[System + Time Travel + Immortal Cultivation + Revenge + Beauty System]
He mastered the magic of immortality without a teacher, and defeated all the players in the server to pursue and counterattack to become a god! Conquer thousands of systems, explore the secret realm of elves, and uncover the epic story of Goblin's origin. It turns out that the ultimate secret of the world is deeply bound to his immortality!
Reader comments
1. Rhythm and density of exciting points are online: bloodline awakening, appearance counterattack, royal family inheritance, enemy pursuit and other core exciting points are intensively output. Each paragraph has a "hook" (such as the transformation of cherry, the life of the girl with pointy ears, the foreshadowing of the killing angel), which is in line with the fragmented scene of mobile reading, and readers will not easily abandon the article.
2. The character design is full of contrast: the green-skinned Goblin transforms into a peerless royal family, the Royal Sister voices a bunny sweater, and the gentle system hides wildness. This "contrast cuteness + identity counterattack" is the key to attracting attention in the novel, especially Cherry's "re-enactment transformation", which has a strong visual impact and a deep memory.
3. The world view is tightly bound to the plot: The setting of Goblin's descendants of fallen angels, the divine curse and the foreshadowing of bloodline inheritance not only complete the world view, but also pave the way for subsequent strength upgrades and revenge counterattacks (against Xiao Xiangmiao, Wu Hao, etc.), And will not make the cool points seem abrupt.
4. Lively sense of interaction: Li Wei's scolding, Xi La's "slap discipline", the delicate guardian, and Cherry's gentleness and wildness. The character interactions are full of life, which relieves the tense battle/suspense atmosphere and gives readers a sense of involvement!
Following up...
The plot of this novel is full of ups and downs, the characters are deeply portrayed, and every turn is amazing. The author uses delicate brushstrokes to outline a world that is both real and fantastic. It is addictive to read and can be called a rare masterpiece in recent times.
Sweet pets, funny stories, and time travel stories. The protagonist encounters betrayal and is on the verge of death to activate the time travel system. Returning to the moment when he was beaten, the system transformed into a beautiful girl to save him, and opened up a wonderful journey to another world with super divine benefits.
The author's writing is witty, the characters are vivid, the contrast between the characters is full, and the world view is closely bound to the plot. It's very immersive to read.
Although the language is humorous, it is logically rigorous. Although the introduction is very long, the plot is absolutely enjoyable along the way. What's even more interesting is that the author gives the beautiful woman an independent personality, and then they travel together into a different world. Very thoughtful.
The author has a novel perspective, a wide range of imagination, and a delicate writing style. The whole novel is logically logical, the plot is compact, and the language is vivid. It just needs to be updated faster. Even the production team members don't dare to rest like this [laughing]
This article adopts a straightforward and smooth online writing style, with humorous and vivid language. It is especially good at using exaggerated lines and scenes to create comedy effects (such as "the system cheats", "high energy throughout the whole process without peeing spots", etc.), Which fits the positioning of "sweet pet + funny". However, some of the descriptions are a bit clichéd, and the emotional transitions are a little less delicate. Fortunately, the pace is fast and the reading is easy and stress-free. The plot design is full of the classic "feeling" logic of online novels: the beginning of the story activates the time-travel system at the moment of betrayal and near-death, quickly building up conflicts and expectations; the setting of the system transforming into a beautiful girl adds to the fun and is worth recommending.
Nothing is expected, there are no bloody routines, and it makes people want to stop. Look higher and higher. Interactions with the girls. Take it alone and you can write a romance novel. It's very interesting, keep writing.
Encountering betrayal, the system was activated. After time travel, the system became a physical entity, and more and more were picked up. It was a very interesting story and very interesting to watch!
Nice, very interesting novel. The protagonist encounters betrayal and encounters the system on the verge of death. The author describes a series of colorful things in a witty and humorous way, which is worth reading [Like]
It is better to be like justice, who may be late, but never absent! After all, justice is an afterthought, and the system is a timely response! He will always show up at the critical moment...
1. Rhythm and density of exciting points are online: bloodline awakening, appearance counterattack, royal family inheritance, enemy pursuit and other core exciting points are intensively output. Each paragraph has a "hook" (such as the transformation of cherry, the life of the girl with pointy ears, the foreshadowing of the killing angel), which is in line with the fragmented scene of mobile reading, and readers will not easily abandon the article. 2. The character design is full of contrast: the green-skinned Goblin transforms into a peerless royal family, the Royal Sister voices a bunny sweater, and the gentle system hides wildness. This "contrast cuteness + identity counterattack" is the key to attracting attention in the novel, especially Cherry's "re-enactment transformation", which has a strong visual impact and a deep memory. 3. The world view is tightly bound to the plot: The setting of Goblin's descendants of fallen angels, the divine curse and the foreshadowing of bloodline inheritance not only complete the world view, but also pave the way for subsequent strength upgrades and revenge counterattacks (against Xiao Xiangmiao, Wu Hao, etc.), And will not make the cool points seem abrupt. 4. Lively sense of interaction: Li Wei's scolding, Xi La's "slap discipline", the delicate guardian, and Cherry's gentleness and wildness. The character interactions are full of life, which relieves the tense battle/suspense atmosphere and gives readers a sense of involvement! Following up...
The plot of this novel is full of ups and downs, the characters are deeply portrayed, and every turn is amazing. The author uses delicate brushstrokes to outline a world that is both real and fantastic. It is addictive to read and can be called a rare masterpiece in recent times.
Sweet pets, funny stories, and time travel stories. The protagonist encounters betrayal and is on the verge of death to activate the time travel system. Returning to the moment when he was beaten, the system transformed into a beautiful girl to save him, and opened up a wonderful journey to another world with super divine benefits. The author's writing is witty, the characters are vivid, the contrast between the characters is full, and the world view is closely bound to the plot. It's very immersive to read.
Although the language is humorous, it is logically rigorous. Although the introduction is very long, the plot is absolutely enjoyable along the way. What's even more interesting is that the author gives the beautiful woman an independent personality, and then they travel together into a different world. Very thoughtful.
The author has a novel perspective, a wide range of imagination, and a delicate writing style. The whole novel is logically logical, the plot is compact, and the language is vivid. It just needs to be updated faster. Even the production team members don't dare to rest like this [laughing]
This article adopts a straightforward and smooth online writing style, with humorous and vivid language. It is especially good at using exaggerated lines and scenes to create comedy effects (such as "the system cheats", "high energy throughout the whole process without peeing spots", etc.), Which fits the positioning of "sweet pet + funny". However, some of the descriptions are a bit clichéd, and the emotional transitions are a little less delicate. Fortunately, the pace is fast and the reading is easy and stress-free. The plot design is full of the classic "feeling" logic of online novels: the beginning of the story activates the time-travel system at the moment of betrayal and near-death, quickly building up conflicts and expectations; the setting of the system transforming into a beautiful girl adds to the fun and is worth recommending.
Nothing is expected, there are no bloody routines, and it makes people want to stop. Look higher and higher. Interactions with the girls. Take it alone and you can write a romance novel. It's very interesting, keep writing.
Encountering betrayal, the system was activated. After time travel, the system became a physical entity, and more and more were picked up. It was a very interesting story and very interesting to watch!
Nice, very interesting novel. The protagonist encounters betrayal and encounters the system on the verge of death. The author describes a series of colorful things in a witty and humorous way, which is worth reading [Like]
It is better to be like justice, who may be late, but never absent! After all, justice is an afterthought, and the system is a timely response! He will always show up at the critical moment...