Slay the Gods: A Cultivation World? Take It Up with the Ruined Divine Ruins

Generally speaking, it is good. The subject matter is novel and the content is interesting. It is recommended to use less exclamation points. For lyricism, ellipses can be considered, and the emotions are more suitable. The character can be more calm when dragging the brother against the enemy. Some of them can be considered to be written as psychological words without having to say them out, and the effect will be better. The moves don't need to be named, which is a bit embarrassing, but naming does not require readers to identify the moves. System Wu's experience of Zhanshen and Brother Yan can be written in psychological words or communicate with others in appropriate words. It always feels a bit embarrassing to tell Brother Yan. Come on big

I really like this book. There is no bloody love, only my brother's burning fighting spirit! Brother Drag is still very restorative 💕

Brother Drag's personal biography, the setting is also very interesting Jie Jie Jie, but there is no cp ha [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

What's nice, what's nice is, can we add Lin Qiye and the others later? It was like Shen Qingzhu was in trouble, and then Lin Qiye and the others came to the rescue. It looks good, it looks good, can we add Lin Qiye and the others later? Just like when Shen Qingzhu was in trouble, they came to the rescue.

Watchable, good-looking, and the plot is relatively gentle. (Forgive me for not being very good at evaluating)

Give yourself a thumbs up!

This book is very beautiful and the thinking is clear

I really like this book(//∇//)

Brother Drag's personal biography is very interesting

Very good. Do you want Brother La to form a team here?