
Naruto: I, Naruto, Really Don't Want to Be the Succubus Bai Yueguang.
火影:我鸣人真不想当魅魔白月光
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Explore more →A New Fanfic That Really Brings Out the Content of Naruto and Has Excellent Writing Style ~
Is there any new Naruto fanfic on Tomato that has novel, strange, surprising content, smooth writing and connotative content? If the number of words is less than 30w, please avoid it~Please give me some advice~
The Protagonist Just Wanted to Pretend to Be a Good Person, but Ended up Pretending All His Life
Is there any kind of book where the protagonist just wants to pretend to be a good person at first, but ends up pretending to be a good person for the rest of his life?
Naruto, the Heroine Is Best Tsunade, the Content Is Better
Is There No More Masterpieces in Naruto's Current Life?
Is There a Male Protagonist in Naruto Who Is so Handsome?
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It's True That Naruto Is Getting Worse with Each Passing Year, so We Can Only Use the Previous Books to Compare.
I want to read a book similar to "Naruto: Beginning with the Twin Kamui".
Fan Fiction, Fan Fiction, Anything, Anime, Novels, Movies, TV Series, Etc.
Looking for High-Quality Naruto Stories
Do You Guys Have a 1Vn With Two Male Protagonists, and the Writing Is Smooth~::>_<::
I want to read a book similar to "The Guide is Too Charming, and the Sentinels Are Constantly Competing for Favor".
I Begged Naruto to Write a Yandere Text. Damn It, I'm Addicted to It.
Are There Any Particularly Abstract Books?
I want to read a book similar to "Collapse of Iron: Chapter 51 Spinning Elbow Attack Nanook".
Naruto + Heartthrob, Please Recommend🥺🥺
Male Succubus! ! Please Ask for This Type, I Will Comment on a Few Right Away
I want to watch something like "Let you conquer the goddess, why did you become a succubus!" Book. I really want to see it! ! I have only found a few copies so far, I really beg you,
Is There Anything Particularly Abstract and Funny? Naruto
I want to read a book like "Naruto: This Naruto is a bit abstract".
Naruto Fan Ceiling! ! !
I want to read a book like "The most stubborn Uchiha, it's okay to dig into one's own grave."
Dads, please give me some articles about the two male protagonists of Naruto. Dads, please ask questions. The kids are hungry, oops.
Looking for a Naruto Story, the Main Character Is Haruno Sakura
Naruto story, the protagonist is Sakura Haruno
Looking for All the Food and Fodder for Niche Themes
The protagonist can be either male or female, it doesn't have to be highly rated, just good-looking first. It's best to have no vice cp
The Heartthrob of Naruto, Everyone Is Interested in It, Regardless of Gender.
Top Naruto Fanfic with Multiple Female Protagonists.
Are There Any Stories Where the Protagonist Is Not Miserable, but Is Miserable and Painful in the Eyes of Outsiders?
I would like to read a book similar to "The Stealing Pen: Pretending to Be Inscrutable but Beautiful, Powerful and Tragic". If you want to read a book similar to Shen Huai's, don't recommend the same book to me. Thank you. Don't recommend the ones I've read😑
Naruto Novel, the Male Protagonist Has Single Arrows Inserted All over His Body, All Male Protagonists
I want to read a book like "My brother dressed as Itachi and I became the favorite of the Hokage group".
I'm Obsessed with Naruto's Heartthrob, Do You Understand? (Heroine)
I want to see the single arrow, the pace is fast, thank you guys!
Are There Any Naruto Stories Where the Heroine Is Sakura, or Where the Main Character Is Sakura?
I like Sakura so much, she's such a good girl, why are so many people criticizing her?



































































































The author writes really well. I like Team 7 here so much. The contradiction of the third generation of Hokage is also reflected. The third generation of Hokage is not only the hero who supports the collapse of the building, but also the indirect promoter who condones Danzo and leads to many tragedies. Although this is a common problem in long comics, I feel a lot calmer when I read the novel written by the author. The book is a bridge between the author and the reader to get to know each other. I also feel the author's interpretation of life. After reading this, I also resonated, so come on author✊
The writing is very beautiful, and Naruto is obsessed with Sakura and Sasuke. By the way, is there a female protagonist in this book?
This is called the succubus of the ninja world. The character descriptions in other Naruto fan works will be inferior to this one. Children, I finally found gold in the dunghill of tomatoes [crying]
Gua! This is what I want to read. It's been a long time since I've read a book that appeals to me. The bond between Class 7 is really heartwarming. At first, I wasn't interested in the original cover and title of the book. I thought it was some kind of bad Naruto story, but the change of book cover attracted me. It's beautiful and I love reading it. Good luck to the author.
Generally speaking, I feel that the author has done a good job. The protagonist and supporting characters are not so rigid, and the emotions are very delicate, as if written by a female author. The protagonist and the original Naruto, as well as Minato, Kushina, and Kurama have handled the plot quite well. I think it is very interesting. Thank you to the author!
It's a very good book, with some private settings. The heroine is Sasuke, Sakura, Haku, Kakashi, Neji, Temari, and Gaara. In short, you can basically knock [face cover] [face cover] [face cover] scared to tears by the friendship between Konoha. The author personally prefers Sakura. The logic of this book is very good, especially the emotional scenes of the friendship bond between the wood industry are very good, but the rating is low. , I feel that the heroine is not Hinata, and Hinata is downplayed too much (that is, the protagonist is nice to everyone, but is very bland to Hinata, without the sense of redemption for Hinata, there is nothing wrong, after all, Hinata's character, once helped, Hinata can easily become the heroine) and there are currently relatively few people watching it.
Make trouble, make trouble, make trouble! It's beautiful, interesting, and fun! I hope there is no cp, because the writing is so good, so I feel that every pair can be matched, giving the readers some room for free imagination, and Sakura's role is a bit too much, which suppresses the role of Naruto as the protagonist. The author has written well and also prioritized it.
I really like how Naruto's character is portrayed. The conflicts and conflicts in the plot also have the author's own ideas. The most outstanding part of this book is the author's portrayal of Naruto and the changes in the bonds between the characters. There is also a little innovative introduction of some jokes from mobile games to make the plot more interesting.
It equals Wuwuwuwu (lying weakly and helplessly on the ground). The author wrote it so well. He rolled and screamed the whole time when the emotions heated up. What he wrote was howl! ! I am an omnivore, so don't be too happy with each bite. This is simply a buffet given by heaven! ! At first glance, it's full of benefits, hehe, and the author is Chef Sakura! I think the portrayal of Sakura is simply not very good. Although I prefer Sauna, I also like Sakura's emotional line. I laugh at it all. The friendship between girls is too cute! ! ! I think the best thing about this book is that it doesn't criticize everyone, and everyone develops their own character, which is really exciting! Except for Naruto's personality change in the first few chapters, which is a bit unnatural, the rest is simply a masterpiece! ! Ka Ming, Zuo Ming, Ying Ming and so on are all served in one pot. The person who came up with the word succubus is simply a genius. The author is so thoughtful. Hey, there are other opponents who are cp-ing. It just plays my mental state. Although I am an omnivore, there is no so-called opponent hahaha. ૮꒰ྀི > . < ꒱ྀིა So don't step on the emotional line, it's really beautiful! ! The author maintains this all-talking state. There is no cp in the main text to keep the suspense, and a separate cp story is given to everyone in the extra chapter! ! I absolutely support it! ! ! So please author please update quickly! ! ! I really want to watch the interaction between Boruto and Naruto in the parallel world! !
It's really good. Naruto is completely the white moonlight succubus of the ninja world. The writing is also good, very delicate, and there are no big problems with the plot. I also like the portrayal of Sakura Sasuke's character in it. I opened this book before going to bed and stayed up all night to read it. Fortunately, I didn't read it until I finished the final week. Author, you must insist on finishing it. I really like this book😭
👅A man sees menstruation🙄A woman gets crazy when she sees it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is an alarm clock for vegetative people😭It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘She is a god and my rose The rose illuminated my dark life and gave my world meaning😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I shed tears. This world No longer the nemesis of dehydration and depression 😋 It is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flowed out of the corners of my mouth and flooded the Qiantang River 😈 It's so beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It made me realize that God does exist. I was so good that I shed tears. From then on, the world no longer lacked water, but I found it a little late.
If you watch it slowly, you will find it very interesting. You can think of it as Naruto in another timeline. The protagonist's character may not be used by many people at first, but as you continue to watch, there is still something. The plot will feel a smooth transition, and it feels like it is taking the succubus route. Character creation: ★★★ Plot arrangement: ★★★ Recommended: ★★★★
Marvelous! The character of Naruto is simply fascinating. He belongs exclusively to Team 7. The plot is fresh and innovative. It completely broke my expectations and made me extremely fascinated and loved it🥰 Then and finally, in the middle tense (should be 🤔) The author clearly writes very well, so why does he depreciate himself? The author writes really well. Oops, I forgot to rate it before. Long live Class 7! Sakura Sasuke: "If you win, marry Naruto, if you lose, become Hokage" I'm not good at language expression, but it looks good anyway, and the author writes it very well, eh!
Very, very warm. Naruto is like a little sun influencing the people around him. His emotions are also relatively delicate. It is very sensational, and the emotional line is also good. Naruto is a heartthrob now. There is a Shura Field, but Naru Sakura is the right answer [smirking] [send heart] What's the fun behind? It's so weird [face covering] Give it up, give it up
Damn it, it's so good. It's the first time I like a Naruto fanfic so much. The author has to write it well. I like Class 7 here so much. The world should revolve around Naruto, right? ! The author is obviously a boy, but he is very capable of writing all-comers that are completely satisfying to both men and women, and it is mainly plot-based, not mindless. I am willing to give it 100 points! ! Oh! Yes! Please continue to update, I will keep reading! If you win, you will be Naruto, if you lose, you will be Hokage! ! Ye! ! Come on!
The writing is very good, and the emotional processing is also very delicate, but the title of the book is different from the actual content. At present, it is mainly based on the protagonist's description of the changes in other people. The mobile game ability part accounts for a small part, but the current rhythm feels very comfortable. Maybe it will be better to change the title of the book to maintain the current rhythm. Big support for the author [Adoration][Please update][Please update]
Book excerpt: ★"Kabuto-senpai, when you ask the question 'Who am I?', You are actually looking for a label that can define yourself, right?" ★Get used to escaping and lose the courage to fight ★"There is no if." Sasuke interrupted him, "Instead of fearing the 'if', it is better to ensure that the 'if' does not happen." ★Turn a blind eye to the problems at hand for the sake of empty prophecies, self-righteously believing that as long as the prophecies come, all problems will be solved. Such an action is nothing. Book review: ★Because the sun is looking at you and never leaves even in the dark night ★I say I can't resist fate, but everything I do is to resist fate. Highlights: About the succubus label: Different from the external temptation of traditional succubi, what attracts others in this book is the understanding and kindness revealed in Naruto's actions. The disguised barrier under the excuse of a mission also has cracks in the warmth conveyed by others. In the process of giving, he also longs for their true care outside of the plot. About the plot: Whether it is the enthusiasm and attention to Shino who is easily ignored, or the guidance and comfort to Shizune who neglects herself, it can be seen that the author examines and thinks about the original plot from another angle. Every plot direction that is different from the original work is tantamount to taking a wrong approach. Every interpretation of the motivation of the character's behavior is a shaping of the character, which makes the characters vivid and the story perfect. Regarding others: Naruto, who has a system, is powerful, but he is not the only one. I secretly think that the bond is the most prominent core of this article. The bond is not a restraint but a wing. The three little ones efficiently divided the work and cooperated when learning the Rasengan. They have a high degree of trust in each other regardless of the reason. The most gratifying thing is the awareness of knowing the shortcut but still being down-to-earth, and the perseverance of being overstretched but still trying his best. When I was writing about the battle against Otsutsuki, I thought about whether the progress would be too fast and the combat power would collapse. However, after reading it, I felt that combat power is not the main thing to write about in this book. It is the spiritual journey of a group of immature or mature people growing up again. (The above is my personal opinion only)
I have seen the latest chapter 52 so far It's non-toxic, the writing is good, the plot is smooth, there is some OOC but it's all understandable and benign. Quality: good, very comfortable to look at. You can also sign a contract at the starting point.
What can I say about the novel? Some of the parts in the original novel were embarrassing at first, but they are very eye-catching. The novel is written in a really warm and heart-warming way. Even though there are poisonous points like being a time traveler in the eyes of others, I have to say that the portrayal is really good and warm. Naruto, who was unreliable and neurotic in the past, suddenly became so reliable, which is really amazing. Overall, I like it very much. Don't read this book too critically. It's really good and heartwarming.
I admit that this is the most caring, important, and sunny Naruto fanfic I have ever read. The protagonist is not Naruto but can be more sunny than Naruto. He redeems Jiraiya who escapes, Tsunade who is confused, Kabuto Yakushi who is looking for himself, Sasuke who falls into the abyss of loneliness, makes Sakura mature, and helps Kakashi escape from the darkness.
Buhao, the author is Ming Ying. Currently, I feel that the heroine is Ying. Although I want to watch it without cp, Ming Ying is also very delicious. After all, I am a top-notch foodie😋
God among gods! It's a very good book about Naruto. I really like how the Minato couple's truth is revealed in this book, and the author is simply a god of bonding! As for Sakura, I can say that Sakura is well portrayed, but it would be boring to really become the heroine (referring to Naruto's main palace). The main character is a succubus, so it should be for both men and women. Apart from this, it is a bit too much to strengthen Sakura. Sasuke is a bit marginal, but other than that, he is simply the god of bondage in the Naruto story... It's very interesting. Except for some personal settings, it depends on personal acceptance. Sakura is purely a private person (scratching my head). To be honest, I treat Sakura I don't have any objections to it if it's better. After all, the portrayal is indeed brilliant, and the treatment in the original work is not good, but directly giving Sakura a Platinum Sakura is still a bit too much. The same is true in the previous Forest of Death. Sakura has too many scenes and Sasuke and Naruto have too few. There is no problem with Sakura. It's just that Sasuke and Naruto in the original work are given to Sakura, which makes Sasuke a little under-watched. Maybe it will cause readers to click in and see that in the middle and later stages, it's a bit like selling sheep's meat over others? Everyone's character is captured well! This is the bond I want to see!
It's not all Ming, don't be fooled by the name. Sakura's character design is pretty good, but not boring. Cows are better than bullies.7. Um, can you change Gaara's character... It looks like... Sakura might be the heroine❓😋😋😋👁👅👁😭😡
The writing is really good, but to be honest, if I hadn't read other fanfics, I would have thought this book would be really good. After all, when I first watched the anime, it was mainly about joy. The plot of the happy ending is really good. However, it's a pity that after reading so many Naruto fanfics, I always felt that I would feel uncomfortable if Naruto didn't retaliate for the hardship he suffered [laughing and crying]. But the author should just stick to his own ideas.
The previous emotional plot is very good, especially the chapter of the Kingdom of Waves. The emotions between the characters are described in a very personal way. The affiliation of Team 7 and the portrayal of various characters are consistent with the original work. But as time goes on, there are less and less character descriptions, many things can be guessed, and the words "bond" are too numb, and the description of the emotions between the team is monotonous than before... If there is one thing that is most important, it is the theme of all Naruto. Emm, it has been over 100 chapters and is still circulating among the three members of Team 7. It would be great if some characters could be added. Another suggestion is that the "ooc at the beginning of each chapter" reminder can be reduced or not mentioned later. You can mention it in the comment area or mention it when you are about to start the ooc. Not mentioning it can allow readers to exert the Hamlet effect (fan fiction is not the same as the original work, but is modified based on the characters and stories of the original world view). The above are my personal suggestions
Nice! Naruto was like a succubus possessing him, and he fascinated everyone. Although it feels like the later system was a bit marginalized, and the favorability system has never appeared again, so I don't know how much everyone's favorability towards Naruto is, but their attitude is enough to express everything. I believe the author will add more explanations later. The feelings and bonds of Team 7 are also touching. As long as the three little ones are not involved, Naruto is easy to talk to, but if he hurts them... (Please refer to Orochimab)
Yes, our Naruto should be a succubus, and the plot development is not frustrating at all, and the writing is also very good. It can be seen that the author has been thinking about the development of the plot for a long time, and the author also takes great care of our feelings. It is great. We have been following it all the way and eating well.
When watching it, I need to abandon some adult perspectives. I feel that the protagonist's speech, actions and plot development are a bit too similar to the world in the eyes of a child. It is a bit uncomfortable for an old man to watch, but it is indeed a good script.
I would like to thank the author here for letting me relive my feelings when I first watched Naruto. To be honest, there are a lot of personal settings in it, but it is normal. If there are no personal settings, how can there be flesh and blood to support this Naruto story. This story tries its best to make up for the regrets in Naruto, but in fact, whether it is reality or stories, there will always be regrets that cannot be made up, and it is precisely those irreparable regrets that make people really get involved and think about something. These regrets are sad, but they also give flesh and blood to the story, turning an ordinary story into a charming gem. Just like this story, there are a lot of OOC in it, which are not even consistent with the original work, such as Naruto's heartthrob buff. In fact, the story is like a game, and OOC is like the rules of the game. Together they promote unimagined beauty, which is the most attractive part of the story. Regarding the follow-up, regardless of whether the author wants to continue writing, at least I have tasted some beautiful things in these stories that have been written, just like the original god Funina tasted delicious cakes, and I am grateful.
It was unexpectedly good. What really surprised me was that it turned out to be a life exchange instead of directly erasing Naruto's soul and seizing his body like a Tomato book. That one was really fucking disgusting.