Iron Breaker: Selling Pokémon on the Star Dome Train at the Beginning

The writing is good, with occasional flaws, but overall the flaws are not concealed. For example, the most classic "logic" and "conclusion" of Screwgum are not written, and there is no star god to take a second look at such a big thing. Logically speaking, Aha will definitely have a hand in it, but overall the character creation, plot conception, protagonist quality and the integration of two different worldviews are all considered to be excellent. The author continues to work hard.

Fatty also has mega. The new Pokémon ZA author can learn about it. There are many new maga systems, such as Koga Ninja and Pikachu.

Not much to say, the writing is good, neither flattering nor belittling. Among this kind of articles, it is already considered the best.

It's quite good to watch. It pays more attention to the Pokémon plot, especially the interaction between the characters and Pokémon in the Star Railroad. It feels very good. It is suggested that some Pokémon activities can be added to extend the length of the plot. It is also possible to add more interactions between people and Pokémon. The most important thing is to urge updates

The best book with Pokémon in Collapsed Star Railroad Give Brother Sunday an ideal dragon Zekrom

The creative idea is very bold and very beautiful

Suddenly it occurred to me that there is no communication problem in the iron-colliding world. The synaesthesia beacon only requires an injection and is implanted into the body, which is low-cost.

It's very good. I've read one, but it's a game.

Not bad, not bad

Surprisingly good and the quantity is quite large.

So far it looks pretty good.

Okay, it's considered a mid-winner in the promotional article.

The author always forgets that the characters in Bengtie also have strong combat capabilities. It is impossible for only Pokémon to go up in times of danger.

The battle between characters and Pokémon cannot be just Pokémon battles. The characters and Pokémon fight in coordination with each other. It may be better if it is written this way.

It's so pretty... How do I put it, it's a bit lacking.

Everything is good except that it is a bit lacking. It must be five stars.

It's so good-looking. Friends who are interested in Pokémon-related topics can read it. It's very good-looking, and the volume is large and filling.

Very nice, keep up the hard work, come on

It's good-looking, different from the usual Star Iron fanfics, and mainly focuses on Pokémon.

Super super super super super super super super super super beautiful