Dragon Clan**********

Indeed, as long as someone in Lu Mingfei High School could help him, he would hold that person tightly in his hand as a life-saving straw.

It's okay. I won't read it if the idea is too novel, but if it's so novel, I have to try it. Okay, I've read twenty or thirty chapters. Let me tell you what I think is toxic. The first one is Chu Zihang's character. I was a little embarrassed in the first sentence when he first appeared. I laughed at first, then I chatted with twenty or thirty people who introduced the basketball club, and then after Lu Mingfei refused, he actually patted him on the shoulder and laughed heartily? [Cover Facial paralysis, few words, no contact at all. I feel a little uncomfortable with this poisonous point. You can try to marginalize Chu Zihang, but don't make this character deviate too much from the original work. Then there is the problem of Linghua, which I think is okay. After all, it is said that it is combined with the time-travel body [thinking] and the character is a bit strange, I think. It's not a big problem, after all, it's not the world of Genshin Impact, but I really hope the author can change Chu Zihang's problem [face covering], it's okay if he doesn't, just a few personal suggestions.

It's pretty good, except for a little bit of OCC. Keep up the good work, author.

This book is really amazing. Except for the character design and the writing style, it is quite good. The main point is to praise the author's imaginative themes which are really novel.

Ling Hua's word spirit can be designed to be the Ice Emperor.

#Twistedcrawling, sharpexplosion# Self-rescue is a time-traveling soul anyway. If you offend yourself, you will die! If you look at Dragon Clan fandom and don't look at change, there will be something in this life...[Smile][smile][angry]

This is my first contact with Dragon Clan fandom. I haven't read the original work, but I feel that the author's writing is okay, at least I can read it.

Very good, the theme is novel, the writing is good, it redeemed my bad boy

The problem is not big, but maybe being called bad boy underestimates Lu Mingfei's strength. Lu Mingfei is bad because he is in a good school. He is a top second-level student, with just enough grades for first-level students. It's just that the people around him are more stupid. It's not like he really doesn't understand anything. [Hang his face] Only 450 for extra classes in the second year of high school? If you don't make up classes based on these grades, both books will be too much.

Good luck to the author!

It's great, I'm looking forward to the next episode

Full marks. The author writes very well.

This book is really well written, but the damn author clearly said it was a sweet article, so why did he stab me? [Cry][cry][cry]

It's pretty good-looking, but you actually suspect that I'm not a real person😭

Come on, the author is great

Make it a habit first for later

The character is a bit OC. If you weren't a fan, this book would be really invincible.

It's okay, pretty good.