Douluo************

It's beautiful, and the writing is good. By the way, is CP the evil moon? Mingheng should accept it.

In fact, the overall situation is okay, but Tang San still worshiped Yu Xiaogang as his teacher, and the reason for helping Tang San is written in the following two lines. The protagonist still has ethics and morals in his heart, and will not do anything to the young Tang San. He is just a good friend. Later, after discovering that Tang San has not changed, he also considered the future of Wuhun Palace and said (different ways do not work together). Anyway, I think the writing is very good, but the protagonist is indeed a little bit weak, although he fought back in the end.

I really like Da Da Da. I have been crushing on Xie Yue and my OC for a long time. But I don't have writing skills, so I can only think about it. Now that I see the article written in big letters, I am very happy. The large-scale writing is really good, the characters are well described, and the entanglement and complexity of human nature are very prominent. It's like a real person, not a written character. The three views are also very upright, and there is no deliberate bias. I'm really happy, thank you so much for the delicious food [Love]

The writing style is okay, the structure is clear, and the content is relatively substantial. I also read some of the comments. I think so about the previous protagonist standing on the side of Wuhun Palace and helping Tang San and Xiao Wu. The protagonist is a young man living in the 20th century. The environment in which he grew up is different from that in Douluo Continent. He is subject to the rules of life first and equality. In Douluo Continent, the strong wins. The rules between the two are different, and the people they cultivate are naturally different. For the protagonist, when he sees a life that is about to disappear and is about to fall, he will naturally feel pity and help, no matter what his position is. Secondly, to help Tang San, I actually think he is also thinking about Wuhun Palace. After he knows the plot, he should be trying to win over Tang San, so that Tang San will not see Wuhun Palace one-sidedly, but fully understand the sacrifices of Wuhun Palace, and let Tang San understand that not everything is extreme justice. The protagonist's inner voice was that he wanted Tang San to join Wuhun Palace's school. When Tang San joined, he had already proven that he wanted Tang San to help Wuhun Palace and prevent Wuhun Palace from ending up like that. In fact, when I was reading the book Douluo, I felt that Wuhundian led by Bibi Dong was an unformed socialism, a socialism that did not have a particularly complete system, but had a preliminary prototype. Although it is a bit extreme, anyway, I think so. The protagonist is very strong, has an online IQ, is thoughtful about all kinds of things, remains calm in the face of difficulties, and dares to face and challenge. Having said so many good things, in fact this book also has shortcomings. There are some deviations in the description of the characters' emotions, making people wonder who the specific CP is? If it's 1V1, you can describe more of the other side's emotional changes and some physical contact with the protagonist, and reduce the emotional exposure of other characters. (The author doesn't like to hear this paragraph. It can be treated as bullshit. It doesn't mean any guidance, just my feelings. Generally speaking, it's well written. Few Douluo fans write so well.)

I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it, it's very good-looking, I hope it's Xieyue, but I hope Yan doesn't like the protagonist (in love), and hates love triangles.

It's pretty good and I think it's okay. There's nothing too bad about it. Although I don't have anything good to say about Douluo, the author does write it well. Keep up the good work! I'm just waiting to eat your cooking! Goddess Goddess we love you! [Love][love][love]

Nice! It's really beautiful! ! The author's writing style is very good! But I didn't expect Ming to be 1. I was offended. I'm sorry to the author [crying][crying][crying] It's really beautiful! ! If there is no strong recommendation of this thunderous point! ! !

It's pretty good. Although I don't like the protagonist's character very much, it's much better than some Douluo fans.

It's very interesting, the logic is complete, the plot is compact, and it's not laggy at all. The protagonist's characterization is perfect, and the holes filled in at the beginning will be rounded out later. The low rating may be because there are too few reviewers. This is a book with great potential.

It's so good. This is the best Douluo fanfic I've ever seen. I can't read anything else after reading this. The only thing is that it's not finished yet and it's still being updated. It's so hard to wait every day. Mingyue cp99

It looks good, but the front is a bit boring, but it's okay if you look at it later.

The writing is not bad and the content is pretty good, but I think the author could change the cover a lot. This AI cover will make people have no desire to click on it, and the content is still in line with the standards that everyone wants to read Douluo fandom now! I hope you can continue to persevere and you will definitely get everyone's attention and likes [currently in preparation]

It's one of the more pleasing Douluo fanfics I've read, it's so rare! ! ! I have long wanted to read similar articles like this, but I have never seen anything good. This one is pretty good. Recommended! ! ! !

A rare good article, highly recommended! ! ! The author Bao Baobao attaches great importance to logic, and the narration is very reasonable. The logic monster is very comfortable to read, and the writing style is also good. Many scenes are written with a very visual sense. High praise! The development of the plot is also very reasonable, which is very friendly for people who have forgotten some of the plot after watching Douluo for a while. The main character Baobao is doing business online, I really like it! She will also actively solve problems, but sometimes she will be soft-hearted. I hope the baby will become tougher soon! A go up! ! There's a lot of foreshadowing, looking forward to the follow-up! The new cover looks much better [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's super good-looking. The main character is very full-bodied. The emotional line is also very interesting, including the protagonist, Xie Yue and others. Hey hey hey!

The author's writing style is indeed very good [learned], and I also like the rhythm. Now I hate it [crying], I hate that the author of the subject matter I like cannot write like that [angry], and I am also envious of the readers of this subject who have such good authors [almost crying], hey~ I just hope that the straight men who want to read it will make sure what is written in the title [exploration], and make sure to read it clearly! For sure! [Exploration]

In fact, I quite hope that the cp is Xie Yue's [exploration]

It's really great to watch, the plot is very attractive to me, and the protagonist has a brain

The book written by the teacher is the most suitable one I have ever seen adapted from Douluo. It is so delicious.

Good writing and reasonable plot

Not bad, change the cover and the bag will explode

It looked very good, especially when he muttered twice, but hugged Mingheng tighter. He sighed again, picked up his shirt and put it on, leaning against the car wall with his eyes closed to meditate.

It's very nice, but if there was CP, I might not want to watch it if I saw them together. Okay, I'm still looking forward to it hahaha. I haven't watched Douluo for so long that I forgot about it. It's okay if I forget. I really like the author's plot [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] In fact, I am a heartthrob and I also want to cry [cry] and it's very painful [cry] as I like people with no cp and official matches.

Really super super super pretty

It looks good, but it is still difficult to write from the perspective of Wuhundian. Nice

It's beautiful, it's beautiful, it's beautiful, I will always follow you, goddess.

It's good to watch. I'm looking forward to the author's writing about the battle between soul masters [Adoration]

It's very interesting to watch. The main characters are capable and smart. They love the main characters.

The characters are well developed and the relationship between the golden generation is also very sincere.

It's very interesting to watch, and the whole main cast has their brains [sending my heart]