Time Flies Like Fire: the End of the World

I am a newbie author, so if I write something wrong, please give me some advice. Lin Feng, a laid-off worker from a textile factory, was forced to step into the "Gate of Hell" in Binzhou South District - the territory of the Binlian Gang because his mother was in urgent need of surgery fees at the advanced stage of lung cancer. He was appreciated by the gang leader, a certain Yongjia (you can search online for who he is) with the force of knocking Chen Jianbing to death with a cracked aluminum pot lid. Mainly because I want to write a fanfic about Like Fire, I will slowly build up the characters first, and I will add them later.