Demon Slayer: Saving Kanae from the Start, Making Doma Cry

First of all, this posture is a harem story. Then the author collapsed when he wrote Tong Mo. I always felt it was weird. He was written as a common vicious villain, but his characteristics were not written out. It is super weird. Does Tong Mo look like the protagonist with resentment???? I find it absurd. He is really born, but he also has a really distinctive personality. I personally think he is a unique villain who makes people hate him, but does not make him feel low. The author's Tong Mo is too low, and it seems that the protagonist is not up to par. (Personal opinion)

It's quite good-looking, there's no running story, the characters are pretty consistent with the original work, and the emotional lines are gradual and not sudden and strange (ps. I'm a butterfly sister). It's a rare good article. I hope the author can maintain this quality and level, and the progress will be slower.

Who is the heroine?

There are many strange points. One is that Tong Mo has no emotions, so how can he look at the protagonist with resentment? The other is that the protagonist is born with stripes, and his strength and speed are not bad. Why is he so weak that he almost collapses not long after opening the world?

My stomach hurts when I see it

The most annoying thing is this kind of fan fiction, where the protagonist is no different from the aboriginal in the plot. Just write it, don't make the protagonist look like a fool. The plot of Tong Mo was really disgusting, and the characters were written wrong.

There are many places that are different from the original work. I don't know if it is intentional by the author. Also, there are too many emotional lines written. The progress of the main line is a bit slow.

Not recommended, originally it was good, but the character design fell apart, and the principle is wrong, so I don't recommend it.

The protagonist feels like a fool. He knows that technology is backward and he recommends cannons and machine guns. I really don't know what he thinks. He also says why he doesn't use a phone. You think it's funny or not? I'm speechless.

It's a very nice book, and the emotional scenes are well described!