Honkai: Star Rail: From the Start, Selling Pokemon Aboard the Astral Express

At the beginning, he said that after discussing with many parties, he ended up negotiating terms with Jizi, seriously speaking, on a multiverse level with a mortal? The discussion should be about the Tree of Imaginary Numbers and the Sea of Quantum [eating melon] Moreover, it should be the protagonist himself who negotiates terms with the Star Dome Train, not Arceus.

The writing is good, with occasional flaws, but overall the flaws are not concealed. For example, the most classic "logic" and "conclusion" of Screwgum are not written, and there is no star god to take a second look at such a big thing. Logically speaking, Aha will definitely have a hand in it, but overall the character creation, plot conception, protagonist quality and the integration of two different worldviews are all considered to be excellent. The author continues to work hard.

I haven't written about the cooperation between the characters of Bentie and Pokémon. Bentie has a destiny and is not an ordinary person. It's impossible to rely solely on Pokémon in battle.

I always feel like the protagonist likes to be a dog for the company

I can only give it seven stars, but what I want to see is the plot, the interaction between the characters and their effects on the world, etc. It's not about watching the protagonist fight monsters and level up. Give him a croaking frog to start training, give him a few mythical beasts to protect him, and just use it as a background board.

Fatty also has mega. The new Pokémon ZA author can learn about it. There are many new maga systems, such as Koga Ninja and Pikachu.

How should I put it, it kind of embarrassed me. I like the subject matter and the character of the protagonist very much, but the way the author writes it is very strange, like a narration, without segmentation, and at the end he deliberately adds a preview of an epic recitation.

It's still a star. If you want to find Qiong, you can check again. Some Pokémon's values ​​​​are too high. The space station uses Rayquaza to fight Foehn. Although it is a level one god, is it too high? Does it have the ability to explode stars? If it were Palkia, I could understand it, but normal Pokémon training and things like that would be fine.

The skipping of the plot is too serious. It's like reading a summary. I saw Yaliluo No. 6. After the protagonist group went to see Cocolia, the next chapter went directly to the Star Core. The plot in the lower city was basically skipped. Then a few people came to draw Pokémon. It was too hasty.

Not much to say, the writing is good, neither flattering nor belittling. Among this kind of articles, it is already considered the best.