions before and after the fight and during the fight are very good. [Eat melon]

It is actually a masterpiece by a fan of Water Margin. The protagonist has a very charming personality. Originally, it may have been because I watched Water Margin when I was a child. When the protagonist told me to kill all the Tiangang and Disha one by one, I felt a little regretful and intolerable. However, the author is awesome at distinguishing between good and evil. Good people have good endings, and bad people have bad endings. When Wu Song died, I was equally sad, but writing from the author's perspective, it felt very correct, that is to say, the ending was not written by the author, but the character Wu Song gave himself an ending. Very exciting

It is well detailed and does not have the psychological descriptions of a bunch of supporting characters in other novels, which is not watery. The perspective closely follows the protagonist. The plot is also quite interesting.

Not bad, but too detailed. It feels like when writing a short biography of a screenplay, there is less room for the reader's imagination, and it's too much to go too far. I always want to jump and watch. A true master's work would not have this idea, because the plot is fascinating

Among the Water Margin fanfics I have read in recent years, the quality of this book is already top-notch, and the author's control of the location and plot in the book is not limited to one Water Margin, but the entire country of the Song Dynasty, and some characters who have been briefly mentioned are also depicted. Although some battle scenes are overly descriptive, compared to most Water Margin fanfiction, it is already in an insurmountable position. Of course, hundreds of people read hundreds of people's feelings, and their preferences are all determined by the readers' inner self-control. As for the direction of the characters in the book, the author has his own measurement.

Yes, in Tomato, the quality counts and the writing is good. The only shortcoming may be that this is a systematic text and lacks a sense of reality. However, there is no way that the pace of the entire online text is so fast. This is not its problem, but the change in the reading habits of the whole people.

Although the characters are different from the original work, they are also well developed. The best thing is the description of the battle, which is amazing. You can have pictures when listening to the book. It is so well written. What makes it uncomfortable to look at is Kong. In a long scene, I wish I could describe the environment, every person, every movement, and every expression clearly. Not repeating can also be annoying.