Cos Mo Yin Qing Que: a Bad Start

Specifically, it can be seen that the author is a novice. The plot of Kongque thinking about herself feels too cumbersome. In fact, it is not necessary to give the memory all at once. It is better to gradually revive the memory and collide with itself in the struggle. Now it feels more like Kongque has taken away her body and Taibu Qingque has her memory. It's not quite like the cosplayer Qing Que. When Belloberg wrote his memories, most of them were "from Tairen Qing Que's memory." The plot can be more heartwarming to fill the void of Qing Que as a time traveler. There is no need to be so bitter, grudged, and philosophical. Is Bi Jing a space comedy [smile] Overall, it has great potential. It's just a constant update and brain-teasing. It's a good book.

It is already very good among novels of the same type. The setting and characters are all very good. There is no sense of separation of the same type as other books (the one about Yanqing kept repeating that he was confused by other people's sympathy, that he had no memory, and that the injuries were fake. He wrote basically every chapter, and also created a team, and whoever uses the ability will be replaced in the team). This book is quite good.

Writing style: The writing style is excellent and the language is logical and smooth. Characters: The description of the characters is consistent with the performance of the characters in the original plot. Poison point: None yet All in all, it is a work with great potential, and its novelty is good. Although there are examples of pioneers, it is still a relatively rare type in the scope of Bengtie's second-generation novels. I hope the author can keep updating. If you run out of ideas or are tired, it doesn't matter if you postpone the update, as long as you can keep updating. I have seen many excellent works, but it was a pity because the author did not update them in the end. I hope the author can continue writing. Your work is well written. [Love]

Come on, it looks pretty good [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] So far, it's much better than the cos that have been made up in your head or forcibly assimilated.

Very good story, made my combat skill points rotate. Hopefully it's not a space cleansing drama.

Good-looking, really good-looking The writing is also very good But... That kind of naked calculation and malice that anyone with a discerning eye can feel... It's really annoying...

Let me talk about my personal opinion first. I have read a lot of this kind of subject recently. Although it is a bit disconcerting, my personal understanding is that this book is more immersive than those cosplays and the appearance in front of the main protagonist. Then let's talk about the ingenuity and setting of this book that I like. The demonic Yin body of Qingque in the future was stuffed into a memory due to the influence of Aha, causing a bit of mental schizophrenia? (Doubtful) Then there are some methods for Jing Yuan to confess and then deal with it. For some people, most of what they see in this game or in life may be relatively innocent, making them unable to accept this relatively depressing writing. But if this is a real world, the memory that the protagonist has been stuffed into makes her feel that she has really experienced it, and then she goes back to the past to save it all, force "himself" to grow up, force some people to become less naive, let their innocence and innocence converge, and then go to a stable place where most people can accept their existence. It is safer and more real than having to face those painful things alone or with a few people in the end. Let's talk about the author's writing skills. I think it's very good, and it's not too plain-spoken to cause drama, nor is it too rigid to be understood. Although it's a bit simplistic (some parts are similar to classical Chinese), you can understand it, and the emotions you can understand are more real. (I haven't read the Beroberg chapter and I won't comment on it.) Let's just talk about Xianzhou. So far, the protagonist I have seen has experienced the destruction of Luofu. Elderly friends have become memories of the past. Compatriots are killing each other. Demonic bodies are everywhere. The whole Luofu has fallen into madness. In this case, I think I can describe the protagonist's urgency and slightly paranoid behavior in a um... Reasonable way. Also, the author's writing style is very good. I would also like to read more about Boss. Wow, Darcy can do anything [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Star, undisputed five stars. I commented immediately after reading Chapter 53. Whether it's Kong Que's struggle, Huo Hao's cowardice and bravery, or Qing Que's pretense of being strong, they all really come alive, as if two people in time and space are really communicating with each other.

Invincible! Just after reading the first three chapters, I understood that this is an absolute treasure! Ninety-nine percent! The writing style is really good, and the character development is also very good (at least Aha is very good). It can be said without hesitation that it can be called the pinnacle of this kind of writing! [Cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's a very good work. I won't elaborate on what's good about it. I'll just talk about the poisonous points I feel. 1. Jing Liuchu can avoid the high probability of killing the protagonist in the follow-up. 2. The overall feeling is quite depressing. The personalities of many characters may change or grow in the follow-up (this may not count). 3. It may be completed quickly (it feels like the main plot is to rectify the fairy boat). , Fight against abundance, it is estimated that it will be between 100 and 200 chapters, the follow-up depends on how the author writes), 4 people who want to see the interaction between the protagonist and the three little ones (anyway, there is no interaction so far, this is mainly because of Belloberg, I don't know how the follow-up will be), it is just for reference, it still depends on how the author writes, if there are any problems, please help to correct them, don't be too naive Also, when I saw Moyu, I thought it was some kind of heart-warming, casual article, but I was really tricked into boarding a pirate ship!

The beginning of the story was about drifting with the crowd, but Kongque's choice and subsequent actions really made me unexpected but it was reasonable. The development of the plot was also very enjoyable. It no longer followed the traditional official plot, but took a brand new path.

Reached Chapter 46. This work chooses a unique entry point: the if line of traveling into a character has a lot more room for extension and interaction (with the original character and the original plot) than simply traveling into a character or a purely original character. There are also foreshadowings about the intertwining of the soul of the time traveler and the "soul" of Taibu Qingque, and I look forward to the follow-up recycling (then there has been a lot of progress in more than 20 chapters very quickly and a little hastily, so I look forward to more in the follow-up www). The first 20 chapters of Belloberg contain more psychological descriptions of the protagonist (but the foundation of the protagonist's character is still very important and not easy to skip), and the writing is more of a stream of consciousness. The main events passed by in a flash, which makes the narrative rhythm seem strange. —— When it comes to the Fairy Boat chapter, I can feel that the author is quite confused, so the protagonist behaves quite confused, but this confusion should be said to be quite consistent with the protagonist's character, and in a sense, it can be regarded as hitting the mark www. The psychological description has been reduced to a level that I prefer. On the other hand, the "heart knots" of some characters have been put aside (which can be regarded as a manifestation of confusion), and it seems that they will find opportunities to recycle them in the future. The progress of events is sometimes fast and sometimes slow (slow mainly because the branch plots have not yet merged into the main line, fast because some events end extremely quickly and hastily), and the narrative rhythm is still strange. The character branch has introduced more if-line characters, and I really like the interaction and difference between this and the original plot line. —— Overall, I like the setting and story points very much. The writing is also good. The shortcomings are quite obvious but they are all in places that I can ignore. Looking forward to further developments. (Although I can hardly imagine how the plot will continue to unfold after the Immortal Boat Chapter, but it is suitable to write about the Immortal Boat in great detail, and it will take a lot of space to write it all.) And the point of "turning a tragedy into an absurd comedy" has been completely missed, so I'm really looking forward to it. —— A few words about psychological description. In the Belloberg chapter, half of the psychological description is about time travel, if lines and some Star God matters. It is too involved and the protagonist cannot do anything for a while, so the length of the purely psychological description should be shortened; The other half is about how to deal with Taibu Qingque's memory, ability, obsession, and madness, and how to compromise and coexist with the goals of the time traveler. The protagonist made some thoughts about it and came to some conclusions, but before he put it into action, the Belloberg chapter ended abruptly, making it seem top-heavy. Half of the psychological description of the Immortal Boat chapter is still about Taibu Qingque, but now there is more interaction (for example, I really like the part about being "blown silly" by Taibu Qingque's memory); the other half is about how to solve the dilemma of Xianzhou. After thinking, he also puts it into action, and can revise his thinking based on the feedback obtained from the action. This is also what I like. The purpose of solving the plight of the fairy boat is the same between Taibu Qingque and the time traveler, but its specific method feels like it can be used to describe the differences between Taibu Qingque and the time traveler (and perhaps Qingque). It is also suitable as an entry point for absurd comedy. I am looking forward to it.

This is my first time reading the Battle Damage category. I have read Battle Damage three times before and was not interested in it, mainly because their introductions were not very good and did not attract me at all. The introduction of this book is really good, and I feel that it is well written after reading the latest chapter.

The quality is good. Although the plot progress is a bit slow and the description is a bit complicated, the writing style and plot concept are excellent, and it makes people want to watch it. If I write it down well and no big surprises appear, and polish Kongque's background story a little more, and optimize his bad habit of thinking too often about himself, maybe it will be a good book with a rating of 9.0 Or above in the future.

The story line of the book gives people a relatively chaotic feeling, but the portrayal of the protagonist's heart and his inner struggle to use his own memory to fight and accept a memory that is bigger than him, and to maintain his true heart and not assimilate is very good. Overall, the book is pretty good and worth reading.

The writing is okay, but for a light novel, there are too many descriptions. Although the sentences are smooth and smooth, it is cumbersome. The author should be quite talented in writing female videos or write essays.

The setting is pretty good. You can tell at a glance that this is a book written by a novice. The plot design actually has no big problems and is quite interesting. However, the author's tone from chapters one to forty-six is all about bitterness and hatred. This is not to say that bitterness and hatred are bad. This is to set the basic color for the character. However, nearly fifty chapters with this color will make people feel tired and unhappy, because Bengtie is originally a good project with the participation of the train crew through the efforts of all parties. In the ending line, the author may consider adding a certain character or group to ease the atmosphere. Of course, this is just a suggestion. Since I don't know how the author will write it in the future, this can only be a suggestion. If the subsequent plot needs to continue the bitterness and hatred, there is no need to change it. The second author often says that there is no outline, so let's look at the above point and what the author often says at the end of his article. If the book does not do well, or someone keeps the book, or the author does not write for a day, or the author is too tired, the book may be discontinued, and the risk is extremely high. Don't ask me how I know because I am also an author [awkward laugh] In short, the risk is extremely high and there may be hope in the future [awkward laughter]

3-4 Stars () The writing is good () It's pretty good on Tomato () But at least I think the setting is a little unreasonable () And it's a bit too bitter and hateful at the moment) Worth looking forward to ( (The premise is that the author does not run away ())

The writing is excellent, and this language art is really unique. It really creates a character perfectly, and the content of each chapter is just right. It's so great. It would be great if there were more updates every day.

Good luck! Unlike the other books I've read, this one is a serious drama with a very rigorous setting.

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Love to watch. Personally, I feel that the previous short story of Belloberg is a very clever design as a novice level for the protagonist to familiarize himself with himself and the Star Iron worldview. It prevents the protagonist from losing the B grid on the fairy boat due to initial incompatibility, and at the same time retains the cognitive conflict between the protagonist as a player and Qingque, the architect. However, the disadvantage is that the description of this conflict in the previous plot is too straightforward and seems a bit pretentious and procrastinating. Later, after arriving at the fairy boat, the description of mixing the three states of wakefulness, mixture and complete sinking is very mature [Note]

It's so beautiful. The author's writing style is awesome. The characters are all three-dimensional. There's a sense of group portrait beauty. The protagonist is not just miserable or crazy. The combination of the calmness of the planner and the madness of the "Blue Bird" who has experienced the end is very impactful. But the next part should be Traveling in the Star Sea. I haven't seen it yet [Thinking] Originally, I only came here for Moyin Qingque, but then I enjoyed watching this one. The protagonist is very strong, and the character creation is really good. They are flesh and blood, and they will not be blindly ordinary in daily life, nor will they be serious all the time. I really like the light sense of humor in the text, and I finished it in one go [laughs]

The author's writing style is impeccable [Like] Then there is actually nothing much to say. The third golden chapter and the follow-up are a bit dull and have a faint sense of madness. It is probably because the if line has been stretched to no end.

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In fact, I like the atmosphere that is a bit sadistic but not strenuous. I enjoyed the torture and the protagonist is not weak and has highlights. He and Jing Yuan are evenly matched, and I also like the way they confront each other😍.

An impeccable masterpiece. Except for the part where he saves Luofu from being wrapped up in memory, which is a bit difficult to understand, it is very interesting. It is the best among the Beng Tie novels that I have read all the time (this is also the first time I have read the Beng Tie if series, and I have read the Ark if series before). What was a bit uncomfortable to watch was the conflicting psychological description of the protagonist Belloberg at the beginning.

Suddenly I realized that I didn't write a book review I feel a little uncomfortable in Belloberg, and I don't know why. Later, Louvre feels much better. I haven't finished the plot yet, so I don't know much about the characters. It may be a little broken, but it's okay. I can ignore more updates. In addition, I also want to write a book about the war that damaged Haisei, and I plan to publish it during the winter vacation. Now I am asking for suggestions, characters, text materials, and general directions (the last paragraph can be deleted)

Very logical article, good emotional line processing, maybe I like such tragic stories, but it is not easy for me to find such articles, I feel very lucky, thank the author for bringing me a story that I am willing to read, and giving me something to look forward to in my gloomy future.

The writing is so good that I can hardly find the right words to describe it, because in real life I seem to have a problem with my expressive language system, but it is worth reading anyway, especially the chapters about Fu Xuan in Chapter 50. I felt so sad that I almost couldn't hold back my tears, but at the same time it was also very good.