
A Dream Start? No, the Boss Is Blocking the Door!
天胡开局?不,是boss堵门!
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Fantasy High-Concept
- Updated
- 8h ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight for Mink Cicada and Sun Wukong fought for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai really It's too strong, if it weren't for the Noxian with an outer ring + Noxus Guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing will kill you, other than that, I I appreciate what Zhuge Liang said about the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain. The words "Young man are so proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", showing Zhuge Liang was indignant at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks, in short The plot of this book is interesting, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, and the fighting The scene is as immersive as the characters are described very well.
After five hundred years of cultivating immortality, in addition to a normal heart, there is also an aura of invincibility. After seeing this, I felt that the writing was quite good, at least it was the type I like. I don't like it when there's a plot like a conspiracy later [laughs awkwardly]
I think it's okay, some chapters are really eye-catching, and the rating is really low. The "Shen Nong" in the comment section also made me see the gap between gods and men.
Not bad. There were a lot of reversals in the early stage. I was also deceived after reading the introduction [shocked]
Personally I think it's pretty good, there's some foreshadowing, but it's not nerve-wracking. It's quite logical so far and can be justified. It's the first life. The second life's statement about the clone is a bit unacceptable. But it depends on how the author handles it later. She didn't have too many ambiguities with many girls, she was just a princess from a small country. Emotional processing feels good right now.
I say I'm giving you 5 stars, but in fact it's only 4 and a half stars. Well, let me tell you my thoughts after watching it, it was quite boring. It's not boring at all. Maybe it's because I didn't sleep all night, but the more I watched, the less interesting it became. Generally speaking. Very confusing. It's okay if you read it as a novel for a novice, but if you read it as a bookworm, it's out of line. A realm of sorts. You have to have the entire outline. The front and rear span is too big. I can't say it's too big, it's very confusing and blurry. In summary, there are not many ups and downs overall. Seeing the middle of the year, I feel like it's not very interesting. But I will keep reading to see what you can write. Generally speaking, I don't like to leave comments. Unless his writing is very awesome, or his writing is very sexy. All I can say about your book now. A little on the high side in the middle. He gave you a rating of 6.5. I think it can be improved by one point to 7.5, Which is about right. I would like to add that your introduction is very good. But it almost makes sense when I see the middle part. I haven't read it later, so I'll go read other books first. Wait until I mention the nature. I may come back later to review more.
It has always been the spiritual root of heaven and the body of immortality. It is said by the system that it is the spiritual root. In the first life, it was the true body. However, it was imprisoned by the system (the powerful villain) and prepared to seize the body. The inner demons were used and it was said that it was the second life. The protagonist does not easily trust others. Don't go around saying that the protagonist is suppressed. He has no knife and no poison. At most, it is a bit dull.
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I wish you long hair on the first day of the new year May your ears move upward on the second day of the Lunar New Year May you grow claws on the third day of junior high school May your ears become sharper on the fourth day of the Lunar New Year May you grow a tail on the fifth day of the Lunar New Year May your tail grow bigger on the sixth day of the Lunar New Year I wish you a deformed knee on the seventh day of the Lunar New Year I wish you have your back paws on the ground on the eighth day of the Lunar New Year I wish you smooth fur on the ninth day of the lunar month May your pupils change color on the tenth day of the Lunar New Year May your ears get bigger on October 11 12 I wish you a soft body Thirteen wishes you will become younger 14th I wish you will gradually become more accepting Lantern Festival wishes you a little beast Blessings fall from heaven, happiness and contentment Someone cares about someone and loves someone Free and unrestrained Wish you become a cute beast in the Year of the Horse
I haven't read all of it, but I've read half of it. This half is very similar to the one-step novel I've read before, which is also a kind of longevity novel about small worlds and big worlds. Then there is too much foreshadowing on the surface, which makes me a little annoyed. If it is the inadvertent foreshadowing, it is very enjoyable to read. I give it four stars. Don't be proud of the author. Overall, it is very good.