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I have read more than 20 chapters so far, and I feel pretty good. There is no strong sense of violation. The relationship between Li Muwan and Wang Lin has not developed into a Taoist couple. It seems that the heroine will "compensate" to Wang Lin as the price of disturbing the cause and effect😋 (I love watching it) The heroine is an alchemy cultivator and her force value is not high, so when Wang Lin broke through the golden elixir, he did not defeat the five alchemy cultivators at the same time (it seems to be five alchemy cultivators). At this time, I saw some readers complaining that the heroine was weakened, and I felt that it was okay, after all. Danxiu himself is not good at killing, and he has never really fought a few big fights. The system does not provide the heroine with any powerful techniques or props, so I can understand the difference in attack power, and it is not too poisonous, so I will continue reading. Overall, I am looking forward to the follow-up of this article ('▽')

There are very few fan works about Tian Ni. Come on, someone finally made our Mazi brother's life less miserable. Compared with the Tang Dynasty God King next door, our Mazi brother is just like Xiaobaicai. Yes, I will work hard to update. I will keep reading.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh looks good! ! ! It was tied in one day! ! ! ! Don't stop updating the author! ! ! ! ! ! This is the most enjoyable piece of Xian Ni fan fiction I have ever read! !

The writing is great, with original content. Unlike many fandoms that only revolve around the protagonist, the content is full and the emotional transition is natural. Currently, it is considered one of the better Xianni fanfics. There are many Xianni fanfics, but few are well written. I hope the author will continue to work hard. The one star missing is for the author. The update is still too slow, and it is not enough to read!

I like Wang Lin, and when I see a fan of Wang Lin, I will basically click on it to read it, but this novel won me over not just because of Wang Lin's name. The novel does not blindly follow the plot or replace Li Muwan. The heroine has her own path and her own growth. I will continue to catch up on updates, and the author will give it my best.

The author is great, the heroine CP is Wang Mazi [sending my heart]

It's wonderful, the writing is sophisticated, and the plot is innovative, but it's so slow. Why can't it be a hundred chapters a day? I want to fatten up but can't help it. I just have one wish now: don't cheat me! Don't cheat me! ! ! This is the first time I have seen a fairy tale that is so well written. It is better than most of the fan fiction I have read.

The original heroine has a good personality, and she doesn't just rely on the male protagonist and has her own growth line. It's very interesting and recommended! The author is so quick to update, it's not enough to read

Author, please don't stop updating, it's really good to read, the heroine's character is very suitable to my liking, and the plot arrangement is also very reasonable. Please keep writing!

The image of the heroine is well created. She doesn't have to live her own life like other protagonists.

Although I haven't watched Xian Ni, at least I can understand this fanfic

The plot and writing made me feel comfortable watching it (◍＞◡＜◍) And each chapter has a lot of words (,,>᎑<,,)

This is my first time watching Xian Ni fanfic, it's quite interesting haha

The most beautiful one I've ever seen in Xian Ni ^•͈༝•^ฅ

Very well written! Don't cheat [blowing kiss]

I finally found a book that I can read. It has all the interesting points and attracts me to keep reading. Good luck to the author.

Nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! What a delicious meal. I ate it. The author was so amazing.

It is companionship and mutual protection in my phenomenon, and a reasonable emotional transition. Although Lin Wan's love is very good, but that companionship is missing, this book is written and the CP is also broken [shy][laughing]

It's good to watch. It's rare to see people who don't use a lot of the original plot to write their own stories. Come on, keep up the good work.

It's good-looking, it has a plot, but it has its own characteristics.

I really like this fairy-reverse fanfic, but I hope the author will add more updates. It's really not enough to read [pinch][pinch][air kiss][air kiss]

It's pretty good. It would be better if I could interact more with the protagonist.

36 Chapters have been checked in. There are almost no major poisonous points so far. Come on, author!

The author writes so well, keep it up [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Come on, it looks great

It's beautiful, thank you to the author! ! !

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

That's pretty good. Let's wait until it's finished.

Super pretty, cheers up [Adoration]