The First Scourge of Immortality

Dao Ziyin's books are so sweet, and this book is even more about a different way of cultivating immortality and a different world. The world forgets: I am aware when conditions arise, and forget when conditions cease. As always, there is nothing to fault about the writing and plot, there are many funny contents and the language is witty. But light-hearted? The label says "no harem" instead of "single heroine". The author has commented that it is a single heroine. However, there are many ambiguous plots between the novel and other female partners, especially the part about Xie Zhiyi in the middle of the second volume. I don't know if it is the author's unique way of writing it or what, but I felt a little uncomfortable with it anyway. Except for this point, I don't like it very much, and it's harmless to have a few typos. If the single heroine is Master Yufu Fairy, she has been in retreat anyway, and the plot is not too much. This is more plot than if there is no female supporting role. If it is a long story, I don't know if the follow-up will be written in a separate volume or something.

Just look at it, and no one will say a word when you look at it, it's sweet, it's so sweet [Adoration] [Admiration] [Admiration] (Push me up)

The plot is good. The first time I got to know the author was when I saw the comic "Avenue of Fortune" and then went to see the author's "Xianjie Grocery Store". I finished looking at the grocery store and then went to see Little Confucianism. I am reading this book now. The author must continue the previous knife style.

Groan! ! ! For Zhiyi and the Fairy Master! ! ! Break the ending of the first few books you wrote! Let this book be your first one with a sweet edge but a happy ending. God is kind enough to see this change [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] Zhiyi is out of luck [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] No, no, no, I am undoubtedly angry, don't [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry]

The writing of this book "Yin of the Knife" is much better than the first three, but there are still a lot of knives. Five of them have been cut before they arrive. Anyway, I think it is quite sunny, cheerful and lively and worth reading [smile]

It is a very interesting book. There are not so many grand events, nor so many life-and-death vendettas. What is there is just a simple and happy life, the pursuit of climbing mountains, the vision of living a good life, confusion and melancholy, at a loss and also the indomitable spirit of moving forward.

Sweet Xiu Xian's sweet words, brothers and sisters, hurry up! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

This book feels a little better than Tongyou Little Scholar. It suits my taste very well. I particularly like some sentences in it. The moon in the sky, the moon in the river, The moon in the sky can be seen in the river, but there is no shadow in the river on the moon. People by the water, people under the snow, The snow flies away and the sun bathing body disappears, the snow melts and the running water reflects people again... The future can be thought of the past, but the future cannot be seen in the past. Therefore, the snow flies and the sun bathing body cannot be seen, and the melting snow and flowing water reflect people again.

I have read more than 200 chapters now, and the content of the story is quite good. As for my personal opinion, there are more than 200 pictures. The protagonist meets none of the partners [smile]. The only one who is considered male is a ball.

I have read the first 50 chapters. It is really interesting. There are a lot of foreshadowings as always. This is still the fourth book of Zhui Dao Ziyin. I wrote a poem "Chen Yuan" The ups and downs are only half a lifetime, and the soul of Chenyang Jiangxi appears. Under the shadow of the half-brushed green mountains, I look forward to the cause and effect of the river and the sun.

I've read more than half of it. The story is pretty good, but a lot of it is just a knife for the sake of the knife. I'm very surprised why Duoduo must die. I forgot about the other things. When it's unknown, Youyou can survive when he goes astray, but Duoduo can't. He meets an old friend in a foreign land. It's hard to tell. If it's set, Youyou is protected by an immortal, but it's unknown. Why is Duoduo not protected by Baize? So will Duoduo be resurrected?

After reading it in the middle of the night, I felt that the words were sharp, and the pen tip seemed to be heavy with iron. I don't say it, but there are chiseling marks everywhere; I don't shout, but every word makes the sound of gold and stone. A cold light seeped out of the ink, illuminating the unwritten darkness on the back of the paper. What were originally a few ordinary words, after being rubbed by this hand, turned into the shape of throwing a spear, standing silently. The night outside the window is thick, and these words are like lanterns on an oil lamp. They crackle and explode, illuminating the room with shocking brightness. Good writing skills are not beautiful, but green and gray bricks, which sink into people's hearts piece by piece.

It's lighthearted and funny, and I recommend it to all book lovers for the sake of no system and no harem.

It's very interesting, but I think you wrote a non-harem story with multiple female protagonists [laughing] I've seen three of them (possibly). I think the author's writing is very good and the writing is not boring. Come on, don't do the cupid chocolate one and choose one. It's best not to have more than 5. It's too much. [Laughing]

Dao Ziyin's new book must be supported! The style is similar to the previous book, I feel like it It still feels like a style that makes people cry and laugh at the same time

Already tied, I can only say that the writing is very good, there is no knife at all.

It's super good-looking and it's the third update. I feel that after changing the style, I feel more relaxed reading Yau Ziyin's books, without the depressing feeling before.

The full text is knife-free, easy and funny, sweet cultivator spreading sugar [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]

It's worthy of the chant of a knife, a great book [Punch Out]

I love reading it. Dao Ziyin's books are quite sweet, not boring at all.

Yes, it's pretty, but when I cry or laugh, my mother thinks I'm crazy. You can give it a try. Although Little Night Demon is a little bit poisonous at the beginning, the plot behind it is still quite good. It was the first time I saw Little Night Demon that I was a little angry and even more heartbroken [laughs]

Dependent on the origin and end of each other, he handles things peacefully, and I really like the author's writing style. Although there are many flaws in the book, for those who like it, the flaws are completely outweighed. Come on!

The beginning is more sophisticated than the previous books, but as long as you know who wrote it, you will know his style [shy] and love to read [laughs] I read it again after 2 months. To be honest, personal preference, I like his book best on Tomato. Every time I read it, I can't help but calm down. I used to look for books everywhere, and I couldn't bear to read them slowly. For me, Dao Ziyin's book is different. It can help me get rid of impetuosity, which is amazing. Anyway, I will always support the author [laughing][laughing][laughing]

All I can say is, it's super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice [laughs]

It's beautiful, I love it, no knife, it's sweet, it's really sweet, it's like I'm back to the day of my first love.

I finally changed my style and I really cried to death. [Cry][cry][cry] There is no knife in the whole process, you can eat with confidence [shy][shy][shy] Why is the score so low? I don't understand a bit

Unknowingly, I have followed the big army [crying]. Needless to say, Dao Ziyin's book is as beautiful as ever. This book is not as sharp as the previous ones, and it is quite sweet [laughing]

It is a really good and beautiful book. The writing style is very fresh, the story description is very coherent, and reading feels like a breeze blowing on your face. It is suitable for readers who read leisure and calm books.

Very beautiful, worthy of the knife chant

If you want to read it, read the author first, I was caught off guard [crying]