Douluo Dalu: I, Oscar, Become a Cultivator's Disciple

I can see that I want to write something new, but I still look forward to the next book. First, joining a group is a very helpless choice and very bad. Second, the route of the original work is very wrong. Without the halo of the protagonist, Shrek would have died eight hundred times. Third, the strength setting of the male protagonist is wrong. Since the physical training technique is so powerful, the protagonist's physical body should not be fragile. This is a paradox. Moreover, Douluo is very weak, and the protagonist should be stronger. The strength is to set the ultimate body-refining Douluo combat power, but I don't know my position, and I lack special effects. Fourth, Wuhun Palace is a very good route. The protagonist is a powerful sect leader. He should not be afraid of struggle. He can also fully understand the world and introduce new things, which is more conducive to the male protagonist. Fifth, the child's strength improvement must be reasonable. Have you really considered this speed? Sixth, the protagonist should have power, not a power that needs to be managed, but a lackey, and a lackey is needed. Otherwise, worrying about money is not in line with the pursuit of strength.

The author could have replaced Oscar's girlfriend with Zhu Zhuqing

Very nice!!! The setting is very novel, and the characters in the original book are not messed up. Come on, author, you will definitely achieve good results.