A Punch Through Time, These Muscles Are Too Brutal

It's very funny. It has the same sense of humor as the original work. The most important thing is the close-up of the character. I like it very much. He is a somewhat strange but kind-hearted hero. I must keep it up. It's really funny. The plot is too tight and you will get tired after reading it for a long time. It is better to relax in the novel.

The author's writing is very good, the plot is very humorous, and the battle strength is not broken. What is especially funny is that the protagonist is wearing a bright purple tight T-shirt that is almost torn apart by his explosive muscles. The cartoon unicorn pattern on it, and the scene where he goes to find a tornado is very funny.

A very One Punch Man style book. Although it doesn't fit the pure and refreshing environment of Tomato. But it does have the style of the original One Punch Man. If you are troubled by stallion stories and romance, I highly recommend reading this book. This fanfic integrates into the world, rather than treating the world view of the original world like a cockroach, tossing it over and over from above. Muscle Idiot, this may be a beautiful thing, it can be regarded as a book that people can enjoy reading when they are tired. Emotionally speaking, there might be some signs of a tornado, right? Anyway, I quite like it.

The protagonist of this book is pseudo-invincible. He kills casually except for a few. There is no doubt that he is righteous in character, but justice is special. He is not as long-winded and restrained as other decent novels. The plot has details, but the main body is okay. The pace of the plot is a little faster. Basically, the protagonist travels through time, and the protagonist begins to adapt to the environment. The protagonist meets the original characters and a series of plot developments are not particularly deliberate. The protagonist's own talent is the same as cheating. Although there is no golden finger, the perception is better than the golden finger. After all, it comes from his own intimate knowledge. The protagonist's pursuit of transformation through force is also step by step, not a sudden awakening with a slap on the forehead. In terms of character design, he is an idiot, but he doesn't make people angry. He doesn't feel like a fool who has an idea, or he looks at things from a different angle. Strong strength equals big muscles. He is basically a person without common sense. Genos also pointed out the cognitive deviation of his own strength in the later period, so he doesn't have the unpleasant feeling like Dihua novels. Hey me, the emotional drama is not bad. It's better than most of Tomato's novels. The transition from abnormal sexual orientation to a gradually normal one, the encounter, the change, everything is well written. The heroine must be Tatsumaki.

I've read it all, so I'll give it four stars. (Of course, the author can give it five stars if he wants, but at that time, some books needed to be rated equally. Does your book need to be rated equally?) It seems that the writing is quite good at this pace. There are no flaws in the plot, and there are no particularly strange situations in terms of emotions. The relationship with everyone is natural, and there is no problem of changing the character of the original character. Although the protagonist has a primitive character. It has a weird feeling of a person traveling through modern times, but his character is quite likable and not annoying. Regarding Saitama's hero rating, it is indeed a bit unpleasant, but the original work is also not good, so it is consistent with the original work. After all, the top leaders of the Hero Association are a group of SBs. I hope to get into the plot of the protagonist Saitama Genos establishing a new Hero Association as soon as possible. Anyway, Tatsumaki is not happy, and most S-class people don't like the top leaders of the association very much, so they might as well just poach them all. Judging from the current situation and the author's cover, we do not rule out the possibility that the author is a lolita fan. There are a lot of twists and turns in this book. I suggest you continue to maintain it. Your aesthetic taste will be greatly improved. But to be honest, this book is actually better than some One Punch Man fanfics that are rated 8 or 9 points, and the number of chapters is not that small. Why is it only rated over 6 points, which feels a bit strange? Also, author, can you please add a few more chapters? It's not enough. It's a book written by tens of thousands of people. I beg you to add more.

It's pretty good among One Punch fandoms. The character's personality is in line with the original work, and the protagonist's combat power is not deliberately suppressed. The protagonist's muscles and brains really look a bit uncomfortable, but they can be tolerated even if they are a little bit poisonous [face covering] [OK] Author, why are you getting shorter and shorter? Do you just concentrate on writing this book? Please, I really can't stand your other books [crying]

If my brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother bothering readers. It seems that the readers are being sentimental. My brother is weak and he just needs to rest more. It is the readers who are urging him so much. Injuring his body also makes people feel sorry for him. It is a pity that he pities his brother. Whether he is injured or not, what does it have to do with the readers? Readers are eager for my brother to update 10 chapters a day, but I am different from readers. My brother can send the manuscript and outline to others, and let others help him check the quality and find typos. [Shy]

It's really cool to watch, it matches my XP muscles, and I can train horizontally. There is no obvious poison in One Punch Man, it is not very brainless, the setting is very reasonable, and it respects the original work. There is no sense of fragmentation in the setting after reading it. This book is the most comfortable one-punch fan.

It's very interesting. The character's personality is very consistent with the original work. The protagonist is also quite funny. The existence of the protagonist really enriches the plot of the original work. It is not a simple plot like other fans. 5 Stars for encouragement.

A very good one-punch book. July follows the original work and is still the most powerful one. Although an additional character is added, the plot is very reasonable and reasonable. It can be given full marks. It also knows the interesting aspects of the characters and makes the truth about Saitama's strength revealed.

To be honest, this book is really well written. Most of the plots in the plot are basically there. The main reason is that the protagonist is not too weak, but it is not too strong either. It is very strong. Dragon Peak is strong (currently). Apart from the plot being too tight and the daily writing being too weak, there are no major shortcomings. The characters and settings also fit the original work. Although the writing style still needs to be improved, the creative ideas and plot are indeed quite good, and it is considered to be a very good one among One Punch fandoms.

It's so beautiful, the writing is smooth, and the characters are very realistic. And there are no random settings because of the protagonist, the protagonist himself is also very interesting

The best One Punch Man work I have read in the past two years, it is actually on Tomato, otherwise I would have wanted to give it a reward. The emotions are delicately written, and the plot is also good. I will update more quickly. I feel that this book has the potential to become a god with this momentum.

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It's quite good and more daily, the character of the main character has always been very stable and has never been broken, the characters in One Punch are also very consistent with the original work, and the emotional line is also ok, but the ending is a bit too fast. In fact, I can write more daily stories and then finish it. The author probably can't write anymore. Anyway, I'll see you after reading the other books👋

Why write about a female protagonist? [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's not bad. It depends on what the author writes later. It seems that some interesting plots are not sure how to develop because of the protagonist's interference. For example, Fubuki wants to accept Saitama into Fubuki's team, but seeing King and Genos both in his funny scenes may be gone.

Nice character, high quality

The tornado will be filled into cream v-puffs [crying]

I think it's pretty good, and the author doesn't agree with that. It's not like some novels where the one-horned fairy is actually written as the peak of dragon level. How can something that can't even be defeated by black light be at the peak of dragon level?

It's pretty cool, but I don't know much about the power of one punch.

What I'm looking forward to now is the improvement direction of the protagonist in the future. If it still follows Saitama's characteristics, I really don't know how to improve the protagonist's strength in the future, but I look forward to adding a limiter setting to the protagonist [laughing]

The writing is good, and the handling of the plot is relatively smooth. There is nothing about the collapse of combat power.

Not bad, not bad. I brought the protagonist into Yujiro and it was quite fun to watch.

It's very interesting, very faithful to the original style, and the main character is added seamlessly, but there is no super expansion at the moment, and it relies a bit too much on the original plot line.

So cool! The novel was written with excitement in the Sa family.

The subject matter is very good. So far, the content is nothing special. The boring plot is okay. Although it cannot reach the full score, it still has a score of seven or eight, but I still give it a full score.

This book is okay, it's nice

Beautiful [admiration][admiration][admiration], perfect score for Saitama without snow

Very nice, five star support