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It's a good read and I love it. Ginin must be on the list, but in addition to the relationship between Giyuu and Shinobu, other parts derived from the original plot are also very interesting. The writing is very delicate. I was quite surprised to see that the author is only 18. Is he actually a younger brother than me? As someone who has been writing fan fiction for several years, I feel like I was beaten to death on the beach by the back wave.

Teacher, I must finish this book. It is very beautiful. Compared with other fanfics, the tone of describing the butterfly ninja is particularly suitable for her. It has a sinister feeling, as if the butterfly ninja has traveled through a parallel world and came to us!

It's so beautiful, it's a fairy tale, the descriptions are vivid, the writing is delicate, thank you to the author! [Laughing] Oh my God, the more I read, the more addictive I become. The author writes so well. I eat state banquets every day. Please keep updating the author [laughs][laughs]

No, I was shocked by the author's delicate writing style as soon as I read it. It's so beautiful. I highly recommend it.

It was a pleasure to write Sherlock Holmes Butterfly in the first few chapters. Fire and water work together to resist the three-stringed string. It is so detailed that you can see the fierce battlefield from the text. It also has a sense of humor without being artificial. It is very nb. It made me realize for the first time that fan fiction will not stop. I wish the author will get better and better. Don't stop updating. Please🙏

Nice! The emotional description is very delicate! It is very suitable to reveal the calm but turbulent inner world of a person like Yuyu who is not good at words. Hh I opened my eyes and waited for the update and closed my eyes for the next update. It looks good!

The writing is very good, the characters are basically non-ooc, and the psychological description in the first chapter is amazing, but the wording in some places is too complicated later on. If possible, I hope that the dialogue paragraphs can be separated separately or not add too many modifiers. I personally read books relatively quickly, and I prefer that information can be received by me more directly and accurately. It is too complicated. For a reader like me, the description is painful and boring to read, and the effective content is only a few sentences. I can't bear to skip it. Looking at other people's comments and replies, I know that the author is not great. Come on, it kind of reminds me of my high school days when I was writing half-dimensional novels and I also liked to write a bunch of modifiers and psychological descriptions of characters [facepalm], but the author's writing skills are much better than mine.

I never thought this book would be so good

I don't know why the rating of this book is so low. I have read so many books, and I have a hard time finding books. My favorite fanfic so far! Especially the characters of Shinobu and Giyuu are different from others anyway. I still prefer the sinister Shinobu, double A! ! ! ! The author is also very humorous. The author's bookshelf is not simple at first glance~ Come on, author! ! ! Then righteousness 99! ! ! ! ! !

It's very well written, I couldn't get enough of it, and I still want to read it after reading it.

Although the detailed description in the front may be a bit too numerous in my opinion, if it can be as concise and natural as the following pages, I think this will be a rare masterpiece.

The writing is delicate and not OOC. Shinobu's little naughtiness really fits the image of an 18-year-old girl. Big cheers for the author! !

The writing is very good. The battles are written in great detail, which is particularly exciting. It can be said that it takes into account both emotions and battles. It is different from other Tomato Demon Slayer fanfics.

Very cool! Both the fighting scenes and daily life are described in great detail. I would like to give you a small suggestion - don't skip the first part, it will look more interesting, and the later part will be sweet! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's beautiful and the author writes it very well! [Laughing][like]

It is the best source of information among the fans I have read, and the writing is very delicate.

Super super super super super super sweet! Blessed are those who love watching righteous ninja [blowing kiss]

The logic is clear and the story is compact. Hu Die's dark side begins to change when he tests his courage.

Beautiful, well written

I love watching it so much, Yoshitomo 99

Nice! ! ! ! The emotional line is sweet [send heart]

Very sweet, I like it very much

A good fan, worth reading [shy]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Leopard Cat Cat I was born!

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The teacher's writing is good and I don't think it's OOC.

Good looking

I really like the novel written by the author, it's very interesting

It's so beautiful. It's simply the best novel I've ever read.

I love reading it, especially the two chapters of teasing and practice, which are very interesting.