Elves: the Way of Evil

It's pretty good, but the protagonist is always very tight. I think the dark text can be loosened up a bit, otherwise it will become a slave to the inextricable emotion of greed for strength. The rest is okay, the machinations, calculations, killings and decisiveness are good, and the writing of the unpopular elves is also very appropriate. Also, the elves are the protagonist's only emotional sustenance in the world. There can be more interaction and the image of each elf can be made more three-dimensional.

Classic dark Pokémon. It's good-looking. I hope it can continue like this without a female protagonist. There is no unnecessary dialogue with the female. It's very satisfying. The only drawback is that the author is not a nuclear-powered donkey. Five stars for you. Come on, I hope it will get better and better.

He has a good personality, but the plot seems deliberate. He always meets and helps people close to the mission target. I need to clear my name. I just found an excuse to owe a woman a favor.

A very good dark novel, with IQ but no ink, and no heroine. The emotional intelligence of the protagonist is as good as an adult banana. I recommend speeding up the pace, making the elves and characters more three-dimensional, and hurrying up. [Crying] [Crying] It's not enough [I'm about to cry] In Chapter 672, the protagonist sent out a Pokémon with good attack power and a Pokémon with good defense power to cover each other. This is the most common tactic. It can be praised to the heavens [face covering] as if it was written by AI.

Darkness is well written, and the character of the protagonist is ok. I hope it can be strengthened in the future. The main thing for elves is the accumulation of resources and skill training and digestion. Currently, there are no key resources for cultivation. Black-eyed crocodile was the initial ace and the sparring elves against Du Juan were almost defeated, so the resources are not enough, so there are not enough resources. With a qualified description, resources are more important, and there is also identity. If you give the alliance's direct lineage status, can you get the Yusan family, and the core members of the Rockets. If you give these identities, you can also describe it a little bit. For example, you can give more in exchange for resources, and you can get cheaper in exchange for resources. It's a little bit trivial. Come on, the author.

Such a beautiful Pokémon novel only has a score of 7.2. What did the people who rated it think? This book is more than a little better than those weird Pokémon on the market. It can be said to crush most similar works.

The author is good at using idioms to sublimate the content of the article. The fighting scenes in the article are particularly exciting and are more advanced than the boring fighting scenes in some elf novels. The protagonist's strength will not be reduced too much due to pressure on the progress. I can also see the protagonist grow up, from being on the same level to being rare to being crushed, which is very immersive and very refreshing. The character of Jiang Han, who is calm, highly intelligent and decisive in killing, is well portrayed, and there are no outstanding points so far. The appearance of the three evil dragons probably came very late, but it also conforms to the process from a grassroots level to having a quasi-god. It is very realistic, and the authenticity is a plus point for this book. It's an excellent elf novel, but I don't know why it's rated so low.

I had nothing to do and read the title, so I clicked on it. Unexpectedly, it turned out to be very to my liking. I have been a fan of the book for many years. This book is really good. It ranks at the top of the fanfics I read. Here are some suggestions: 1. The protagonist's superpower improvement can be described in detail. 2. I feel like you should prepare two sets of elves when you are on Team Rocket. Isn't this easy to see through? 3. Personally, I feel that when I went on a mission with the Rockets leaders, I made Corona a bit stupid. In fact, I could make him smarter to sublimate it. The writing style of this book is indeed good. Some readers who want to read it can give it a try. It is indeed good. I give it five stars.

Ouch, my god, this author is also awesome. The protagonist is uniquely beautiful, and the fighting scenes are unique. They are more beautiful than other Pokémon books I have read before. Little girls must support them.

A good book, much better than that Pirates Beginning and that dog-licking novel.

There are a few inexplicable things. First of all, the illustrated book is used as a system, and things that have not been researched can be scanned out. There is also the inexplicable use of telepathy before becoming a superpower, and the elves and fighting styles are very recognizable but not concealed. The identity of Team Rocket has been against Yulongdu before, but then there is no doubt about the Caiyu Conference against Yulongdu. It feels a bit unreasonable, but the overall feeling is okay. There is no heroine and no ambiguity. She is ruthless and does not overwhelm the combat power.

Come on, author, I think it is very good compared to most Pokémon novels. There are more than a hundred chapters without skipping a chapter. It is very readable. Don't pay attention to them. I hope the novel can be longer and not become a cool novel later. Just give the protagonist one or two evil beasts in the later stage. There are still many evil beasts. I hope they are not the kind to be conquered without brains. Can you add Absol, Red Flame Roaring Tiger, or Colt Saber Soldier to the protagonist?

How can I put it this way? Overall it's okay. As long as you read it without thinking, it's still a very good dark novel. There are only a few protagonists, elves, in both black and white. The author's identity is not exposed because of the great care of the author. As I said, overall it's okay.

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I wipe it, it feels so good🤧🤧🤧Not enough, Baozi🥺🥺 I enjoyed watching it, the plot is quite coherent, the purpose is very clear, and the writing is not boring or dull at all. . . After that, um, I felt like I was pretending, 🤧

I really like this kind of thing, I'll give it 5 stars first, and I'll look at it later. I'm really speechless. I even wrote a chapter where Miss Joy wants to confess her love, and then the protagonist says she wants to be his enemy. No fool is that stupid. If you give up, the protagonist has become a slave to power.

It's so beautiful. The author begs me to have a heroine [sending my heart]

It's awesome, the content is neither old-fashioned nor novel, but it can be seen that the author is very careful.

This kind of dark writing is very interesting. The author's writing style is very logical and worth reading.

It's good to watch, I just like watching Dark Pokémon. The main character is decisive in killing and not annoying [laughs]

It's a very good Pokémon fanbook, but no one has commented on it.

The reason for deducting one star is because the section on monster power does not indicate whether to use normal or fighting skills to defeat Ghost. Squid also uses super skills to defeat Nura. It is not suppressed like Mewtwo defeats Coyote. When the levels are still about the same, it can be said to be able to deal damage, but the effect should not be very good. When I conquered the first two Pokémon, it was well received [Like][Like]

I feel it is a masterpiece among Pokémon fanfics, with a score of 7.4, Which is a bit low, but a woman appears in the latest chapter, and once she gets there, the plot becomes a bit strange, and this character is not as likable as the previous female characters. The author didn't say whether there is a female protagonist or not. This should be the female protagonist. There were no female characters who appeared in the movie as much as her in the past.

It feels good, but I feel that some small details can be done better. For example, when the protagonist walks somewhere and encounters a festival, I feel that I can say that I have made preparations in advance. This can make the protagonist feel smarter. After all, isn't it said that he is the first place in the 15th issue? Then I don't understand why the gym leaders and other people the protagonist meets look down on the protagonist at first. When fighting a gym, they have to lose one before they start to take it seriously. Once or twice is okay, but if there are more, it seems that these people are fools, and even the protagonist feels stupid.

Um. I tied it. The author's description is very comfortable to watch. I like the plot so far. I really like this feeling that it looks like a double agent but is actually egoistic. Then I don't want to have a female protagonist. I always feel that the male protagonist's character can't accommodate anyone else except himself and the elves. I don't know what to say! Five stars means love. If there was no heroine, I would keep pursuing him😌It's actually quite reassuring. The author's writing for the hero is too straight. Urgent, urgent, author please update soon [crying] I rely on these three chapters to survive every morning at eight in the morning [crying][crying][crying][crying] Chapter 666! [Please update]

Score is low The routines in Pokémon novels up to now are pretty much the same. Either look for new ideas from the setting, or start with the writing style and rhythm. This book has a pretty good rhythm The content is substantial, not tiring, and the pace is reasonable. The progress is very smooth, so some minor problems can be ignored. It can be regarded as one of the best recent Pokémon novels written by Yang Persimmon.

It's particularly good-looking compared to other dark articles on Tomato.

It's good-looking, it feels cool but not brainless. It occasionally has a little bit of daily warmth. The protagonist is decisive and strength-oriented. This article doesn't have overwhelming negative emotions like the dark articles I've seen before. So far, I feel that it's quite good-looking. It can be used in battles and daily activities. It's good not to have a heroine. The protagonist has no emotional intelligence. Is this the price of being strong? But it's good

Not bad, not bad. In the mid-term, only Raid will be available.

Pokémon or Darkness looks comfortable