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It's better than the story about wearing the skin of Ultraman and actually being the core of the Urban Dragon King, the real Ultraden and the Kingdom of Light

It's good-looking and has a spirit of light. The protagonist is an original local Ou. So far, the stories are well written and the settings are written with my own thoughts. The most rare thing about a second creation is that you can think of the plot and conceive the settings yourself [Like] [Like] [Like]

The pace of development is very comfortable... I like this way of revealing the story of the protagonist and the people around him little by little! The plot is very fluent and silky... Although the butterfly flaps its wings and changes more and more things, I really appreciate this methodical rhythm control... It's a bit heart-breaking... I'm really looking forward to the next plot! The character of the protagonist really struck a chord with me... One more thing, my wife's update speed is too fast! Is it so happy to have two chapters every day...[Shy][shy][shy]

All in all, give yourself a five-star rating first.

There is a feeling of loss. I was attracted at the beginning because of the protagonist Red's persuasion to Tregear, "Give yourself more time, Tregear. You are like the light that has just been released from the plasma spark tower. There are still so many things to experience and try!" The really warm words, and the opening words of Hikari, "I hope you will still hold on to your original heart after seeing those cruel things." It feels like the whole body is warmed. There are no conspiracy theories, and the protagonist is very candid. He is a pure native of the Kingdom of Light. I have not read the comics of Zero, and I can't stand the battle written by the author later. I can't understand it. The evolution trust that Jakura has gained feels that there are not many scenes before the battle comes later. It is a pity that I did not see a new and original script with a happy ending and the anticipated Ultraman Jakura. The introduction was written about Dagu, Jagula, and Gaoshan Wo Meng. I thought it would be a happy ending that would help each other and lead to a brighter future. In fact, only the world of Tiga was described in detail. Later, the worlds of Jia Gu La and Wo Meng were completely mixed in the fragmentary records of the war. What was very sad was the final departure of the protagonist Red. Some of the character designs are particularly interesting, such as Vader, who seems to be a time traveler. He seems to have traveled through time and forgotten the past, and turned into a local, but he also has amazing speech. It's a pity that we didn't see many scenes of this character. There is also the impression of Blue Clan O that "running for deputy director can also save lives by the way, and such a good thing" has a special impression of the Kingdom of Light. End with a quote from the author. "In this universe, some people are born complete and strong, and some people are born incomplete and weak. Sometimes, hope and love have no meaning to this universe, and can even be said to be a delusion." "But... This is my world, and this is your world." I really like the author's writing style. I will keep following it and look forward to the author's next book!

What I don't quite understand is that the three dark giants are called guys who fell into darkness. They have been dark giants since they were born and there is nothing they can do about it.

I love it so much, I love it so much. Here are: Supreme Superman Zero Grimud, the God of Blindness and Stupidity Black Death Emperor Lucifer Green Lantern Corps (Ultraman version) Noah's Spirit of Being Darkness is always there, Hypajeton is always there Galactus Sphia Laughing Grizza It can be said that it is a fairy tale, very immersive, and it has been completed. Recommendation is just five stars.

It looks pretty good from the front, but why does the protagonist hate darkness so much? Is the chaotic form gone? Although it looks pretty good when I see the backend, I feel that the protagonist's technological capabilities are not used very well, and I still rely on shaking people. In fact, I hope that the protagonist's technology can make him and the ordinary guard's Aodu become more powerful, and that the protagonist has more hidden cards.

It's good-looking. I really like this style of Ultraman writing. The plot is not brainless and has the spirit of Ultraman. I like this plot depicting the utopia of the Kingdom of Light [Love]

Gatanjie is really wronged. The previous civilization was blocked before he woke up. This time, he probably won't be able to wake up either. Just turn him into a monster and let him sleep forever. But in DC, is life not born with defects? There are many unique gods or top-notch experts in there who are barely even A-.

It looks so good and I respect Max so much that I cried to death [crying] The sewing is too complicated

Great, this is the Kingdom of True Light, not the Kingdom of Light in urban novels, but the introduction looks familiar. The author can change it to avoid misunderstandings. The monster girl is a bit unclear. I hope she only appears in the background.

Ultra whimsy

It's okay, but too many stitches make the already niche subject matter even more niche.

The system does not have much drama, and is mainly used to introduce other universes and characters. The author of the big stew [Chigua] based on the arcane universe is too complicated. The content includes Cthulhu, Marvel, DC, as the main stew, and Star Wars, Terry the Platypus, Warhammer, etc. It can be seen from the article that the author likes Lantern and Omniman very much (

Good sewing, good sewing brother. The stitching was so good, the stitched content would be rounded in a way I never imagined.

The characters are basically fleshed out and faithful to the original work. The writing is good enough to read, and it conveys positive energy that makes my body warm. It is a good work that I can stay up late at night and read a few more chapters. Please support it.

It expands Ultraman's worldview. In fact, it can also add something else. Anyway, Cthulhu has already been inserted. For example, Gatanjie in Tiga, and there is an evil god behind it, just drag Gatannuo Toa's father Cthulhu into it. It fits the worldview you wrote about, doesn't it?

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Omnivorous article, please be careful before reading, but the writing is not bad

I particularly like this style of writing, and I also like the protagonist. Great cheers for the author, I will send you a tweet [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

Overall, it has a very special spirit! Nb! A lot of worlds have been stitched together. Although I can't understand it a bit, there should be nothing wrong with it. Torre enlightened Xikali, which is good.

The logic is smooth, the plot is interesting, and most importantly, the Ultra spirit is full.

It's pretty good, the stitching is in place and there's nothing embarrassing about it.

The settings, plot, and writing are all great, but I personally think the best thing is the control of the rhythm. Although new settings are constantly being thrown out, it doesn't feel overly packed. The plot is very compact, and the ending is very simple.

The real Ultraman

Stories of life and hope

It's well written, but there are some flaws and controversies in some settings.

I personally feel that the writing style is very good, the story background in the book is also very grand, and the Ultra warriors in it give people a sense of divinity. This is the first time I have seen an Ultra fanfic with this kind of writing style.

It's written very much like Ultraman's utopia.