Tomb Raider Notes: Do You Believe I Came Here for a Trip?

The content of the story is novel. The novel is well written, but there are too many adjectives.

A small part of the plot is found among a lot of adjectives

The content and subject matter are quite good, but the content in some chapters is too long. You can consider deleting unimportant plots or subsections. Don't squeeze a small plot into one paragraph, which makes people feel a little dizzy (｡•ˇ‸ˇ•｡)

There are many situational adjectives, slow-motion analysis, situational analysis. And because Zhang Yikuan was lucky, he was taken to the agency

The luck value setting is still very novel, but Aning did not appear in the Lu Palace. Logically speaking, Aning should not know Zhang Yikuan, and Zhang Yikuan should not know Aning. However, in the Xisha Undersea Tomb, Aning felt that they knew each other as soon as they appeared, and Aning also knew everything that happened in the Lu Palace. First, let's talk about how Zhang Yikang, an ordinary person, could get acquainted with foreign mercenary tomb robbers. Moreover, it is impossible for the characters who appear in Lu Palace to be in the same camp as what happened in Tilu Palace.

It's very interesting, but one paragraph is too long, and my eyes are a little tired from reading it. I could use more chapters. I see that Da Da has written many books, most of which are serialized. Da Da Wan Wan Tian Yao was so busy that this book got stuck. ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅

He seems to be a crispy college student, but he contains an incredible "magic power" behind his back. The male protagonist's personality is really like that of an ordinary student who has just emerged from society. I am looking forward to the plot that follows.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhs the writing is novice and vividly shows the changes in the protagonist's mentality. It's also very enjoyable to watch, no need to use your brain. Run quickly [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] The plot behind is inconsistent and confusing.

So what is the bloodline of Crispy Skin? ? ? Zhang family?

It's still pretty good-looking, and the content is quite novel. This is the first time I have felt this way after reading novels for so many years. But there is one thing to say. Author, there are several repetitions in it, please hurry up and do it.

It's good, but there are a lot of repetitions.

It's beautiful, super, super beautiful, so magical. Interesting

Come on, come on, come on

Not bad, the subject matter is very novel

I see it very well [smile]

Super good looking author, cheers

Very nice, no knife? So pretty, so pretty! ! ! ! ~~~~~

Very nice to look at and nice to listen to

Not bad, ok

[Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] I didn't expect to have such a physique

Yes, Goddess of Luck is blessing you

So beautiful. Love it.

The protagonist setting is very new, but the long paragraphs of the article are too tiring to read and not friendly to the eyes, so it is more suitable for listening.

The content is novel and the subject matter is good, but some places are too lengthy and repetitive.

Very interesting, logical and not brain-burning [thinking]

Good-looking (๑• . •๑). It depends on personal preference [laughing]

Not bad, I hope the next one will be even better. I don't know if the rest of it will be exciting or not. At that time, I only wanted to stay here. I hope it's good-looking and will continue to be good-looking.

It's beautiful. It's so beautiful. Show them all to me. If you don't see them, then I won't see them in vain.

Very good, depending on luck, ridiculously good.

In Chapter 155 or 156, I met Fatty Wu Xie and others. I thought I missed it, and I didn't see any accidents happening to the male protagonist. Why was the male protagonist the only one left in Chapter 157? [Awkward laugh]