A thin figure stood at the door.
He was covered with a yellow and black square feather fabric, and his long dark red hair was tied high.
Tannoro looked at the familiar man in front of him and almost shouted. This was his father, Kamado Tanjuro.
Opposite his father stood a strange man in a suit and hat.
This man and his father looked at each other as if they were seeing a ghost...
Reader comments
The writing is smooth, like a book written by farmers and mountain springs. Since you choose to imitate, I suggest you write more of your own stuff. The sense of déjà vu is too heavy [Thoughts]
Okay, Tanjuro Returns from Sekiro is indeed a good study subject [Thinking]
As for Tanjuro, who has been in the Kenshin world for forty years, the original Tanjuro was not that good, and it took so much effort to finish the string.
This book is accessible, and the setting is quite interesting. One is that the author only focuses on describing the character of Tanjuro, and the other characters are described too little and lack interest and diversity, which is a bit boring. The other is that there is a lack of strong emotional outbursts or there are but are not written out, which makes it difficult to arouse the readers' emotions. In fact, it does not have to be emotional outbursts. Writing funny scenes can also arouse the readers' emotions. So far, overall, this article is okay. I give it four stars.
It's so beautiful. The theme I'm most looking forward to is watching Tanjiro and his father, who have innate markings and then have strong strength. I'm so angry. Why has it been removed from the shelves? Tomato doesn't have many books like this anymore, so I cried. I only had it for a day or two and then it was gone. [Crying][crying][crying]criminal
Although some of the character names are not right, it does not prevent it from being a good work.
So far, I feel that the writing is quite good, and the writing style is online. I really like the interaction between family members. The writing is very detailed and realistic.
It feels OK. Come on big
It feels good. Come on, author.
Tanjiro! Tanjiro!
It looks good, I love watching it, and I want it more
The first time I met Tanjiro's father
It looks good for now. Keep up the good work.
There are some problems in some places, but overall it's okay
It's very nice to watch, and the characters fit the character's personality very well, without any OOC. It was taken down not long after I finished reading the latest chapter (hehehe)
The writing is smooth, like a book written by farmers and mountain springs. Since you choose to imitate, I suggest you write more of your own stuff. The sense of déjà vu is too heavy [Thoughts] Okay, Tanjuro Returns from Sekiro is indeed a good study subject [Thinking]
As for Tanjuro, who has been in the Kenshin world for forty years, the original Tanjuro was not that good, and it took so much effort to finish the string.
This book is accessible, and the setting is quite interesting. One is that the author only focuses on describing the character of Tanjuro, and the other characters are described too little and lack interest and diversity, which is a bit boring. The other is that there is a lack of strong emotional outbursts or there are but are not written out, which makes it difficult to arouse the readers' emotions. In fact, it does not have to be emotional outbursts. Writing funny scenes can also arouse the readers' emotions. So far, overall, this article is okay. I give it four stars.
It's so beautiful. The theme I'm most looking forward to is watching Tanjiro and his father, who have innate markings and then have strong strength. I'm so angry. Why has it been removed from the shelves? Tomato doesn't have many books like this anymore, so I cried. I only had it for a day or two and then it was gone. [Crying][crying][crying]criminal
Although some of the character names are not right, it does not prevent it from being a good work.
So far, I feel that the writing is quite good, and the writing style is online. I really like the interaction between family members. The writing is very detailed and realistic.
It feels OK. Come on big
It feels good. Come on, author.
Tanjiro! Tanjiro!
It looks good, I love watching it, and I want it more
The first time I met Tanjiro's father
It looks good for now. Keep up the good work.
There are some problems in some places, but overall it's okay
It's very nice to watch, and the characters fit the character's personality very well, without any OOC. It was taken down not long after I finished reading the latest chapter (hehehe)