Genshin Impact, Is This a Romantic Story You Wrote?

It's a very novel subject matter, but I feel that there are too many descriptions and praises for the heroine's beauty and talents in the entire article. It feels like a male-centric novel. I feel that the author can reduce it appropriately. It's ugly. Let's avoid lightning. Forget about men wearing women's clothes. Throughout the whole story, they talk about how beautiful the protagonist is. In almost every chapter, someone praises the protagonist's appearance. It's from Long Aotian's script.

It looks good, but the book could be better (referring to Dao Teivat readers). You can write a book like "Pseudo Love", where you love each other but can't be lovers, but there is no death. Now those readers know that all the protagonists will be "living" in the future. If this gives some hope, they will think "What if the ending is like "Pseudo Love", at least they are still alive?", And then find that they are all "living" as before. [Laughing evilly][like]

It looks good, I want to laugh when I see the scene of being stabbed [laughing] The identity of the protagonist seems to be the end of the world [smile]

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It's really good to watch. I'm scared to death if the author dares to make a sudden revelation. When I think about them eating Ompharos's knife, I feel like I've eaten the elders of the Soul Palace. I look forward to them seeing Xiao Bai's 33550336, and also looking forward to them seeing the ending😃😃😃😁 And the part about Xiao Sanyue coming back to form a lifelong train made me cry😁

I've read more than 170 chapters, so I'll talk about the pros and cons for those who haven't read it and whether they should start reading it. It involves spoilers, so if you mind, please don't read further. Advantages: Daily life is very dull, and it is interesting to watch others being stabbed by novels. This is in line with the theme of writing novels, which is not about killing. The protagonist is very charming and almost everyone thinks he is beautiful. Disadvantages: The protagonist is in a state of basic amnesia (he only vaguely remembers things related to the plot of Genshin Impact, and remembers that he is a time traveler). After waking up, he was picked up by Hutao, and he has very little participation in the development of the plot. Those who want to see the prophet change the plot may be disappointed. The protagonist's force value is very weak, but he has many backers. If you want to see unrivaled force, you can leave it. The author probably just writes whatever comes to mind, so occasionally he writes more on a daily basis. Those who just want to read the knife novel Knife Teivat may be impatient. Other characteristics (it's hard to say whether it's just a shortcoming or an advantage, it feels like the conclusion will be different for different people): The protagonist was reborn on Teyvat many times and experienced many deaths, but she didn't remember it. At present, when I posted this comment, I saw the friends of Gui Zhi and Wendy (due to the existence of the protagonist, the Wendy here is female). The protagonist is not a setting of seizing the body. The author's setting is: this is a story because of the protagonist, which means that it is a substitute nature. In the setting of this novel, there is no original Teyvat's Ending and Wendy's Friends. There is only the protagonist. Although the ending of the story is similar in the end, and the author hints that this will happen again later. The protagonist has been reincarnated many times. If you don't mind, don't read it. Although the protagonist is a man dressed as a woman, except for her sexual orientation, she can be viewed as an ordinary girl. Maybe it's because I don't know anything about those plots. I feel that the plots other than the Heroes of Ompharos are not very attractive to me. Now I am more curious about what the protagonist did in Teyvat to make her a veritable patron king. The overall development is a bit slow. There are more than 600 chapters in which Ying has not yet completed the main plot of Xumi. It seems that the author has no intention of writing the plot of Nata and Nodkale. It also lacks a sense of immersion in allowing Ying to push the main plot alone. The daily writing is okay, but the description of stickers can be less dense. Too much would be bad. Overall, there are a lot of problems, but I can still accept it. I hope the author won't write a bad ending. Judging from your current content, the ending is not easy to write. The main difficulty lies in how to end it naturally. It depends on the author how to complete it.

The writing is good, but I think romance novels don't have much profound meaning. People like to read this kind of thing, and they mistakenly think that the three views follow the facial features because they are popular because of their appearance. I think the really meaningful ones, such as "Coco", have deep meaning. This is also the reason why I hate Japanese comics. Putting aside the appearance, there is really no meaningful reason.

Ah😲? Yunduo☁️😄, da↘da↗da↘da↗da↘, I really want to play Genshin Impact😨, clouds☁️Genshin Impact😙, dang dang dang dang 😊, watch the wonderful things 👍🎊😆, Yun☁️Genshin Impact😄, woo woo woo hoo, I really want to play Genshin Impact😭😭😭Yun☁️Genshin Impact, my friends are here😊😃😆, let's play Genshin Impact together, Yun☁️Genshin Impact! Ahhhhhhhhh😙, I really want to play Genshin Impact😙Cloud☁️Genshin Impact, hahahahaha🤣🤣🤣, play Genshin Impact together, Cloud☁️Genshin Impact, think about it, 🤩I want to play Genshin Impact😋Web cloud, low power consumption and no distortion😌, WiFi network cable🥰, all can be 60 frames😍, come, come, come, come👏, enter the cloud☁️Genshin Impact Not proud! The comment cannot be changed.

Four points for encouragement. 1. As the author himself said, if you want to write too much, you won't be able to write anything. 2. It is mentioned over and over again in the two books that the protagonist "writes" too slowly. Is writing the book the main story? Or is it the main line with Hutaotie? Or is revealing the identity the main plot? 3. Every character who has appeared in the game will say a paragraph after receiving the protagonist's book: "Is the author's name Luo Qing?" "Isn't it a coincidence?" And so on. Finally, I recommend the author to read the book "Genshin Impact: An Ordinary Scholar". Writing the book, developing Liyue, and following the original plot are three intertwined and parallel lines, so you won't have this problem. You can also watch "Genshin Impact: Seven Elemental Demon Gods". The main plot is clear, which is to make friends with the Genshin Impact.

Author, you are great. Not only did you let me watch the new series, but you also allowed me to successfully eat another piece of Omphalos' knife. I thank you. I also want to send you blades like those Luo Qing readers. @The Witch's Bride The Heroes of Ompharos The first volume should contain 3.0~3.1 In Bengtie Volume 2, including 3.2~3.3 Volume 3, including 3.4~3.5 Volume 4, including 3.6~3.6

It's so good-looking, I'm really looking forward to the follow-up. Let me comment for the author again. After all, my friend has broken the defense [laughing]

The writing is very good, but I hope the author can let the star train come to Teyvat accidentally after the end of the Omphalos story. I think it will be very interesting [smile][smile][smile][smile]

How should I put it, I actually can't accept the protagonist's changing identities, such as Luo Ying, who replaced the original Wendy's friend, the original Inazuma. After all, the first half of the article is about the protagonist's original identity. From this perspective, I think that the protagonist will at most end up in Mondstadt and meet Wendy. But if the protagonist wants to become close friends with Wendy, it will be during the Demon War. Another possibility is to have a story with Wendy and her friends. So I gave it this score. My wife's writing is very good, but it just doesn't meet my taste. (I still want to read it and will continue to follow up.) And I want to read the plot of Ompharos's novel later and see the hearts of everyone in Genshin Impact breaking through their defenses. Hehe~✌︎( ᐛ )✌︎

It's lighthearted and funny, and I'm trying to avoid those bad reviews. This book is mainly about fun and happiness. I won't spoil the setting of this book. The main thing is that Teyvat exists because of the protagonist. If you are interested, you can read it. I strongly recommend the author to write "We Still Don't Know the Name of the Flower We Saw That Day", which is abbreviated as "Unheard Flower Name". It is a heartwarming story about friendship and growth. The background is suitable for Rice Wife. I strongly recommend the author to read it. You can also read it again after reading it [smirking] [smirking] @

It's not a male video, part of it is describing how beautiful the protagonist is, and most of it is writing and reading novels. The CP is Hutao. The protagonist's current identity is still partly unsolved. He just said what his predecessor did, so he wanted to help her. What he did was not detailed. Yingmei is still running in Xumi [covering her face], which is basically a daily routine. I wrote about some battles in the early stage, which I guess are not very good. Later, I almost didn't see any battles. Just watching Ompharos, the plot was too long and I couldn't bear it, so I ran away. [Sinister smile]

There is no doubt that it is a high-scoring work. The novel is well distributed with normal daily life. It is not the kind of movie-viewing version of the novel where you read prophetic novels and movies all day long. The only flaw is that there is no fighting, but it is a daily life after all, and it is acceptable.

Great book! It's very interesting [like] (only for me personally) To be honest, as long as the author doesn't mess around later, this book will be rated stable at 9 points [eating melon] (although I haven't read much yet, please leave it here for now and I will change it later) Yu Hua's "Alive" and other works that I feel can be mixed in a little bit. Since he is a swordsman, he has to approach it from all aspects [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The Year of the Dove Holding the Branch The eternal throne of heaven has arrived, and the world has been transformed. Then the True King, the original one, began to wage war against the seven terrible kings, the masters of the old world. Those terrifying kings are dragons The Original One created His own luminous shadow. And the number of shadows is four. [Phanes, or the original one] The original one may have been Phanes. It has wings and wears a crown. It is born from an egg and it is difficult to distinguish between male and female. But if the world is to be created, the eggshell must be broken. Phanes - the original one - used eggshells to isolate the "universe" from the "microcosm of the world". [More than forty years after holding the branch] Forty winters bury the fire, and forty summers boil the sea. All seven kings were defeated, and all seven kingdoms bowed their heads to heaven. The original king began the creation of heaven and earth. For "us" - its poorest people will appear on this land. More than four hundred years of holding branches Mountains and rivers were built, and seas and oceans embraced rebels and disobedients. The original One and the Shadow created the birds, the beasts, and the fish. Together they also made flowers, plants and trees. Finally they created man. The number of our ancestors is unknown. From this time on, our ancestors made a covenant with the Original One. The chronology has also changed [The year when the box boat opened its doors] The Original One has a divine plan for man. As long as people are happy, it will rejoice. [The year after the opening of the box boat] People work hard and reap the first harvest. People dug and harvested precious gold for the first time. People gathered and wrote poetry for the first time. The Year of Carnival If there is famine, food and rain will fall from the sky. If there is barrenness, the earth will produce mineral deposits. If there is melancholy spreading, Heaven will respond with a voice. The only forbidden thing is to lose to temptation. But the avenues of temptation have been blocked. Year of Burial The arrival of the second throne in heaven is like the beginning of the great war at the beginning of creation. That day, the sky collapsed and the earth collapsed. The ancestors of our people in the Abyss, and the land they have lived in for generations, fell here. The dark ages began. [Metaphor of the sun] In the dark cave, there are a group of people living who have never seen the light. There was a wise man who had seen the sun and described life under the light and the greatness of the sun to the people in the cave. Seeing that everyone could not understand, he lit a fire. People then began to worship fire, thinking it was the sun, and even became accustomed to a life of darkness and fire. After the death of a wise man, someone occupied the fire and cast his huge shadow through the fire.

It's very good to read. It's really nice to read a novel like this after a late night snack [full]

Please give me a five-star rating, I will do anything. [Also, plot solicitation]

Eh! I have a good idea. For example, Luo Qing's rebirth will go against time according to the end. For example, if he dies now, he will travel back to 500 years ago. If he died 500 years ago, he will travel back to 1,000 years ago until the timeline is completed. Then Zhongli recalled the lock given to him by Gui Shi before his death after Luo Qing died, and understood everything after unlocking it. Then it's "Emperor, Emperor, please don't cry" [laughing evilly] You can also change "L. A. Confidential" to "Fontaine Confidential" so that Navillette can eradicate corrupt officials in advance [laughter]

The writing is great, the plot is natural and smooth, and the posts are also very sweet. However, how come my Gui Zu is there? I always lied to myself that I was Gui Zu's sister, but later it was revealed. The daily part is also quite immersive. Good job, author, but if you want to write about a hundred queens, you have to pay attention to Shen He. [Understood]

Evaluation: good-looking, interesting, Suggestion: It would be better if the quoted story is introduced in more detail. By the way, it predicts the author's setting of the protagonist. The protagonist is a time traveler and has multiple identities in the Teyvat continent. I think it includes Wendy's friend when she was a wind elf (the boy who resisted tyranny), the Dust Demon God's death, the Thunder God's sister Raiden Jin (Baal), and maybe the Salt Demon God Heulia. Why do you say that? Zhongli quoted from the book said, "Weak and adventurous, he died over and over again, not knowing where he would be born next." This is the overall basis. Then, the identity of Guanyin is very obvious, so there is no need to say it again. Why Baal is also the protagonist's waistcoat? Because Zhongli said, "To untie the bell, you must tie the bell." He expected the protagonist to have a story in Rice Wife. Anyone who knows the plot of Rice Wife knows that the main reason why Ying pursues eternity is to really die; and Zhen is also a good character who likes to show off. As for Wendy's friend's vest, when Wendy appeared on the scene, she hinted, "Wind, I will write a novel after the demon war in Mondstadt is over." This hint is relatively obvious. The protagonist was obviously in Mondstadt during our demon war, and Wendy's attitude towards "Forest of Fireflies" also illustrates the problem, "important things should be preserved well." As for guessing Heulia, because the protagonist has dreamed about salt, but I'm not sure if the time is right, but the characters are relatively similar. In the future, Xumi might be the God of Flowers. According to Fontaine, it should be Egoria, the first-generation water goddess. Wow, guessed wrong

I have always felt that the setting of this book is very similar to a certain fan novel that I have read before [what]

It's good to watch, I just want to catch up with the big army, don't do it [face covering], the author is quick to update, even the donkeys in the production team 🫏 don't wear such rest [Please update][Please update][Please update][Please update]

If you want to write a group portrait, you can't just write a group portrait. You should write about the most squeamish one who was stabbed in the heart by thousands of arrows, the sensitive one who is mentally deranged, the beautiful one who has sores and pus, and the kind-hearted person who has a murderous nature. Those who long for reunion live a hundred years alone, those who want freedom are trapped in a golden cage and kill themselves, those who are upright bend ninety-nine and eighty-one degrees, trampling on the common people with only pity for all living beings, praising the light that blinds the eyes, and pursuing the truth that is forever imprisoned in the city of lies. Let the meridians of the skillful hands be cut off, the homes of the lovers be ruined, the upright slaves be on the knees, and those who seek immortality die at the age of seventeen. It is necessary to write about those who uphold justice and fall into the prison of injustice forever, those who are innocent become playthings, those who are shrewd die in confusion, those who are ruthless die in heartbeat, and those who are loyal die in betrayal. Let the lively die in solitude, and the lonely die the loudest. Or let the coward die of bravery, the despicable die of accidental nobility, the pedantic die of determined rebellion, the violent die of kindness, the suspicious die of trust, and the despicable die of dignity. And when a playboy is willing to turn around for someone, that person dies in front of his eyes but can do nothing. Those whose blood is not stained by the worldly world are eventually tainted to the extreme and commit suicide in despair. It causes those who slay dragons to grow scales, those who slay demons to worship evil gods, and those who slay tigers to curl up in the tail of a cat. The group of people who died in the novel is because everyone wants others to survive, and in the end those who are alive seem to have passed away. The ending allows the person to inherit thousands of last wishes without worries, to breed all kinds of obsessions without desires, and to cry blood to the end of the world without joy or sorrow. The transcendent ones will be trapped in the mortal world forever, the free ones will be trapped in the earth, and the mediocre ones will wander the world due to madness, carrying their fragmented memories but unable to die. And this is the most merciful ending among the group portraits.

It seems okay so far. Is the hint of the protagonist's identity a time-travelling? Is it necessary to hide this identity from the protagonist? There are currently two identities, Luo Ying and Gui Zhong. Judging from Si Ying's side, there should be an identity. I'm speechless. It's been more than 400 chapters, and the protagonist is still kept in the dark. He doesn't know any of his identities.

It's good to read, but it's too short, with 130 chapters and just over 2,000 pages. How about the author writes it as Lily?

It looks good. I like the author very much. Keep up the good work.

Not bad, the story is classic but the author's writing is very good