[Demon Slayer] Yuyue: Give Me a Choice?

This is the book that best fits the character image in my mind... I have always liked the character of Yue Yue. I think his character is really cool. He is selfish, snobbish, narrow-minded, and twisted. He has always been a person who will do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. Such a character is very suitable for suppressing. Watching him struggle, watching him linger, whether it is an explosion of incompetent rage or a despair of despair, it is delicious! ! ! I have always been looking forward to what kind of choices he will make again based on his nature of seeking advantages and avoiding disadvantages.

The characters and plot arrangements are quite good, and it sticks closely to the original work and is more reasonable. There is nothing that completely steals the spotlight of other characters, and it continues to dig deeper based on the characters of the original work. Nice~~ The only drawback is that it was written late and I didn't save many chapters. I was so impatient that I didn't have to read the following content (King's words in a hurry) (but the author updates very quickly (praise the author)) Seeing this, I can't help but talk more about my feelings about the original work. Yue Yue's role in the story of Demon Slayer is very perfunctory, and what he shows is that he has always been unlucky. In the same way, the third brother who stole money met the master and Lianxue, and he was kicked out to choose between life and death. From then on, he began to constantly break through the bottom line and fall down the road; in the same way, the ghost beans ate the other side flowers to stay sane and was not controlled by Wumei. He was unlucky enough to meet the black dead Mou before the decisive battle. Even at that time, he was already in Grade A and just one step away from the pillar. The protagonist can meet the right person, be saved from the brink, be forgiven and be treated specially, but he has never been so unlucky, so unlucky, unlucky, so unlucky that until death, no one knows or has the opportunity to know why he became who he is today. These contents are obviously just a small plot added by the screenwriter, but the author is gentle and not a stepping stone tool. He even has to bear the author's malice as a target. This is why I can't let go of this unlucky child no matter what. I feel too unworthy for him, and I feel angry that he is not favored by fate. Why can the protagonist be able to do it but he can't. In fact, it is also a childish idea, because for the sake of script performance, someone has to play the villain. I can understand the emergence of this situation, but emotionally I still hope that his story will not stop with his death as a ghost. If fate is not gentle to you, just go on quietly in the love of the cook, and live in fan works. There are still people in this world who will quietly prefer you and cry for your happiness quietly, so keep going. It doesn't matter if you don't regret it, it doesn't matter if you don't give in, and it doesn't matter if you don't change. Love and happiness will always catch up with you in this world, so move forward with confidence.

Yue Yue's language, behavior, and motivations are the original novel. The author must have thought carefully about it. The novel is of high quality and high productivity. I declare that all the people who recommend it must read it (Dark Creeping). It is delicious and beautiful. I like you, wife, wife! !

It's tied, it's so beautiful! The teacher is really awesome! The character of Yu Yue is well developed! Yes! Even if Xiao Ao starts over again, he will not deny his previous self, he just wants to live on His actions are also very consistent with the character, there is no sudden change, and he does not want to bear the sin → rushes to save people (although Xiao Ao has not admitted it yet) → _____ (Looking forward to the teacher's next shaping!) Because of you, teacher, Xiao Ao will definitely feel clear happiness this time, and Xiao Ao will definitely be able to reach a warm ending! [Cry][cry] Then it's about you, teacher. From Chapter 0, I saw that you expressed your lack of hesitation. I seem to be able to see myself, but it's different. I like a certain character, but I'm afraid that I won't write about him or her, and I'm worried that my understanding will be wrong, so I don't dare to finish writing it and let others read it. But teacher, you are very brave. You said at the beginning, "Hongyue has been seen by many people. If we don't ride on this trend, I'm afraid that even if we want to make a fortune in the future, there won't be many people who still remember Hongyue and are willing to stop for such a "senior brother." You who said this will be the heroism of my youth. I mean I have tried to write articles and know that it is difficult, so teacher, you are really awesome, weida and brave. Your bravery is really inspiring, and you have written so many words in a short period of time. It is really amazing! Even though this book may be shelved later for various reasons (no curse! I mean that the present life is more important, and it is normal for everyone to be busy in this life), the encouragement given to me at this moment will never disappear! And the book itself is excellent (＾ω＾)👍🏻 Finally, boss, I will always follow you! ( ^３^ )╱ (P. S. I have a small suggestion, that is, Chapter 0 is called Sui Sui Nian, but the beginning of the text is inside. Will some readers skip Chapter 0 and start reading from Chapter 1 and miss the beginning? I am worried about this, but it is very rare to read a book without reading the "Preliminary Summary", so it should not be a big problem.)

This book is so well written. The author completely depicts the inner sourness of the protagonist, whether it is the jealousy of his junior fellow apprentice who is talented despite not working hard, the irritability of the master who prefers the lively Zenitsu who cries, or the fear of early death when the stripes are revealed, all the inner descriptions are flesh and blood. It is the growth of such an imperfect person that touches people. He died several times to protect others. Even though his heart is like scorched earth, thunder and lightning, he can still insist on killing ghosts and becoming pillars. The most incredible thing is that he never denies the mistakes of the past, faces the sins of his temple calmly, does not explain anything to the victims, and constantly fights to atone for his sins.

This is the only article about Zhou Yue that Tomato has seen so far. The author is very serious about describing changes in Zhou Yue's psychological activities without affecting his nature. Moreover, the storyline is well arranged, the writing is very good, and the sense of immersion is strong. While reading it, you can completely understand why Yue Yue will get better and why the sun will shine. This is a novel with excellent storyline and writing. And the author should not look at the 3-star evaluation in the comment section. It is not that describing the hatred from Zhuo Yue's perspective is called Xi Zi, but that Zhuo Yue is such a person. His wandering experience has turned him into a petty, vengeful and wild person. The author's description of the complex psychological activities of Yue Yue and Grandpa may be whitewashing for some people. This is not whitewashing. This is called perfecting the character image. Although Zhu Yue's accusation against his grandfather was unreasonable, everyone knew that Zhu Yue had done something wrong, but it was because he was Zhu Yue and he was such a vicious and petty person that he would make such unreasonable accusations. Explaining the logic behind the behavior is not called whitewashing, it is called completing the settings and patching! When will everyone realize that Zhou Yue is a villain, so he has malice towards everything in the world? What you brought in is Zhou Yue's perspective. It is certain that Zhou Yue accused his grandfather. If he had admitted his mistake from the beginning, I would not have read this book until he knew how to repent. The characters are directly OOC. There are also some people who come up to fight against the Xiaohongshu fan circle. Can you please stop defining and labeling others? They say they hate the fan circle but are actually doing the worst things for the fan circle. Originally, not many people read this novel, and the author didn't make a lot of money, so he updated it diligently. You can read it for free, so why don't you keep your mouth shut? And when you come here to read novels, you have only one identity, that is, the reader. You can write negative reviews about the book, the content, and the writing style, but you only write negative reviews about the author himself, and you are always slapped with a thumbs down. He says he hates the rice circle, but in fact he is the most obsessed with the rice circle. He wishes he could stand on a moral high ground and criticize others every day.

It's unexpectedly good-looking... I really like the fact that it doesn't deny his essence or erase his personality... It looks like Zhuo Yue has really come back to the world all over again. The writing is also good. I just wanted to read it casually, but I got to this point...

It's really well written. I didn't dare to read it when I read the synopsis at first, because the plot in the temple made me feel ashamed and embarrassed. I was afraid of being discovered if I did something wrong. It's really well written, and there's no whitewashing. At first I just thought the character of Yue Yue was cute, but after reading this book, I felt completely different and I was really attracted to it. The plot is reasonable, the characters are well understood, and the drama is exciting. I'm so happy to be able to see so much in one go. It's really silky smooth bit by bit. I'm completely in love with this character. It's so tenable and reasonable. At first, I hoped to change the past. After all, it was unreasonable and indeed a stain. But after looking at it, I felt that what happened was a fact and there was no need to hide it. People should always look forward.

The character's personality is very restored. It seems that the character's personality was researched and there is no distortion. The writing is smooth, the plot arrangement is reasonable, and the combat power setting is reasonable. I would like to ask the author! I have read the original work several times. How to write this type of fan fiction? I have read many books, but in fact they are all fake and the characters are very thin, like paper figures. It's okay if you don't want to answer. The writing is very good, please keep up the good work. After all, this is really about generating electricity for love. Ha ha

"Choose Not" was the reason why I downloaded Tomato, and it was also the first Yue Yue fanfic I read. The author has thought deeply about Yue Yue and can express all his emotions in accurate words. I really, really admire him. The two chapters that impressed me the most, one was Chapter 113 (Ghost Encountered in the Temple), two pages of pure text impact, slapped Xiao Ao on my face at the moment when his sanity was broken. So Ao Yue asked Xing Ming, "I am so scared that my mind is blank, can't you understand?" I feel that I can understand it better than Xing Ming. I have learned the five stages of grief, denial-anger-pleading-frustration-acceptance. These are all reflected in Chapter 113. I could live before and then I can live again - denying the drastic changes in life, life is like a comic play - angry at fate, why let him have this dream - pleading that nothing remains the same, and starting to wander again - depressed. So much emotion. Although the tone of the description is very sharp and fits Yuyue's character, the words are filled with flesh and blood called "sadness" where words cannot reach. At this time, when I read Chapter 50 "Didn't the ghost ruin my life?", I felt the same sadness. The second is Chapter 62, the discussion of "What is Zhuoyue?", A contradiction that all Zhuoyue fans cannot avoid. I think that most works should try to highlight the good side of Yuge, such as Zenitsu's "determination to work hard to the end" and the more generally recognized "humanity with strong vitality and self-esteem as the highest value", but it is easy to completely discard the bad side (such as my own poor attempt). A big change in personality after rebirth or time travel is like killing the soul of the original Yue Yue; under the influence of various variables, moving a little bit away from the standard of "bad guy" will bring surprises; even if he does good things, he does not choose voluntarily, but is pushed by responsibility and position. No one asked him if he wanted to do this. This reversal and reversal is really exciting. Zhuo Yue has the determination to work hard to the end, but the direction has never been to become a hero. He can recognize who he is and fight for himself. This replaces the traditional plot of the protagonist sacrificing his life for justice, allowing Zhuo Yue to complete a transformation, and also writes about the complexity of human nature, so free, so powerful... In addition to these two treatments, there are many other advantages, such as the description of group portraits. I feel that the writing force is strong enough, so I am not stingy at all in using a little ink to establish other characters, and the viewer is even adding more emphasis. He is very good at exploring the charming characteristics of the characters and presenting them in a way that is consistent with the original work; for example, the detailed creation of Lethality, the most impressive part is the children in the temple playing games, Zhuo Yue acting as a ghost to catch people; Zhuo Yue's experience from the temple to Peach Mountain; Zhuo Yue "hating" Ciwu Langdu Concerned about his prosthetic limbs; Tsumugi is convinced that he can be happy from Tanjiro's letter; the reaction of Momoyama and his wife after Tsumugi's death, etc.; For example, the discussion on the outlook on life and values, what is Tsumugi, the reasons that drive Yuki's life to fall/move forward, the origin of his pain, and the happiness he expects. Overall, "The Choice" is a flesh-and-blood work. My reading experience is very shallow. I feel that "The Choice" is as smooth and profound as the books recommended by the school. But compared to those, it is easier to choose or not. I can actually understand a little bit and leave a book review... I am still a little ashamed to say that the author's writing is very wonderful. If it were not limited by the original work, if this was a completely original work, perhaps the content would be deeper and more authentic. However, making the preset loopholes and gaps believable and three-dimensional to a certain extent is one of the reasons why I admire this work. If I want to judge it by the standards of original works, it lacks the surprise of completing the world. (Sorry, I have already started rambling, but I really admire the author so I want to say more) Finally, "Zuo Yue's life was ruined by ghosts" is deeply reflected in this article, but for Zhuo Yue, the temple tragedy seemed to be caused by other children who went too far and whose lives were threatened by ghosts. In fact, stealing money was the earliest direct trigger. Yue Yue's anxiety and ambition could easily destroy him in this era and age. "Other children are not good" does not mean "Hongyue is okay". Of course, without this kind of competitiveness and motivation, Zhuo Yue would not be Zhuo Yue. All we can say is that we must abide by the law seriously. Um. Respect "Give me a choice". Congratulations on the completion.

It's good-looking, and the capital character Zhuo Yue is very charming. His character of high sensitivity, low sense of compatibility, paranoia, arrogance, and low self-esteem is very well grasped. The character is very three-dimensional. I completely understand Zhuo Yue's charm. I like him very much. He is an imperfect image of an ordinary person. He is afraid of death, has ordinary talents, is not a virgin, and has no dedication. He is jealous, hateful, and crazy. He does not understand the world and hates the weak and admires the strong. What others call "thunderstorms" has accompanied him for three-quarters of his life. The humidity left by that thunderstorm made his bones hurt unbearably on rainy days. He has lived in the shadow of his master and Zenitsu all his life. He hates his master's favoritism, hates Zenitsu's weakness, and hates the Thunder Breathing Style that he can never learn. He hates. He hates why Shang Xianyi, who is rare in a century, happened to meet him during his patrol. Why? Why! Why can't I survive? I just chose life between morality and life. I just want to survive! How kind you are, Zenitsu. You asked me why I chose to become a ghost. I just wanted to live. Am I wrong? What can I do? What I encountered was a once-in-a-century Shang Xianyi. My self-esteem was trampled under my feet, and I was groveling just to survive. The box of happiness has already had holes, and happiness will continuously slip away from the box, leaving behind a broken and empty shell in the end. Among a group of members of the Demon Slayer Corps who are willing to sacrifice their lives to kill ghosts, I am so out of place. They are saints. Am I a villain who just wants to live and is afraid of death? I want to live and live longer, even if I become a ghost. Life and morality are eternal propositions for human beings. When the choice between life and morality, 0% and 100%, is placed in front of me, I can only choose life, and I cannot violate my original code. I gave up everything I owned in order to live longer, but in the end I couldn't escape the fate of a short life. Destiny, why are you so unfair to me, why don't you always give me a choice.

The writing is particularly good. Although I haven't seen Etake in the original version, I only know that he is Zenitsu's senior brother. He is called "Natsuma" by everyone. In one sentence, he can be described as arrogant, rude and greedy for life. Zenitsu's evaluation of him is that there is a hole in the box of happiness in his heart. No matter how much it is filled, it is constantly losing. If it is not discovered early and repaired, it will never be satisfied. This evaluation is quite objective. In this fanfic, Yue Yue is also repairing himself unconsciously, and in the process of saving others, he is also saving himself. Ei Yue has also met more and more people in this world, and he will definitely be cared about by more people (⑅˃◡˂⑅)

The writing is very good. The author has a thorough understanding of Zhuo Yue, and it is at least 80% compatible with the original work. The other 20% is because the original work did not mention Zhuo Yue too much, and the author can be said to treat all the main characters equally. He has thought about the possible psychological activities of each character. No OOC has been found so far.

It seems that my favorite article so far is written by Zhu Yue Center [The Masterpiece of Bird Food] The writing is very good, the characters are very personal, it is really rare not to have OOC or anything, the plot development is also reasonable, there are no particularly outrageous hooks, and the combat power is also reasonable. It feels like a new possibility under the world view of the original work. The way the characters establish connections is also very smooth. I finally found a novel where the main character suddenly becomes a heartthrob. My favorite part at the moment is the self-analysis during the defense, which is very characteristic of the character. I feel that the portrayal of the character is very three-dimensional and real. I especially like the inner struggle of this complex character, instead of suddenly admitting his mistakes and being easily forgiven (that would make the previous experience not worth mentioning) Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the author's plot after Da Da. Come on, Da Da [please update]

It tied all night, which looked great. [Like] I have reached chapter 70 so far. The plot rhythm is very tight, the characters are well understood, and there is basically no OOC. Self-interest is self-interest. There is nothing wrong with wanting to live. If you do something wrong in the process, you will slowly correct it. It is really heart-warming to watch Zhuo Yue gain happiness bit by bit. The ending must be HE. However, people who are easy to substitute should not stay up all night to watch. Some parts in the middle will make people feel very angry and wronged when they take Zhuo Yue to watch. Anyway, I was about to explode with anger. Originally, I stayed up all night, and I was even more angry when I saw Zhuo Yue being wronged. There is a lot of interaction between Zhuo Yue and Shui Hu in this book. It really makes people feel that Zhuo Yue is more suitable for Shui Hu's atmosphere. Compared with Lei Hu's deliberate straightening [but in fact unconscious bias], the atmosphere of Shui Hu in this article is more suitable for Zhuo Yue. [Actually, I feel that Zenitsu's personality is not suitable for being Ao Yue's junior disciple. Originally, he would be annoyed if his master was robbed. However, the person who robbed his master's attention still has this kind of personality. He wastes his talents and does not work hard. This is exactly the kind of person that Ao Yue looks down on. That's why the conflict is so deep. If it were Shui Hu, the relationship might not be that good, but there will definitely not be such a deep conflict. Zenitsu, if you don't change, your eldest brother will no longer want you. I will soon change from the Leihu Brotherhood to the Gou Shui Party. After all, it seems that Gou Yue and the Shui Hus will get along more happily. I definitely support Gou Yue's happiness priority. ] Yes, there are also Qiang Tu and Qiang Yue who are very good at fighting. I won't comment on other places, but this article is really good at fighting. I will abandon you Zenitsu and join Qiang Yue, who is a more authoritative combination in this article. [No cp, this is my fault. ] Come on, I'm really looking forward to the next plot development, especially the interaction between Heilong and Heilong [although the interaction between Heilong and Heilong in this article only exists in memories], but I really like this pair of "Lin Daiyu", the Warring States period "Lin Daiyu" and his disciple Taisho "Lin Daiyu". [Like] By the way, has the author considered writing a CP as a side story? If so, I'll vote for it. [I'm sorry Zenitsu, but you really can't compete with Qiong Rabbit in this article. ]

In my opinion, it is one of the top three Tomato Demon Slayer fics. It is very well written, and the plot design is very good. It is logical to have the protagonist always be on the scene. For example, if the author wants the protagonist to participate in the battle between Yanzhu and Shangxian San, he will let the protagonist and Shixuan have a relationship in advance, and it is reasonable for the protagonist, who does not care about his teammates, to take the initiative to help. , Saved Flame Pillar, the combat power design is quite reasonable, and the characters are well created, as if they are the characters in the plot, especially Yiyong. The only shortcoming is my personal problem, that is, the influence of the rabbit on the protagonist is too great, and there are too many scenes. I feel that it is not good. That's it. If you like Demon Slayer fanfiction, you can't miss it.

Really amazing writing, very thorough character analysis, enjoyable to read, and the character capture is as accurate as the original! There are also fighting scenes, which are usually written as boring as dish names, or a hurried account, but the fighting in this book has a solid sense of control. Whether it is a two-way or three-way battle situation, different character perspectives, or the planning and efforts of each combatant, many scenes are like watching a TV series or comics, which are very exciting, and the transitions of the article are also very gorgeous. It must have taken a lot of effort to write. (Also: The cat works so hard, the cat must do well) The combat power design is also very reasonable and does not float, so it can fight steadily. Each character is well-shaped, unlike some novels that overexaggerate the protagonist's abilities and make everyone else look like they are just trying to make a fool of themselves. The pillars of this book are really pillars that stand tall in the sky (be like stable enough for a cat to lean on). Everyone is going all out, and no one is missing in order to win and to destroy (except for the world famous painting: The Snake Pillar is on the way)

Super awesome! I spent my time in various places and read many works, but the articles that portray the characters as human beings are the best. Even if you haven't watched Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, you can appreciate the delicate writing style, which is very concise and clear. Even though this is the author's first published book, could it be that he was originally a super-powerful teacher or a super-experienced reader who wrote fan fiction? I tried to write a short article for my favorite CP. It was very difficult to write. The story that can be written so naturally and still reflect the understanding of the character is so powerful. I really wish I could write a story that feels like this and write such logical chapters in one day! What a genius, such a powerful author, how did you do it, so powerful?

It was because of this book that I first learned about the character of Dao Yu Yue in detail. In my mind, I can no longer describe this work as good. Such a lively young man, how much effort and love it takes to write such words. I probably really fell in love with this young man because of this work. In fact, I really want to write a long review to praise it, but my ability is TT. A very delicate book, with no exciting plot or formulas, only love for Yu Yue. Respect, understand, and prefer. . . At the end of the writing, it changed from a book review to a praise for the author, but that's it. It feels like the author not only loves Yue Yue, but also loves every character in Guigui. It is precisely because everyone writes so delicately that it makes the boy feel so alive. Thank you for your creation and introducing me to such a wonderful guy. I will brush it again and again!

This is too delicious, the fangirl is so great, and Xiao Yu is so cute. When life is hard, he wants to live. After surviving, he wants to live better. After living better, he wants the people he cares about to live better. The box of happiness accumulates little by little. The original work is really too sad. Yu Yue is actually very sensitive in his heart. He feels that the master's unintentional words and actions are due to the talent of his junior brother, which makes the master partial. Although he doesn't say it, he still cares about it in his heart. The author really writes so well! ! It completely dissected Yue Yue's heart. I will always follow the goddess [crying]

I would like to name it one of the four great masterpieces of Yuantui! Worth it, very worth it! Only then did I realize that there was no rating. It was really good. There were almost no breakdowns in the character design of the original work. The first time I watched it, it was basically a catch-up. It was hard not to like it. Before, I still refused to see Xiao Ao's actions because he was insulted by many people. Even 🐊 in the end, he directly erased the responsibility of those children by saying "there is a reason for lying". I was so mad. The author's plot made me look directly at Xiao Ao. The most touching part was the bloody questioning in that chapter. It touched my heart and made me understand Xiao Ao deeper. I also saw the Xiao Ao in your heart and the thoughts you wanted to express. The author's writing was really wonderful. It reminded me of the passage in "Ambition" "I look at your eyes that refuse to retreat, and I am not sure that I represent the light." The short plot in the plot planned all the "evil" of Xiao Ao. He was wrong, but he didn't know how bright those children were. They were all orphans. The only good thing was carried by Bei Mingyu Xingming. So, is the evil done by one person or a group of people? There are questions that cannot be answered in Justice, and everyone's character is very well understood! Living is Xiao Ao's biggest ambition. Your charm makes me infinitely happy. If you didn't have talent, you wouldn't have been chosen by Sang Dao and Hei Shimo. You are really awesome. Xiao Ao should be the emperor! I just feel the teacher's warmth and delicate love, which belongs to Xiao Ao alone. We all love you, Xiao Ao! I really like the article written by the teacher [crying] Come on, teacher! I don't know what to say, but the teacher is awesome, the teacher is amazing, the teacher is from God! If you shed a tear, I will slaughter a city!

Amazing fan work, the writing is good, it has the flavor of the original, and the characters are not OOC. Although the protagonist is Yue Yue, a traitor who chose betrayal in order to survive in the original work, the author of this book really brought the character to life. The author analyzes his inner thoughts bit by bit, and the characters who had few roles in the original work have been expanded and filled. He is no longer the so-called timid and rebellious young man, but an ordinary person who has been tortured bit by bit by the world. He knows how to adapt to society. After being threatened by a ghost once, in order not to be threatened again, he fortunately studied under a teacher just so that he would not make the same mistake again. I am very grateful to the author for letting me get to know the character of Yue Yue again. I give you a five-star review. In the first part, he really created a Yue Yue in the eyes of the author, but later he turned into a classic central air-conditioned male protagonist, who was on good terms with everyone, and those who were unhappy with him were just tsundere. I feel that the subsequent plot is that everyone's martial arts and medical skills are suddenly superb, and everyone survives, and they can pass through the infinite city without any damage. Although I know that the purpose of fan fiction is to achieve things that the original work failed to do, the first part is obviously very realistic, and I worked very hard to distort some of the plots of the original work. The second part seems to be like Versailles immediately. The original work has a pillar training chapter just to adjust the emotions, so it is very relaxed. But with this plot direction, will the pillar be destroyed later? It can't be possible. Then the whole plot kept going up and up like this, I really felt a bit like a mask of pain, and the protagonist got the best ending with almost no cost. Some people must say that I don't want to see Zhu Yue live a good life, but I like the feeling of bitterness and hatred in the front. I really don't want to see the beautiful world in the back. The author simply tricked him into killing him. I'm really sad. There are so few articles that maintain the same style throughout.

Whether it is the confrontation part of the temple incident or the emotional balance between Momoyama master and apprentice, it is all very well written. Xiao Ao gradually opens up his heart in love, and finally he is no longer alone. He has a true friend and has become the only one for others. He is seen and recognized. He is a truly special and unique existence. "There will never be another Dao Yu Ao Yue." (There is also a side story in which Xiao Ao entertains my childhood self. It's so cute.) Anyway, it's very good-looking. I'm looking forward to the author's... Um, it seems to be called "Magatama Chronicles" or "Sansheng Sansei Daotama Ming"... Anyway, I'm looking forward to it. Come on [Like]

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I want to laugh when I think that "Options" that has been praised for so long is an alias, and the real name is "Howl of the Lone Wolf". What kind of magical name did you come up with, foreign persimmon? Hahahahahaha Let's be serious, the character design is very reasonable and I highly recommend it to everyone. The kitten is surrounded by happiness. Now that I have reached the extra chapter, I read the introduction again. I was shocked to find that Da Da actually wrote the CP line of righteous ninja. I can't see it at all (I am not outrageous). I am not friendly to kindness, but I still accepted this brother in the later period. There is no slander at all, no ambiguous CP, pure cb. All in all highly recommended!

It's so well written. I recently rewatched Demon Slayer and found such a good fan. The writing, plot development rhythm, and character creation are all very good. I like it very much (I read it several times a day woohoo What impressed me deeply was the expression in the first reply and after returning, "Aren't you killing ghosts for someone else? Didn't the ghosts ruin his life?!", Well... It must have shocked me. When I asked "Why join" before, I thought about the aspects of protecting my life and living better. Here, I became more aware of the influence of ghosts on Yuyue and his own hatred for it. Then, the writing is really like the original work after getting some "little hooks", not so unlucky, and can repair its own box and then walk away. It shows the complexity of the character and some gradual and reasonable changes. It does not simply delete bad things and character flaws, or "repent" easily. For example, regarding some things in the temple, during the defense in the article, Yue Yue struggled not to say "regret", and did not want to deny himself who had worked hard to live in the past. When writing, the teacher also chose to retain this part of the plot, instead of "just say that the subjective intention is not bad/did not happen/misunderstanding, etc." To resolve it, which is really amazing. It feels difficult to process but makes the characters feel alive and real. Also, I have always been an upright person in any work (I don't have any strong feelings of love or hate, but that's the general tendency), so I had no feelings for him... Compared to the instrumentalization of my feelings a few years ago (someone needs to be the villain), the creation of this book has given me a better understanding of Zhuo Yue than I did five or six years ago, and it provides a good analysis and interpretation. Thanks to the teacher for bringing me understanding and being such a good fan. I hope that the character will be less scolded and more people will see the courage to post. Finally, I wish this character you love can be happy.

It's very beautiful, and I like the tenacious vitality of Zhuo Yue who is struggling to survive. He is like an underappreciated dead tree, but he grows taller and taller through his own efforts and efforts. However, there are always people who don't like the dead tree and want to cut him off by the roots. He is an alien among people, because he is now In fact, he just wants to survive, so he also kills ghosts with all his strength. Although he is not good enough, he also protects people's safety. He became a Grade-A swordsman by wandering on the edge of life and death many times. He is not a villain. When others call him a beast, I really don't know what to say. He is obviously just a He is just an ordinary person who is struggling to survive. No one is truly pure and kind. That is why I watch anime. I like to watch people who stick to their beliefs. Even if a single-plank bridge goes dark, they will never regret it. That is really great. In my opinion, people are full of positive energy. It's good, but the reason why I like them is that they are firm in their beliefs and move forward bravely. There are actually many villains that I recommend, such as Dotore, Black Dead Mou, Tong Mo, etc. So I think Yue Yue is really good. He can fight for everything for the goal of living, which is good.

So pretty! ! ! Recommended for all friends who like Yuyue to see it! It fits the character of Yu Yue in the original work very well, and the interactions with other characters are not OOC. If I like to watch CB, I really enjoyed watching it! Big cheers for the author! [Sending Hearts] It is New Year's Day, the day when the main text is finished. On the New Year's Eve, Zhu Yue ushered in the future he hoped for. I followed the series to the end of the main text, and repeatedly read the middle plot while catching up. After watching the score soar from 7.0 To 9.4 (It could be higher), this article is the number one Demon Slayer fanfic I have ever read. First of all, this article is the true direction of the plot. There is no collapse situation in the setting of the article. The protagonist Yue Yue is the original Yue Yue himself. He is very suitable without soul wear or anything. There is no whitewashing. He does everything for survival and his own safety. Nothing can get around this his most fundamental principle. At the same time, it needs the affirmation of others, the unique affirmation. The descriptions in the article are very consistent with his personality, and the relationship given to Yue Yue in the article is also very consistent with what I need: three opportunities for resurrection, even though he has been reborn and grown, he will still go to the wrong direction due to various reasons (too impatient to be promoted, not enough rest, too big a gap in strength) After death, the combat power is basically not destroyed. This is one of the things that I think is particularly outstanding about this article - it is not that easy to redeem everyone to pay for your sins. The butterfly effect you bring will also make the future confusing. Then use your most cherished life to look at it and see how to choose in the future. In the article, "Can't you feel happiness?" Question to Yu Yue and "Why did I meet a ghost?..." Zhuo Yue's many questions about fate. These two paragraphs are so well written that I got goosebumps when I read them. The author's understanding of Zhuo Yue's image is really awesome [Sparrow Food Masterpiece] Then, the descriptions of other characters are also very good. It is really not OOC at all. After saving a character, there will be no situation where this character does not appear in the subsequent plot. The protagonist will not be highlighted only. Everyone has what he needs to face. The distribution of characters and plots is very reasonable. Take brother Anjuro as an example. In a more general fanfic, he may disappear after saving the brother in the Mugen Train chapter. But in this article, you can see his cooperation with Yu Yue in the sword-forging village chapter, and the fateful battle with the third brother in the decisive battle. It was really touching when I read it. Finally, the interaction between the characters is particularly original! The pure cb (friendship and family affection) makes me feel comfortable when I watch it, the mutual redemption between Brother Yue and Qiang Tu, brothers Lei finally reaching the goal of fighting side by side, the "unfortunate relationship" conflict between Yanzhu and Zhuo Yue... I really want to kneel down to the author [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]! Reading this article is really a great blessing for me in 2025! I'm really lucky to have the same recommendation as the author [shy]! I re-wrote this follow-up review to express my praise for this article! Always love this article! Youyue, you will have the future you want!

This book is really beautiful! But I think he didn't write the characters' personalities on the surface, which is really great. For example, I saw in other fanfics that Brother Feng has a more or less heroic feeling, but this book is different. He writes Feng very full and three-dimensional, and the same goes for other characters. Each one feels special and flesh-and-blood. And everyone has the most basic respect and understanding from others. I feel that this is what real good friends look like, instead of prying into your privacy and exposing your scars to others because they care about your preferences. Moreover, the pace of this book also made me very comfortable. It is not the kind that makes people nervous throughout the whole process, but it is also not the kind that is too slow and slow. This kind of book is very comfortable. The plot that should be high-burning and warm should be written in a very warm way, and the characters are really relatable! This is really something that many novels cannot do. The author captures the arrogance, conceitedness, coldness, and sensitivity in Nong's heart. Forgive me, I don't know how to describe it, but the author just wrote him out. He made the characters very flesh and blood, which is really great! Temple Bureau wrote this with a more formal attitude, and some of the settings of Crocodile at the beginning were quite confusing, such as the division of heaven and hell. But the author added his own changes to the original work to make the whole thing harmonious, and the additions are very fitting and reasonable, and the author's love can really be seen. The author's writing style is really super comfortable, super gentle, and really super advanced writing style!

The writing of this book is really delicate. It's exactly what I thought it would be. I've seen too many super-heroic (stereotypes) written before and it's OOC. The setting of Qiang Rabbit is also very good. Usually he is rescued directly, which is very unique. I really like the friendship between Xiaoying and Qiang Rabbit in this article. They are true friends, a special friendship! I really like watching them interact. The content is very interesting, and everyone's interactions are very cute (what Xiao Ao did after rebirth was not completely forced to atone for his sins. I saw an article before, and it seemed that I saw it. If you don't help the other party, you will directly bear the pain of the other party, which is a bit uncomfortable to watch) I like it very much. This was when I was reborn in Momoyama, because I really wanted to see the scene after Xiao Ao and Xing Ming reunited. Life in a private temple felt much better, but it was even worse when I was kicked out [Crying] Did you wait until the dark night, but unfortunately it didn't come in the end [Crying] [Crying] When I heard that You Zhu died, I was also confirming whether it was him (two people who don't have long mouths) It was really funny to see Zenitsu in Yoshiwara Xiaozhu, but I thought he could also dress up as a woman. He failed to advance, so I asked him what happened in the temple. He had a heart attack, and he was a good rabbit. Why were there so many things at that time that really hit me [crying] Yes, why was he the one who met the ghost? His life was also ruined by the ghost. Although humans are not much better. The extra episode was both uncomfortable and funny to watch. It was quite funny when Onikata complained. Although I felt that Sayo was quite pitiful. He had experienced evil spirits and was blamed by the teacher all the time. However, the little boy also encountered a ghost alone, so he still hated those children. Why did he have to lie? Every opportunity to be reborn is used in places I didn't expect, but it's well written. But according to the original work, no matter what, I can't escape the first string. Oh wow, I had a heart attack when my ears were cut off. Xing Ming finally has to face those children for real. I am very curious about the development, but it will take me a while to watch it later. I am sad [crying] but just take it easy. Sometimes it feels uncomfortable to see a group of people scolding him, especially when they kill Yue Yue first at the beginning. Why are they so malicious? I just think it's good that Xiao Yue can get what he wants. It doesn't matter if he is bad or not, as long as he is happy, that is the best! 🥺 Mr. Kuwashima finally spoke up, you are special, you are indeed special! Being a human is special, being a ghost is also special, your existence is special! After reading this book, I really can't face the original work. I'm just a tool [crying] After reading the teacher's book, I feel a bit like Narcissus. The little boy has learned the same style. Teacher, can you see yourself when you look in the mirror? [Adoration]