Southern Archives: Zhang Haixia Will Not Die Today

I came from 🫘 to 🍅. I like what the teacher wrote very much. I have a few suggestions: The teacher really likes to use the words "laughing/crazy/standing very steady", which appear too many times, which affects the perception... And "beautiful, frivolous, in need of a beating, and inappropriate", which appear so densely, and are a bit too hard. However, I still look forward to the teacher's follow-up updates. I hope the writing will get better and better [blowing kiss]

The emotions written by the teacher are so real and immersive, and they are not OOC at all. He brought Brother Zhang to life and made me want to cry. They are all little bitter gourds [crying][crying][crying] Teacher, I will always follow your [love]

The writing style is very natural and the characters are very close to each other. I look forward to the plot behind it [Sending my heart] The author writes very well. The most difficult part of the whole book is how to reverse the situation, successfully destroy the conspiracy, and save the shrimp boy when the conditions and information are known. I have read a lot of similar articles recently, but the handling of this part is a bit unsatisfactory. When Xiao Zhang went back to the past, his The solution is not to blindly resist alone, but to give Zhang Haixia tips from the smallest details, slowly assist and subtly protect them as they move forward. Only in this way can the three of them break the situation together, and the plot will be more reasonable and natural. If Xiaoxia Xiao Zai really survived in the end, then will Xiao Brother Zhang disappear? Although Zhang Haiyan did not die from the beginning to the end, Xiao Zhang's maturity was partly affected by the death of Xiao Zhang. If Xiao Xiao had always been around, Zhang Haiyan might not be able to become Xiao Zhang, so changing the ending, Xiao Zhang How to deal with this person is really a question. Should he teach Zhang Haiyan to mature, retire and return to his own timeline to see the awakened shrimp, or should he save Yanxia's life in the past timeline, sacrifice himself, and let Zhang Haiyan who is with Zhang Haixia become the little brother Zhang later? I look forward to the author's upcoming plot, and I must watch it until the finale.

Invincible is super good-looking, and the teacher is really good at writing. The characters are not OOC at all, and they are completely brought to life. Zhang Haixia is smart and Zhang Hailou is naughty. I will always support the teacher!

I came here from Douyin to follow up. The author's writing is really great. Every time I see Hai Yan's little actions a hundred years later, I feel so sad. Seeing the young Hai Yan being pampered and protected by sea shrimps, Hai Yan a hundred years later must be particularly jealous and sad. I am looking forward to the following plot. (Insert a digression: Hai Yan travels back a hundred years later to change history. Is there a corresponding price to be paid for changing history?)

It directly belongs to the level of Zhenquan divine text! ! ! Everyone fits the character perfectly, and the writing is so good💥Teacher, I will always follow you

It's very interesting. I started reading it in July. This book is really interesting. It has a touch of sadness. It makes my eyes feel a little uncomfortable when I read it [crying]. Neither the future Brother Zhang nor the current Haiyan Sea Shrimp are OOC. Yan is also growing up slowly [crying] [crying]

The teacher's writing is so detailed that it can be used as a popular text. I hope the teacher will update it every day. It is super beautiful and delicious😋.

It looked like I had seen the dawn of sunshine during the continuous rainy season. The pains in my bones in my memory were picked out little by little, and they were ironed and solid by the sun. Lou Zai didn't lack the courage to try again, so he gave him another chance. Immortal product!

Nice looking, with a touch of sourness.

It's a very good-looking, very rigorous, double-qiang novel that is both intelligent and powerful. [Love] [Love] The characters are drawn very carefully, and the writing is precise. Some places are a bit profound hahaha. I just started the novel, and my mood has been relatively low in the first few chapters, with a touch of sadness. I look forward to a relaxing section to take a breather. Come on, Dad! !

I spent two nights watching it. I reviewed the latest one today as soon as I finished it. It's really awesome and beautiful! The writing is good, the plot is also good, and it's really to your liking! Just seeing it makes my heart ache, it hurts so much😣😣😭

Author, I beg you to let them all live, it makes my heart hurt😦

A sacred book is slowly being born

A book that really appeals to my taste [Adoration]

This is the taste. There is no need for any description of love and love, he is just cleaning up the mess of his past self so that he can live completely. If Haixia knew that Hailou suffered so much and suffered so many crimes later on, how heartbroken he would be!

The article is great and the characters are very fitting. I don't feel OOC at all. The author is great. I'll wait for the update [please update]

Haha, it looks good, update soon

It feels super in line with the character

Nice looking, very new angle Not bad, even though I took the fake death drug, I still found a way, but it didn't work. The third adjutant

Please🙏No, let them live well

Very nice, but why does Brother Zhang talk less?

I want to know why the young Hailou is still being kept secret. He passively carries out your orders without knowing the consequences of what he does. Why?

Very well written. Come on, wow!

It's really good-looking and fits the characters well. Come on, teacher (๓´˘`๓)

I like it so much, I really like the big update!

The lady knows how to write. The characters are really sweet and delicate.

In line with the personality and logical. The character is not ruined, it looks good. If you want to read good writing, read this book.

This is one of the fanfics I have read so far. The characters and narrative style are more in line with the original work. I look forward to the follow-up~(✧◡✧)~

Okay, okay, this book fits their characters very well, and the author writes it very well, and it's beautiful [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] It's so well written, how come there are so few people rating it [crying][crying][crying]