My Sword Bone Is Perfect to Kill Through the World of Immortality

This book is really great to read, but the rating is so low that I, who am just a fan of reading, can't help but write a book review for fear that the author will stop updating. To be honest, I feel that the author's writing style can be improved. There are no inexplicable group portraits or inexplicable ignition. The heroine has a growth line, and the heroine's emotional line is also light, very soft, not reckless, and not inexplicable. It is very logical for a few people to set fire to each other and then fight against the whole world. It is not a story about a strong woman and her spoiled wife. Generally speaking, seeing that there is no thunder yet, I am really a person who easily stops reading after watching it. I am always criticized by inexplicable things, but this book is quite good. I hope the author can continue to write and let us see the heroine become a strong person and become the number one swordsman! ! ! And what I like very much is the portrayal of the supporting characters. They are not vicious supporting characters in the traditional sense. Everyone is three-dimensional, has what she wants to do, and has an explanation for why she does it. She is not inexplicably vicious, but I like it very much. I hope I can continue to write more. This is my first time to write a book review, and the writing is not that good, but I hope this book can get better results and the author will be more motivated to continue reading!

Although the storyline is of the old-fashioned "real and fake daughter" type, the author's writing style is good and the details are clearly described. The reborn heroine does not return to the original sect to confront the original heroine, but finds a new path and starts over in a different sect. It should be given 4.5 Stars, and an extra half star is given to encourage the author to keep up the good work [blowing kiss]

Finally tied it. The following are some of my thoughts after reading it. 1 The female villains described by Baobao always impress me. Miss Shen's character and character, which were affected by family affairs, were not created blindly. Instead, there was a bit of an O. Henry ending. I said it was a movie-style development. I actually don't understand it. I only know that the characters you wrote are full and three-dimensional. 2. Regarding Wen Zhao's previous life, it plays a role in promoting the story and continuing development in many plots, but it is mentioned too many times. It is really a lot. There are more than 4,000 pages. Just mentioning the repetitive arm, broken arm, kneeling as punishment, and younger brother, there are really too many chapters for these four. I understand that this is Wen Zhao's heartache, and it can be regarded as a bright line in the article. Because it has not been resolved, it has been emphasized, repeated, and mentioned again and again. But I want to change it, maybe it will be better. 3. Baby is really good at describing scenery, characters, and the so-called "Tao". It seems to have brought me to the world of immortality you described. It is so glorious and beautiful. The descriptions of "Tao" babies are also different from those of other authors. Some of them may be borrowed from the Taoist Sutra, the Diamond Sutra, etc., But the meaning is always not their own. They just changed the words and wrote them in a similar way. 4 Regarding the group portrait, I find it a bit funny, but also a bit sincere and simple. It's something that happened in the early stage. Whenever something happens, the other four people will always bring their iconic items neatly to the destination to comfort and encourage Wen Zhao. Of course, there is nothing wrong with this way of writing. As I mentioned before, it is a bit funny, sincere, and simple. 5. There are several typos and missing words in the first and middle sections of the article. I still hope they can be corrected. There is a paragraph that is repetitive and written a lot. I remember there were comments and I hope to delete it. According to my scoring standards, if you have no typos or missing words, then I will definitely give you a better score. I always feel that articles like this are careful and careful. 6 In the article, the world of cultivating immortals is a bit old, which makes me feel the difficulty of cultivating immortals. Unlike other articles, it is great to become a powerful person at an early age, which is great, but it also leaves no trace in my heart. My baby allowed me to see the meaning and connotation of cultivation. 7 Babies seem to like using parallelism very much. Many parallelisms are used in the article. You can try other techniques. I think the articles written by Bao Bao are very good. There are times when the article should be young and weak, and there are times when it should be sketched. In this way, the article runs through to the ending. I believe that the rating will not be bad. A good book is not afraid of the precipitation of time and the reading of later people. I hope that there will be no Internet memes in my future writing, and it must have an ancient feel, otherwise it will make people uncomfortable. Of course, it all depends on how you want to write, baby. I am just making an opinion, and I apologize in advance for any offense. There is also the city lord of Peony City. Her character is really infuriating. I think this understanding of Tao and the retribution of cause and effect can be reflected in the subsequent inner demons. The inner demons are not only a barrier for oneself, but also a consideration of the family and bloodline. The retribution of cause and effect belongs to the surviving person. Even if there is a legitimate relationship and process in the law, as long as there is a cause and effect relationship, it must be borne. So I can be regarded as a country bumpkin. I hope that the karma and retribution of the Lord of Peony City can come faster and fail more miserably.

I followed up the review directly. I particularly like the heroine's style of conduct. The author portrays the characters very delicately. It feels like the author is raising a daughter. He has given her the opportunities that suit her, made like-minded friends, and allowed her to hold her head high and move forward. Sister, every step of your step counts!

It's good to read. The heroine's personality is pretty good so far. She doesn't have any particularly virginal behavior or any inexplicably embarrassing lines. It's ridiculously awkward and makes me laugh out loud. I think this book is worth reading. Personally, I feel that the author's writing is pretty good and the fighting scenes are pretty good.

For the first time, I stayed up all night and published a short review of a book. The heroine is quite to my liking. As long as I don't kill Master Feng Yi, I will definitely keep chasing her. Please help me. Don't kill my master. [Admiration] Wei Er doesn't think it's too harsh on me, but I respect the author's ideas. One is that my senior brother was raised as the core of the next generation of sword sect since he was a child, and then he ruined himself because of love. I don't understand it, but I respect it. One is that if this article is uncensored and the authenticity is warped and the group portraits are highlighted, it may be more palatable. However, I feel that the male protagonist should have relatively few scenes and it can be read as uncensored. However, the author's big words are already very good [Love] [Love] [Love]

The writing is super good. The protagonist becomes cold-hearted in order to protect himself, but he is not cold-hearted. He wants to help someone when he sees someone bad. He has the stubbornness and tenacity of a swordsman but does not take advantage of others. Because he had a bad master in his previous life, he will not kill everyone with one stroke and refuses to become his master! It's really good. The author has divided the middle line very well. If you go over it, it will look too sharp, and if you stay away, it will look like a coward. This is good! ! ! Recommended!

It is a very good article about cultivating immortals. It does not stick to the love between children, but focuses on the journey of life again. I am looking forward to its growth, which will enrich the world view little by little, reveal the persistence of oneself, and the way to achieve oneself.

I think it's worth watching. Although the plot is a bit cliche in some places👁👄👁, it doesn't have any interesting points. It's not embarrassing and can make people watch. I think the character portrayal is more three-dimensional. The heroine doesn't hate everyone because of her past life. She has the sense to distinguish the past life from the present (I am not very good at describing the first time I write a long review, it is not very detailed). You can go and take a look👁👅👁

I think it's quite interesting. It's not like the usual fairy tales that rely on the male protagonist to do this and that. The female protagonist's spiritual pet can only be a phoenix. I think this is very vulgar, but this book is different and I want to read it. Come on, author!

It's also a very good-looking one. I saw it right away at three o'clock in the morning. Zhao Zhao said that the little bitter melon must be better and better in this life. He punched Xie Xuan and kicked the bad guy Lin Chaochao! Okay, I will continue reading the article🤗🤗🤗I love you more🥰🥰

It's pretty good. The author's writing style is quite good. I don't feel like I'm a novice at the moment (but the logic may be a little messy) (But it doesn't affect the viewing) The characters are also more three-dimensional. The heroine is very, very awesome. [Send heart] [Send heart] The pace is moderate. There are less foreshadowings so far (it's a bit cliche that the pet is also a dragon). Personal opinion! ! Let's play it up a bit, the plot is a bit cliché Growth type, no big cheats Looking forward to the next article!

It's really good-looking, traditional but not cliche. It's good-looking (♥∀♥) and I look forward to the follow-up. I'm really at a loss for words, but it's so exciting that I won't be disappointed or fooled after watching it.

It's pretty good to watch. The heroine is strong and kind, but not the Holy Mother. One point that I can't quite understand is that the spiritual roots of water and fire are incompatible because the sword bones can get rid of it. It's a little bit outrageous. Can we wait until the heroine has the strength to wash away one or give more explanations that water and fire don't want to overcome it.

It's been a long time since I've come across a good book. The author has done enough homework and is well-founded. However, I am uneducated and can only say one good thing. Writing is something that requires culture and accumulation. The author's writing is elegant, but it is not frivolous. After reading novels for so many years, I actually know the general direction of the story, but the important thing about a good book is never the ending, but the process. The exciting development that can make people think and be touched is more important than the climax and ending of the novel. Although the beginning of this book is old-fashioned, this kind of beginning is just a "form". Just like the Trinity Law of poetry, female novels or popular novels have their own Trinity Law. I always believe that form is the skin and content is the bone. Author, please don't stop updating, I still want to see the ending [crying][crying] Okay, I still read too many similar articles. In some plots, I want to run away as soon as the setting comes out. I really like to give up halfway [face covering] [face covering] I'll give it a try if I have the chance.

Five-star praise! It looks good, and the writing is great, but the appearance of the male protagonist is a bit redundant at the moment. I didn't find his point and I haven't gotten it yet. Maybe it is. The author's writing is very good, and I feel that this book should be rated much higher than it is now. It's really good, but I feel like stories with female protagonists are more to my liking.

It's a very heart-warming novel, with a sense of life. The heroine's change of mentality is also written very smoothly. Every supporting character who appears has his or her own line. It's beautiful. I beg for more updates [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Five-star praise! It's fast-paced, exciting and dense. The protagonist is ruthless and doesn't talk much. He kills decisively and I can't stop watching it. (The emotions are also written very well! (I'm short of words.) I cried in the middle of it. Ww

I also stayed up late to update this chapter of this book. First of all, I don't like to write book reviews, but what about this one? In the female channel cultivating immortals, every woman can shine. Maybe some people don't like this character, but I think this character is well-shaped. Not everyone is like the heroine, everything will be clear, and not everyone is born firm and kind. Gradually grow up and understand the Tao. Secondly, the world view. This world view. The world view is very grand. It can be seen that the heroine will have a long-term growth process. I hope the plot can be more coherent. The current plot is not bad. The heroine is the kind of character with righteousness in her heart. With a character like this, I feel like the love line would be difficult to write. If you write too much, the character would be a bit broken? (The above is only my personal opinion and has no other meaning. Some of the points I mentioned are also the points I hope to see when reading the novel. The author and readers can just read it.) In short, this book is not a loss to invest in. It will definitely be rated higher in the future. Many fairy tales either grow too slowly or too fast. This rhythm is just right.

I really like this article [sending my heart] The heroine is Wen Zhaozhao, a very kind-hearted Wen Zhaozhao I really like Zhaozhao's growth path. It can be seen that the author is very careful in writing and is very stern. When he meets his previous master, he ignores him and would rather jump off a cliff. Later, he meets a cute little white guy who has a lot to do with Zhaozhao. I guess it is a huge foreshadowing. Later, there is the Hanshan Disciple Recruitment Ceremony. He also succeeded in becoming Master Feng, so he encourages Zhaozhao. It's very good, and some of the side plots are also very interesting, especially the Zhou family's. The one named Shen and my Zhiyan are a big sword. . And then there is the uncertainty about whether this book has a male protagonist. Anyway, it's good enough to read. You can have no thoughts about it, but there are too few [laughs] (^_^)vjpj.

The writing is very good. It is the best book with the best world view, the largest storyline and the longest storyline since I read Qin Yanwan. But it is not very exciting, it is a bit sad. I feel that the writing is top-notch. I look forward to it becoming popular.

At that time, when I first read it and the rating was a bit low, I didn't really want to read it. Then I read the introduction and felt that the world view seemed to be quite to my liking. I happened to be in the stage of looking for a book, so I took a look at it by the way, and found out, huh? ! Gold struck! Wait for the update~

There is still less space, but at present, many characters are well created and have their own personalities. I hope they will continue to be the same. Author Baobao [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart]

Highly recommend it to my sisters, this book is definitely a hit! The heroine is not a virgin, she is a big heroine who focuses on herself, she does not compete with females, she always treats the best swordsman as her handwriting opponent, she looks so good

In fact, this is not the kind of mindless rebirth novel where the heroine suddenly becomes stronger and then abuses the scum. The heroine Wen Zhao is growing up slowly. It can be seen that although the ending cannot be changed immediately after rebirth, the growth of the heroine is obviously easy to see and there is a process. All in all, everyone can look forward to the follow-up development🩵🩵🩵

The characters in the novel are very vivid, and the author has created them really well. It is really beautiful and incomparably beautiful. It is one of the most beautiful books I have read among so many fairy tales. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] I will follow the author for the rest of my life [Shy]

It really embodies the way of cultivating immortals. It is different from other substitute heart-torture novels. The heroine did not choose the original sect, but chose a new sect to start her own cultivation. Anyway, it is very interesting! The writing is not a noob (forgive my lack of language [crying])

It's good to read, and it's one of the few Xiuxian novels that I follow [Adoration]

The writing is superb. When I first read this book, I was in a book shortage and didn't really like to read foreign novels. After casually reading it, I was attracted by the writing. It flowed like water, like a scroll slowly unfolding in front of my eyes. It was soothing and rhythmic. It was great.

It is a very interesting book about cultivating immortals. Zhaozhao was very decisive in cutting off the master-disciple relationship and the shoddy family relationship in the previous life, without being a mother-in-law. I met a mentor and a good friend in Hanshan, and I won't be as isolated and helpless as I was in my last life. [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]