
When the Moon Was Bright and the Clouds Returned, A Yu Meng Fanfic
当时明月彩云归【玉梦同人】
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 275k Words
- Genre
- Two Female Leads
- Updated
- 4d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
76Chapters
1.3kReads
8.6Score
126Shelves
105Listens
28.5kReads · all time
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It's like a story that grows out of the parallel universe of the drama version of "The Wind". The characters are not OOC, Li Ningyu is still the same Li Ningyu who is cold to the bones but warm to the heart, and Gu Xiaomeng is still the same Gu Xiaomeng like a moth to a flame. The brain-burning rhythm is right, the emotional restraint is right, and even the painful feeling of "I die and you live on for me" is right. The writing is good, the background is appropriate, and the emotions are delicate. It is still being serialized. My only wish: I hope the author will keep writing more 😢😢😢😢😢🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
It's very beautiful, and the writing is very satisfying. I feel it is the best Yumeng fan novel I have ever read. The plot and emotions are so delicate. It's not like Tomato's AI writing. You can feel that the author is writing seriously. I feel like you will fall in love with it even if you haven't read Feng Sheng.
The author's description is very detailed and fits the character very well. I really like Seducing Dreams and this book. I swiped more on another phone. So maybe this account shows that I haven't read much. But it's actually almost ruined, okay? Strongly recommended to enter the pit. No loss in investing! ! ! !
It's been a long time since I've seen such an excellent Yumeng fanfic. It's different from what I saw before. Instead, Xiaomeng has become "Nian Shang", and Yujie is the one being cared for. The subject matter is very novel. I love reading it. I hope the author will stick with it!
I saw a comment saying that Gu Xiaomeng buried Li Ningyu with his own hands. But I want to say that if you like someone, if you love someone, don't you just want her to become good? Xiaomeng made Sister Yu in this time and space different. I think this is what Li Ningyu in the original time and space wanted to see. (I guess that's definitely not a bad thing at least, right?) [Ps: I think I should have expressed myself clearly, right? 💕] The teacher wrote very well, come on! 😘
It's not OOC, the writing style is good, it conforms to the narrative style derived from fan fiction, and it has appropriate descriptions to increase the sense of immersion. Highly recommended, a five-star masterpiece.
Jade Face Ignorance: Please forgive me for being reckless. I should have left a paragraph comment, but I wanted to know the subsequent development of the plot so much that I read all the way to the latest chapter and only now left a long comment. The story is a very bold adaptation. Usually Yumeng is only about Yumeng. When Gu Xiaomeng returns to fifteen years old, she will more or less want to change Li Ningyu's life, such as abandoning her three husbands to avoid the pain of gossip. In the article, Gu Xiaomeng chose to face up to the relationship between Li Ningyu and her second husband, and even saved her daughter. I was doubtful, confused, and embarrassed at the time. How could I let Li Ningyu suffer the pain of pregnancy, childbirth, and breastfeeding? Modern medical care is so advanced that it is inevitable to suffer some physical pain. The situation in the Republic of China is turbulent and precarious. It seems that the daughter will only be a weak point and will delay Li Ningyu's work. But after Weiwei was born, I changed my mind. Maybe it was because of my "selfishness" that I wanted to give Li Ningyu a sense of fulfillment and care. Although the process was difficult, Weiwei finally brought joy to Yumeng. And if Gu Xiaomeng is to stay by Li Ningyu's side and take care of her during pregnancy, it seems to be a good choice. Before Gu Xiaomeng went to the United States, most of his daily life was very warm, without swords and swords, and no fight to the death. The stand-in gag is also quite interesting. It usually defaults to Gu Xiaomeng falling in love with Li Ningyu, no matter which parallel world he is in. Gu Xiaomeng's uncompromising, unforgiving, and unyielding nature is actually her "human" side. Her lover would die without hesitation, leaving her alone for the rest of her life, which would scare everyone. But the dispute between the two of them cannot be solved by ignoring it. It doesn't matter if it's private or OOC, it just needs to be meaningful and reasonable. What's more, I think Dada Dada's steady writing and fluent writing have created another universe of Jade Dream for us, which deserves recognition.
I have read a lot of Jade Dream fanfics, and my favorite is Hesheng. Now this one has the same place in my heart as Hesheng. It is so well written. Especially when it comes to character creation, many fanfics portray Xiao Meng as reckless and mediocre, and Sister Yu as too rigid and rigid. I think this article is well-written, and it is the jade dream in my heart.
I think this is the best-looking one in the Yumeng CP series. . . 🥰
I have never seen such a detailed and true description, as if the story is unfolding in front of your eyes. This is definitely not a cliché novel, it is an exquisite meal with a new taste that is definitely worth tasting.