Honkai: Star Rail: The Corridor of Time and Space

It is suspected to be created by AI. Secondly, the characters are OOC, and then the description of the movie viewing is completely incomprehensible. A few sentences of AI-created poems summarize the character's experience, which only makes people feel awkward rather than good writing. Also, the content of the movie is too confusing. Five Heroes on the Cloud jumps to a certain character in Pinoconi and then jumps to the year 700 to see Yuan Yuan and Igor befriending. Before the previous one has been read, it is replaced by the next completely unrelated content. The order is messed up.

(Chased by LOFTER) I'd give it a four-point rating. The author can choose to write longer stories, such as character reactions and content, etc., But the subject matter is very novel. I've only seen this one so far, so I can look forward to the future. Come on!

The chapters are not very coherent, and it is better to treat them as individuals. If you jump around, it will seem very confusing. It is a bit tiring to read a long paragraph. The characters' reactions are relatively simple, and there are always the same few characters. The advantage is that I don't make random jokes or do embarrassing things.

Well, I rarely give low ⭐️, but you are so messed up that I can't understand it. I'm confused just by looking at it.

It looks good. I just give the author five points. You can try it if it looks good or not.

It's so confusing, I can't connect the previous and previous chapters at all.

Very good, just a bit short.

I can't stand it anymore, it's too messy

Don't know what to write?

Can't finish writing! The new video has the same conversation again! What? Amnesia?