At the Beginning, I Was Collecting Scraps in Dali World.

I have read Chapter 13 so far. Let me first tell you my own opinions so far. I think this is one of the best among Dali fan fiction. There is no nanny behavior for Jiangnan, nor does it blindly follow the main line of Jiangnan. The protagonist also has his own route and his own life. He only meets Jiangnan occasionally. As for killing people, for me, this kind of thing is dispensable. If the author does not like cruel things, In fact, most readers can continue to read it. The final conclusion is that the author only needs to keep following the current route. It has most of the main plot of the protagonist himself and a small part of the branch plot surrounding Jiangnan. This kind of fanfic is one of the best Dali fanfics I have ever seen. The current 36 pictures are quite acceptable, but there is actually no need to overly depict the protagonists around Zhong Yingxue, Xia Yao and the others. These heroines have been perfectly portrayed in Qingfeng's writings. If the portrayal is too in-depth, it may make the readers feel worse about the two of them. In fact, from the current point of view, it is not necessary. It is too centered around Zhong Yingxue Jiangnan and the others. If it has its own main plot, it can still be watched. It can also make the protagonist advance the world faster than Jiangnan. In this case, it may be interesting. Of course, I am just making a suggestion. It doesn't really matter whether the author adopts it or not. Just follow your own heart.

Not bad. It's okay. I just want to make a suggestion. After you have your own main line of development, you can also have some interactions with Nanshen during the period. For example, the interactions with the original characters are still too little. But it's not a big problem. The number of words in the plot is too few. Add it later.