At the Beginning of the Game, I Was Undercover in the Flower House, and the Fairies Rushed to Help Me Become a Fairy.

I think this book has the appearance of a great emperor, so I will give it a five-star thumbs up [making a face] (More than 50 chapters don't seem to be very poisonous. The immortal body is for double use at the beginning. There are no other players. There are other children of destiny. However, the protagonist did one at the beginning and took a Yin-Yang Fish Jade Pendant. It is of no use in the early stage and can only be used as a storage space. It can be used for farming but I haven't seen any use for it now. There is a novice village in the early stage. After eating it at 28, I am still a little fox with two souls in one body. [Sneaky smile] The combat power is a bit slow, but the author's writing is very good. He has eliminated this poison. It is a bit funny and funny, but it should be serious when it should be serious.) In my personal opinion, it's better to taste it yourself [laughing] I've seen more than 130 chapters [Petrified] [Petrified] [Petrified] and turned into a fan, about a hundred chapters of destroying the city, one failure [puke] [puke] [puke] I met the heroine from chapter 34, and we only kissed at chapter 146 [awkward laugh] She is indeed the heroine, her relationship is really long... And according to the author, the heroine should have more scenes [smile] The heroine is a cold fairy, she dislikes facial expressions, it's a bit interesting but not much. And the chapter is very long, from 135 to the golden elixir, there are quite a lot of emotional lines, daily life, etc., The combat power is a bit suppressed, and the protagonist's pure Yang immortal body only plays a big role twice in chapter 135 [Petrified] [Petrified] [Petrified] I have figured out the dual cultivation physique, and I feel that the more important thing is to complete the immortal body of the heroine [smile] Overall, it's quite bland and not very enjoyable for me. The worst overall rating is three stars, but these are big poisons for me, so it's only two stars. Farewell [salute]

It's also very good. Basically, there are no big problems. There is a part in the middle of the plot where the whole city is dead and can be skipped. I think it is a bit abrupt. Skipping does not affect the plot. The author has something to say to make up for it [Love]

Who among my family members understands this? I was completely confused by this magical book! Lu Bu fought with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, and the fight was heated for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai suddenly came out and crushed the whole audience. If Noah hadn't thrown an outside ring and then connected with the Noxian guillotine to save the situation, this wave of being targeted by the M4 six-power scope would have been too cool! The most amazing thing is when Zhuge Liang said harshly to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, you are proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liangliang." The anger at being nearly knocked to death by the monkey almost spilled out of the paper! What we are saying is that the plot of this book is ridiculously interesting, the system is orderly in chaos, the foreshadowing is everywhere, the fighting scenes are as immersive as if they were on the scene, and the characters are portrayed in a "deep way", focusing on the joy of a chaotic stew in one dimension! Overall, I love looking at knives. Caillo～(∠ω< )⌒☆

You are right, but it is difficult for Shenwei to hide his tears. The white Zetsu mask celebrates the new life, the tiger pattern mask walks into the underworld, the whirlpool mask pretends to be stupid, the reincarnation magatama fights the world, the name is Obito, the top spot name, because of true love, bloom thousands of flowers, release the nine tails, fight the four generations, control the water shadow, deceive Nagato, unify the Akatsuki, gather the tailed beasts, start four battles, turn into ten tails, reincarnate, fight Saunaru, Obito is called love, willing to be the enemy of the world, and the military horse is only Lin for the rest of his life. People who dare to develop with the world dare not confess to the people they like. They have the most powerful kaleidoscope that can see through everything, but they cannot see through your heart... 😔😭 Silin Boxing👊Thoughts are flowing😭 Nian Lin Sword 😤 Never forget it 😭 Tu Lin Palm ✋life after life😭 Linlinlinlinlinlinlin😭😭😭 Meet the Minato class! The first light! 🥰 Ninja Academy awaits! Congratulations on graduating! 🥳

Is this a boss's trumpet? The writing is so wonderful. The rhythm of daily life is very good and will not make people tired. The battles are also written with excitement. The protagonist also has a soul. An ordinary novice will never be able to write it.

The writing style and ideas surpass those of most Tomato authors. Although the plots are mostly cliche, many of the emotional scenes and fights are very delicate, real and easy to understand.

Chapter 103 is in progress, let's talk about the conclusion first. If you want to see Fairy Yan Muzhu, you can go. I haven't seen anything so far. The title is very clever, the plot is very serious, and the protagonist also said that he should not be a Cao thief, which is even more interesting - 1. Speaking of the plot alone, it's actually pretty good. It's just that I was attracted by the cover and title, but I was disappointed with nothing in the end. No unnecessary spoilers. Others in the book review section have told you all the poisonous points, so I won't read it again. Anyway, there is no such thing. Oh, it slipped away.

There are 100+ chapters. It should be said that most of the content will not be overwhelming. Most of it is relatively relaxed. It is not a traditional mindless and refreshing article. It is just that the author is good at making jokes and some sentences are quite interesting. If you want to give three and a half stars but can't give it, just four stars for encouragement. There are still a lot of things worthy of consideration. Write less things that make people look uncomfortable. The author may think that it is okay to mention it in one stroke or that certain plot arrangements are necessary. In fact, it is better not to write about the former ones and you can just mention them in one stroke. I always write disgusting stories. The author wishes you happiness. … The more candy I give you, the more points you'll get. Hehe. … Alas, it is not easy to write a novel like this. It should be said that it is too immersive. That's it. People who read it will be annoyed and angry at one time. Is it not nutritious for me to have this vicarious need to read classics? I was just looking for trouble here just for fun. I read the comments and some people said they copied the settings. Please identify it yourself.

The author's writing is quite nice, and I don't think there is anything poisonous about it. Oh, for me, I wouldn't know it when others read it. The protagonist's Sword Raising Sutra is quite interesting, and that skill, I hope the author can keep writing it.

This book is much better than Tomato's many novels about immortality with a sense of swordsmanship, but actually I think it's not good enough. I think it can be written better, whether it's the transition from the Northern Territory to Central Continent, or about Hidden Sword Mountain and Li Xiaoran's human calamity. What's the main feeling? [Thinking] It's a bit rushed. I really think it can be written better, but for now I really think it is worth a look. It's really better than those novels about immortality, but it's a pity that not many people have read it. In fact, when it comes to saying that you can fight without cultivation, emmm, you can really look at the sword. Chen Ping'an has not said that he can still fight with a few body refiners. Then can you say that it is poisonous?

It's good to watch. I haven't seen such a delicious love story for a long time. The emotional drama is excellent. The author has a good grasp of the rhythm. It didn't make me feel particularly sluggish. Moreover, it is rare to have multiple women. After all, it would be a disaster for an author to write a story with multiple female protagonists. The disaster is love love, but the author has a good grasp of the middle. All in all, the evaluation is A+

I really have nothing to say, this novel is absolutely amazing. First of all, the more obvious point is the language and vocabulary, which can be said to be suitable for both refined and popular tastes. There are both literary descriptions (Luo Shen Fu) and down-to-earth descriptions (the protagonist's words, folk customs). Secondly, the characters in the novel include both round characters (the protagonist's personality is not described much compared to the protagonists in other novels, but the protagonist here is lifelike) and flat characters. The plot is reasonable and natural. The fairy tale theme is perfectly integrated with modern cool writing. Reading this article is like watching flowing water, a slightly emotional torrent, and a poetic long stream.

Family members, Shennong, taste it for yourself. There are cows but not people. It is highly recommended to watch. The protagonist is humorous and interesting.

It's very interesting, not a stud novel, and the plot is also very good. Maybe you can't stand the beginning part, but I think it's pretty good. I hope you can take a look at it more, it's really good [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

Very good, the pace is not sluggish, the current rating of 6.9 Is too low, I think it should start at least 8 points, and another thing is, the author has read too many horror folklore novels recently, these have been a bit like [eating melon]

It's quite in line with my taste. It's very relaxing when it's time to relax, and the heavy plot doesn't make people feel desperate. The connection between the two plots is also very good, not too abrupt. There are multiple female protagonists, but the emotional line is well written.

It's pretty good-looking, nothing bad about it. I'm looking forward to the relationship between Mo Yao and Tang Chuyun, the mean Mo Yao and the drunken swordsman Tang Chuyun [blowing kiss]

Children, just read it, I don't understand how the score is so low [laughing] As an old bookworm, I am very addicted to reading it. This book adds some daily life as an embellishment to the traditional immortality novel. The daily life is similar to the writing method of a light novel. The occasional jokes are too restrained. The only flaw is the emotional scenes of some heroines. In the emotional scenes, it can be seen that the author still prefers to be deep and has a natural feeling. I wanted to develop the love story between Fanyu and Luo, but it was almost uninteresting. The writing got better and better in the end. Maybe there will be supplements in the future. It was almost uninteresting mainly because of the romance. In short, I felt that the author is not like a novice writer. Although there are some places where he is a bit lacking in enthusiasm, it is definitely good. The main character is also romantic but not obscene.

Sometimes I see the male protagonist dying because of saving the female protagonist, and the female protagonist is still entangled, hesitant, shy, and whining about whether to take off the male protagonist's or her own clothes while looking at the comatose male protagonist. I think about how delicious it would be if the male protagonist died in front of them because they wasted time because of their hesitation and shame, and they missed the time for treatment because of their hesitation and shame. They can only watch the male protagonist die, and then their hearts collapse and their hearts are broken. How delicious it would be! [Shy]

The writing is very good, the plot is also very interesting, and some jokes are incorporated from time to time, which makes it even more fun. The description of emotions is also relatively good, and the growth trajectory of the protagonist is also very obvious. The system can only be regarded as an initial start and support. In fact, more cultivation depends on the protagonist himself.

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang Q said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like being there, and the character descriptions are spot on! (Don't worry if you're too lazy to copy for book reviews)

If nothing else, I will give five stars to the section about copying poems. The author knows that he has defeated 99.9% Of authors by deleting the section about using allusions. The selection of poems is not bad, the artistic conception is very consistent, and he wisely skipped the frontier poems. It is very good.

There is no doubt that the article is humorous and refreshing. The writing style is relaxed and pleasant. The author has chosen the priorities of the plot at his fingertips. The background of the story is destined to be painless and affectionate. It travels through the game world and unintentionally stirs up the storm. Some people may think that the protagonist's actions do not have enough character foreshadowing, but I think it is fair, very fair, and free and natural.

There are quite a lot of Heavenly Dao foundation building materials today. It should be no problem to collect at least a few. But opening your mouth and shutting up is the first time in ten thousand years. It feels so nerve-wracking.

When I read the introduction, I thought Fairy: Mo Yao, I want to challenge you to a duel Mo Yao: (crossing his fingers) Fairy: No way to seduce me (The sword flies away) Fairy: No! (Despair) Mo Yao: (rubbing the sword repeatedly) win~win~ [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Not bad, just a little ink stain, but the result of the ink stain is that the characters are fleshed out, which is acceptable. It would be better if the writing power could be better to shorten the chapter and create a fuller character, but it is also worth reading in Tomato

Your words are so sudden and your admiration is so direct. There are constant rules in Zhou Dynasty, so don't mess with etiquette and ethics. Send the matchmaker in advance to understand our door. If you are willing to accept it, you can adopt it. Ask me about my surname and my birthday. Lord Yan held a banquet and treated the envoys with courtesy. Serve the gourd and recommend the preserved meat, and the glutinous rice will fill the bottle with flavor. When you visit the ancestral temple, you will burn a turtle and ask the gods. If you get auspiciousness and return to the envoy, the goose will report a good time. Xuan Qi bundled up the silk, and Lipin accepted the levy. When I tell you the wedding date again, my family agrees. When the wedding comes in the evening, you will carry out the wedding ceremony. Jue Ben's clothes and ornaments, and his chariot driving. Two cars and two books, the majesty is obvious. I personally built a temple and bowed to the court. Then pay homage to Jishou, and the geese set up the terraced courtyard. I follow you out, holding hands and embarking on the journey. The king controls Sanza, and Sui teaches Yu Ding. You will take the chariot first and return to your house to be welcomed. They bowed to each other and sat across from each other to express their love. The wine is the same as the wine, and the two are prosperous together. Now you are leading me, and I am sincere and gentle. Zhou Li does not have this, I dare not accept it.

Does the author have any other novels? The character background and plot are quite solid, I like it very much. The right way should be the right way. Not to mention great compassion, at least it should be righteous and clear between grudges and grudges. It's a pity that the current cultivating novels are too greedy, angry, and delusional, and are not even as good as ordinary people. How can such a person be qualified to become a great cultivator?

The writing is excellent and the plot is very stable. Children, please come and read it.

It's good-looking [crying] [crying] The emotional lines with the heroines are also quite delicate, and the rhythm is pretty good [crying] [crying] Please write more