[Group portrait] [Chaos] [Medium Demon High Martial Arts] [No system] [Multiple female protagonists] [Knife-less sweet story/I lied to you, there is knife and candy] [Not a fast-paced cool story] [Many settings, spread slowly]
If a life span is compared to one day, the darkest night is like the ignorance of a baby; the early morning is like the high-spiritedness of a young man; the sun at noon is like the fiery and heroic manhood; the evening glow is like the wisdom and character of an old man; at the end, the silent moon is like the old man walking in front of the coffin, quiet and natural.
All living beings have a lifespan, nothing more than this.
The life of the dead bird is like the endless day and the eternal night, intertwined with the sun and the moon, but incompatible with it.
Witness the life, tell the dead bird.
Eternal life, tell the dead bird.
The life that declares death, the bird that declares death!
Now in the world, all the heroes have risen together. The Rain Emperor killed the gods and established a country in the center. The emperor said: The rain collects water, and the water gathers into rivers, and the rivers carry boats, so it is called Tianfu Zeguo, that is, the kingdom of heaven; in the far north, the God of Machines suppresses the gods with great power, and divides the gods with endless weapons. They are pretentious and proclaim themselves gods above gods; the Curtain Chamber of Commerce uses wealth to carry the road, harvest forty-six countries, and uses force to suppress the heroes of all countries. No one can be promoted beyond the boundaries...
All these cannot be described in detail.
Only the death bird sees everything, its feathers cover the sky, its song breaks the sky, and its appearance has spread since ancient times to this day.
Look, look at you gentlemen, the bird that tells death first flutters its wings at the bottom of the earth, and the bird that calls death rises upward with the fire.
You all, please see, as time goes by, the world will forget, but the dead bird will not.
Reader comments
I think this book has a platinum status, I can't sleep at night, so I'll update it soon!
I highly recommend reading this book! Elements: "The Godfather" + Western/Eastern fantasy (combat power system, partial settings) + fictional world (similar to modern Western society)
It can be seen that this book is deeply influenced by "The Godfather", and some plots also have its shadow (or is it a replica?). The plot currently revolves around the three states of fog, rain and snow named after "water". The combat power structure combines the characteristics of Eastern and Western fantasy (the Eastern one is more urban with supernatural powers) The author's worldview setting has his own ingenuity, which can be seen to be different from the formulaic application of other assembly line works. I particularly like it🥰, not to mention that the settings of the three states of fog, rain and snow are "a bit" "referenced to the three big G's of reality" hahaha.
In terms of plot, it is currently a fusion of "The Godfather" + what the author wants to write. It is a bit cool (the protagonist's golden finger is very straightforward, like the old man with the ring), but standing on the shoulders of giants, it is still exciting enough. The author's writing style is good and not a novice. It can be said that he stands out in Tomato, a software where anyone can write novels. Unfortunately, no one reads it and there is no traffic. Why? Damn foreign persimmon! There is also Chekhov's Gun-style foreshadowing recycling, and the plot design is simple, but it is a pity that because it is currently a shell of The Godfather, it has not yet shown the author's ingenuity in plot design. I am still looking forward to what the author's plot will be after finishing The Godfather. After all, the shell of The Godfather is just a tool to expand the world view for readers, and the big one is at the back! The big one is coming!
I hope that the subsequent author can write more of his own stuff (there are some problems with the expression, it should be said that it is more of a wild imagination of this fictional world), because now it can be seen that many designs are more or less obvious references to something, but it is also like the Cthulhu novels "because it is mixed with reality, so it gives people a sense of reality." It is very good, very to my taste, although the plot feels bland due to familiarity because of reading "The Godfather 1".
Let's talk about the setting of the protagonist. It is easy to fall into the cliché setting. If you upgrade too quickly, you will fall into the routine of mindless and cool writing. At the same time, it is inconsistent with the tone of the current plot. At the same time, if you upgrade too fast, you will also sacrifice the flavor of shaping the world view. But at present, the tendency to upgrade quickly is obvious?
I don't know what to write anymore. As mentioned before, the shell of "The Godfather" and the steady narrative rhythm make it nothing worth picking at the moment. Except for some key points that don't make sense, my rating dropped, but I still think it's worth reading this book. (Don't read the content in brackets if you don't want to be spoiled) (For example: The son of the deputy city lord had no reason to leave the city. He clearly had his own power in the city but was killed when he went out of the city. Although it can be explained that he would not reveal his half-vampire identity, this is far-fetched. It can be solved by going to the sphere of influence of the city lord and the mafia. This is obviously to create a scene for the protagonist to come into contact with the new police officer. It is too deliberate)
Finally, thank you to the author, I hope your work will get better and better! Don't stop updating! It can be seen that it is a novel written out of interest (¿) I hope I can stick to it!
Well, it's a good book. From the current point of view, the world view is good. I like the author's characterization and some plot connections. I am still a little confused about the protagonist's "death". It is obviously a death announcement. Why is there an opportunity for survival after the established fact "beside others' predetermined ending" , outline a possible life path for yourself." This sentence clearly made me unable to understand clearly. I initially thought that Jacob's "Gale Wind" was the second magical power left to the protagonist by the author. I felt that Jacob's death should be unrestrained and heroic and memorable, but later on I felt that the author could not bear to part with this character. The following colleges are obviously paving the way for the future worldview and systematic learning. Then there is the incomplete combat power system, which gives me a strange feeling anyway, and the protagonist improves very quickly, with a total of nine prices. I am very curious about how to write it later. Although it seems that the author may not write anymore, I will finish it and take on the next one. I can only continue to complain about Tomato. Talented newcomers simply cannot get ahead in their novels. This is already the most comfortable novel I have read recently.
The world view is grand, the setting is awesome, the characters are well described, and the writing is also good. It can be regarded as a masterpiece in Tomato. If you don't believe it, read other book reviews, they are all five-star reviews.
I have now finished reading the first chapter, which is where I catch up on the novel. I really think this novel is well written, and the characters in it have very distinct personalities, which is in line with my expectations for the subject of group portraits. The author is also very good at making things happen, and I like it very much. I'm looking forward to the next academy chapter, and this novel must not be unfinished. Ah Kou Ya [cry] [cry] [cry], I really like it
The plot progresses very naturally, and the characters are more comfortable to read than some of the sacred books on the rankings. However, it may also be a matter of personal taste. It is very suitable for Japanese fantasy and dragon-flavored baby physiques. There are basically no too many bad points, and the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine is very cute (I hope it is a single heroine)
Finally, I hope the author understands what he is writing. The number of words is too small and it is not enough to read. I am also afraid that after updating, I will suddenly be lost in everyone. It is not good to read.
The logic is clear, the writing is very good, and the setting is rigorous. It is a rare good book. I hope the author will continue to persevere and it will definitely become popular.
The best books on the bookshelf plus one, for contemporary readers [currently in progress]
The background of the novel is a bit like Blood Blockade Battlefront. There are vampires and they are very powerful. They are all set in a foggy city.
The setting is very good, and the characterization of the characters is also fair. I like it very much! [Praise]
It's a good book, the writing is really good, and the setting is quite new.
This book has the potential to score 9 or more. I hope the subject matter is very novel and I hope the author can stick to it.
Not bad, very pretty
Very good, support me [sending heartfelt wishes]
This book is awesome
Baby, you write well
Haochihaochihaochi
Beautiful, great world view
Come on, great author
Not bad, cheers to the author [Thinking]
The early world view is quite nice.
Not bad, feels a bit too bland
Yours, a really good book, why doesn't it have any traffic on Tomato? Blanch
It's not as sweet as the author said, but it's still quite sharp.
Come on, author of Kou Ya, I've read this book for so long and this is the first time I've commented on it.
Each character has his own characteristics, and the plot design has no flaws. The language is sophisticated, very good
Very interesting concept, very unique world view, very delicate and detailed description. Well worth the time.
It's a very interesting novel in terms of setting, but there's nothing toxic about it so far.
Write down this awesome world view (Picture of Sister Yanquan clenching her fist)
It's super good-looking and can be considered a good book at the starting point. [Like][Like][Like]
It's really invincible and beautiful. You can already get a glimpse of a very, very grand world view. It gives me a feeling of romance. It's super invincible and beautiful.
It's not bad. It looks good. I give the author of Kanu a five-star review.
I think this book has a platinum status, I can't sleep at night, so I'll update it soon! I highly recommend reading this book! Elements: "The Godfather" + Western/Eastern fantasy (combat power system, partial settings) + fictional world (similar to modern Western society) It can be seen that this book is deeply influenced by "The Godfather", and some plots also have its shadow (or is it a replica?). The plot currently revolves around the three states of fog, rain and snow named after "water". The combat power structure combines the characteristics of Eastern and Western fantasy (the Eastern one is more urban with supernatural powers) The author's worldview setting has his own ingenuity, which can be seen to be different from the formulaic application of other assembly line works. I particularly like it🥰, not to mention that the settings of the three states of fog, rain and snow are "a bit" "referenced to the three big G's of reality" hahaha. In terms of plot, it is currently a fusion of "The Godfather" + what the author wants to write. It is a bit cool (the protagonist's golden finger is very straightforward, like the old man with the ring), but standing on the shoulders of giants, it is still exciting enough. The author's writing style is good and not a novice. It can be said that he stands out in Tomato, a software where anyone can write novels. Unfortunately, no one reads it and there is no traffic. Why? Damn foreign persimmon! There is also Chekhov's Gun-style foreshadowing recycling, and the plot design is simple, but it is a pity that because it is currently a shell of The Godfather, it has not yet shown the author's ingenuity in plot design. I am still looking forward to what the author's plot will be after finishing The Godfather. After all, the shell of The Godfather is just a tool to expand the world view for readers, and the big one is at the back! The big one is coming! I hope that the subsequent author can write more of his own stuff (there are some problems with the expression, it should be said that it is more of a wild imagination of this fictional world), because now it can be seen that many designs are more or less obvious references to something, but it is also like the Cthulhu novels "because it is mixed with reality, so it gives people a sense of reality." It is very good, very to my taste, although the plot feels bland due to familiarity because of reading "The Godfather 1". Let's talk about the setting of the protagonist. It is easy to fall into the cliché setting. If you upgrade too quickly, you will fall into the routine of mindless and cool writing. At the same time, it is inconsistent with the tone of the current plot. At the same time, if you upgrade too fast, you will also sacrifice the flavor of shaping the world view. But at present, the tendency to upgrade quickly is obvious? I don't know what to write anymore. As mentioned before, the shell of "The Godfather" and the steady narrative rhythm make it nothing worth picking at the moment. Except for some key points that don't make sense, my rating dropped, but I still think it's worth reading this book. (Don't read the content in brackets if you don't want to be spoiled) (For example: The son of the deputy city lord had no reason to leave the city. He clearly had his own power in the city but was killed when he went out of the city. Although it can be explained that he would not reveal his half-vampire identity, this is far-fetched. It can be solved by going to the sphere of influence of the city lord and the mafia. This is obviously to create a scene for the protagonist to come into contact with the new police officer. It is too deliberate) Finally, thank you to the author, I hope your work will get better and better! Don't stop updating! It can be seen that it is a novel written out of interest (¿) I hope I can stick to it!
Well, it's a good book. From the current point of view, the world view is good. I like the author's characterization and some plot connections. I am still a little confused about the protagonist's "death". It is obviously a death announcement. Why is there an opportunity for survival after the established fact "beside others' predetermined ending" , outline a possible life path for yourself." This sentence clearly made me unable to understand clearly. I initially thought that Jacob's "Gale Wind" was the second magical power left to the protagonist by the author. I felt that Jacob's death should be unrestrained and heroic and memorable, but later on I felt that the author could not bear to part with this character. The following colleges are obviously paving the way for the future worldview and systematic learning. Then there is the incomplete combat power system, which gives me a strange feeling anyway, and the protagonist improves very quickly, with a total of nine prices. I am very curious about how to write it later. Although it seems that the author may not write anymore, I will finish it and take on the next one. I can only continue to complain about Tomato. Talented newcomers simply cannot get ahead in their novels. This is already the most comfortable novel I have read recently.
The world view is grand, the setting is awesome, the characters are well described, and the writing is also good. It can be regarded as a masterpiece in Tomato. If you don't believe it, read other book reviews, they are all five-star reviews.
I have now finished reading the first chapter, which is where I catch up on the novel. I really think this novel is well written, and the characters in it have very distinct personalities, which is in line with my expectations for the subject of group portraits. The author is also very good at making things happen, and I like it very much. I'm looking forward to the next academy chapter, and this novel must not be unfinished. Ah Kou Ya [cry] [cry] [cry], I really like it
The plot progresses very naturally, and the characters are more comfortable to read than some of the sacred books on the rankings. However, it may also be a matter of personal taste. It is very suitable for Japanese fantasy and dragon-flavored baby physiques. There are basically no too many bad points, and the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine is very cute (I hope it is a single heroine) Finally, I hope the author understands what he is writing. The number of words is too small and it is not enough to read. I am also afraid that after updating, I will suddenly be lost in everyone. It is not good to read.
The logic is clear, the writing is very good, and the setting is rigorous. It is a rare good book. I hope the author will continue to persevere and it will definitely become popular.
The best books on the bookshelf plus one, for contemporary readers [currently in progress]
The background of the novel is a bit like Blood Blockade Battlefront. There are vampires and they are very powerful. They are all set in a foggy city.
The setting is very good, and the characterization of the characters is also fair. I like it very much! [Praise]
It's a good book, the writing is really good, and the setting is quite new. This book has the potential to score 9 or more. I hope the subject matter is very novel and I hope the author can stick to it.
Not bad, very pretty
Very good, support me [sending heartfelt wishes]
This book is awesome
Baby, you write well
Haochihaochihaochi
Beautiful, great world view
Come on, great author
Not bad, cheers to the author [Thinking]
The early world view is quite nice.
Not bad, feels a bit too bland
Yours, a really good book, why doesn't it have any traffic on Tomato? Blanch
It's not as sweet as the author said, but it's still quite sharp.
Come on, author of Kou Ya, I've read this book for so long and this is the first time I've commented on it.
Each character has his own characteristics, and the plot design has no flaws. The language is sophisticated, very good
Very interesting concept, very unique world view, very delicate and detailed description. Well worth the time.
It's a very interesting novel in terms of setting, but there's nothing toxic about it so far.
Write down this awesome world view (Picture of Sister Yanquan clenching her fist)
It's super good-looking and can be considered a good book at the starting point. [Like][Like][Like]
It's really invincible and beautiful. You can already get a glimpse of a very, very grand world view. It gives me a feeling of romance. It's super invincible and beautiful.
It's not bad. It looks good. I give the author of Kanu a five-star review.