When Xiao Longnu Broke in and Stole the Pen,

It looks good, the writing is very good, and the combination is wonderful. The characters are basically quite restored. The temptation between Wu Xie and Fatty is very normal. After all, he has become the evil emperor. It is rare to see someone starting to write fan fiction from the reboot. I'm here to follow up on the review. Madam, you can add more scenes between the male and female protagonists. I suddenly remembered that Xiaolong's female character is really cute. She is also very cute in the original work. The two cold faces are so cute... Cuteness of cuteness [exploration]

This combination turned out to be surprisingly suitable. They are all top-notch warriors with both skill, power and beauty. They share a similar loneliness and aloofness that is independent from the world. The younger brother keeps his emotions introverted but not exposed, while the dragon girl expresses her emotions purely and straightforwardly. If you finish writing it, it will be very good to eat [Send heartfelt message]

After reading the middle of Chapter 4, I am both afraid that Xiao Longnu and Zhang Qiling will become a couple, but also hope that they will become a couple. If the author has no experience in writing love lines, don't force it to write. You can also write about friendships. They are characters you once liked and don't want to be ruined by love lines, because I have seen too many people write about love lines and they collapsed.

It's unexpectedly beautiful. I didn't have any expectations at first. I went in to check it out after reading the reviews that the two of them matched up unexpectedly. Unconsciously, I finished reading it all at once. We who like cold-faced cuteness are really lucky. Although the scenes where the heroine and the little brother are alone are not secret, it is not surprising that the little brother will like the little dragon girl after getting along with her. Except for the first few chapters, it may be used Some complicated words are used to describe the heroine's time travel. The whole description is neither brainless nor brain-burning. The heroine, who has lived alone in the ancient tomb for more than ten years, makes friends with the three of them and creates bonds. As a little dragon girl, I feel that the writing is very good, and it does not look OOC at all!

It's AI again, okay?

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It's very interesting, and the author's writing style is very good. At first I thought it was AI when I saw the long paragraphs of text, but after a closer look, it didn't feel like it. Although the combination is a bit outrageous, the unexpected plot is very reasonable and the emotional line is not too abrupt. I hope the author can keep writing it. Come on

It's very beautiful. I look forward to seeing Xiao Longnu and Zhang Qiling [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The writing is good and the characters are well created. They are my favorite cps of Xiao Longnu and Xiao Ge. I am looking forward to the follow-up development. I hope it will not be a scam.

It's really pretty! It's just a bit lacking. I finished it quickly. Good luck, author! ! ! 🥹🥺[Cry]

So beautiful. The writing is beautiful and the characters are in line with the original work. It is my favorite cp

Because of Xiao Longnu, I give two more stars. The other descriptions feel good, but the strength value has been reduced a lot. The author has overhauled the entire text, and it's great! Five stars! Very few authors have such perseverance to revise [Sending my heart]

Recommended good-looking author, cheers

It's quite beautiful 😍I'll follow the book~

Very nice, please give it a try, author

Very good, I like it very much.

Isn't the author updating? Woohoo [crying] [crying]

It's very interesting. I will keep following it. Good luck, author.

The book that attracted me the most in the past year, I hope the author will update it soon [currently in progress]

Nice. It's a very interesting combination, and the characters aren't too OOC. I just hope there can be more sweet interactions between the male and female protagonists in the future. The only drawback is that Xiao Longnu is a bit weak in it

Finally I found it

It's really well written, the characters are not broken, and the writing style is also very good.

The story is interesting, the description is delicate and fascinating

It looks good, I hope the heroine can have a harem in the future [laughing]