Sequence 01 Prophet, the Country Makes Me Invincible First

The writing is very good and has the style of a boss, but if you say you want to be popular, you have to change the part about sex. At least if you have this part, a large number of women will not read it. And if he wants to be popular, both his male fans and female fans are indispensable. And when reading this article, it is easy for readers to think of you as a loser. It affects the perception very much. Then there is the fact that you don't grasp the rhythm very well and write things too slowly. You wrote so many pictures when the protagonist killed the first monster, and the protagonist was completely brainless at the beginning. Now there are only about 10 pictures. It is still very easy for you to change it. The protagonist is not said, at least he is an ordinary person. The first thing you wrote is relatively realistic, but the later part is a little strange. The protagonist is in daily life It's easy to mobilize this elemental energy in life. It's been so long, but why haven't we found out how to use it? Moreover, the ability to predict is not a simple ability to predict. If it has lethality, doesn't it mean there is something wrong with this world? If it is a pure ability to predict, it can only know what will happen in the future, then this world may be an ordinary world, and then he has something different. But this precognitive ability can control others. This is the biggest problem. Why did the protagonist not think of the previous character design? It is that the protagonist has not developed this thing. How to say it? That's all. I hope the author can change it if he sees my comment. I won't say it anymore. Five-star support. And you have a bit of a running record. The first few pictures are fine, but I don't know why the last two pictures start to run smoothly after such a short distance. My writing skills still need to be polished(ง •̀_•́)งCome on

This novel is really well written. In other novels, countries and countries have almost become background versions. However, although the protagonist in this novel is said to be a bit useless, if you bring in ordinary people, do you think the protagonist is actually quite normal? But is it super reasonable for the country's scientific researchers and the like to show extraordinary IQs?

The content of the plot is very interesting, there is nothing unreasonable, but when does the protagonist strengthen, he has always been so weak, and his original power has not been restored from the beginning to now [laughing and crying] This power bank is very qualified.

From what I've seen so far, there's nothing bad about it, the plot is compact, the world view is grand, it's a bit funny, and it's also very realistic. If you like to watch the kind of protagonist with a country behind you and strong combat power, you can watch it. Anyway, it's a bit addicting. The scientific concepts here are all current subjective scientific concepts and are very real. These authors must have done their homework on things like wormholes and energy.

The writing is quite good, but the author can speak pornographically anytime and anywhere regardless of the situation. The author looks like a middle-aged man!

Beautiful (♥∀♥), great potential! ! ! The world view is also very large, and the characters are well drawn and have distinct personalities└(＾ω＾)". The plot is attractive. The disadvantage is that the volume is too small now. If you can stick to it, it will definitely be a good book (＾3＾♪

The subject matter is also very good, but it gives me the feeling that the global IQ has dropped a hundred times [smile] I thought I was assisting the protagonist in killing, but I didn't expect the protagonist to be the energy source. I couldn't stand it, so I withdrew.

Author, who are you? The Guinness record is set every minute 807 letters, each Chinese character requires six letters, each The clock can knock out about 134 words, because you are not the holder, So let's calculate it based on 100 words per minute. According to organizational standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours And it takes you about two hours to eat every day, and another 20 minutes Come to the toilet, 40 minutes to wash up, and one hour to exercise Body, two hours to get inspired, then one hour to peel off the hair Moyu, you should have nine hours to type, Linyi type 435,780 words, based on 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 36 chapters Why do you only post so much content every day? Laozi Tell me, is it withholding? Even the donkeys in the production team dare not do this Rest, the author quickly gets up and writes.

It looks pretty good so far, my type. There's nothing sinister about it. In fact, the protagonist's behavior is the true behavior of most people when they encounter this situation. Much better than those mindless cool articles, come on, author!

Chapter 85 No heroine The realms of sequence ability users: spiritual realm, bright realm

It's readable, at least I think the scientists in it are treated as human beings, unlike other books where a group of scientists ask the male protagonist to come up with ideas. So far, there's nothing wrong with the plot. The development of the plot is also very reasonable and has a clear outline. The only shortcoming may be that the word count is too few.

It's quite interesting so far. The only question is why the protagonist can awaken abilities that don't belong to the human world. At first glance, I thought there was a battle between various sequencers. I didn't expect that there is only one sequence for the protagonist. Maybe the sequence may be plundered and given to others later, but isn't that thing said to be the ability of a god? If it is not a god, it means that it is likely to be manipulated by others, or the ability can be withdrawn. I don't know how to play in the future. I hope I can continue to write.

It looks good for the president, but in the later stage... The combat power system is too strong (the one with a very low online limit) and it becomes a god. As a result, it can only be compared to around level 4 civilization... Maybe the author can't write a better level, but overall it's okay.

Why is this only 6.6? The author has offended someone. This beginning alone is more than 6.6. Although the first dozen chapters are not as good as Tomato's other masterpieces, they are already very attractive. Come on, author.

It looks good. Don't give me a female assistant or something in the back.

I have a question. Since the original energy will not change in the future, if you swallow the fragments of the supernatural power in the future time and space, will it not change when you return to reality? Then will it mean that you will be invincible after going back and forth like this?

It feels very good. Why is the rating so low? The writing is okay. The main reason is that it is very enjoyable. The male protagonist has a plot where he is looking for a woman. The girl is not comfortable to watch. The ending is a bit sloppy. I thought there would be more to come, fighting various gods, but it ended with the God of Thunder.

It's not bad, there's no NT plot, it's an official collaboration novel that you can read.

Not bad, quite interesting

I'm not good at words, but I'm really good-looking

It's not bad, but it's a bit weird to use as a power bank.

A classic savior literature that brought flying to the country

It looks good, the protagonist has a large power bank, and the warriors rush in front of each other [laughing]

Very good. This theme is very good. I look forward to the day when the protagonist becomes invincible. I hope there will be less emotional lines. This kind of invincible route is very good.

This novel is very moving and well-written. It describes the true journey of an ordinary person after awakening his ability and the country's reaction. There is no need to say more about the rest.

That expert cooperates with all the actions of the protagonist, has brains, knows the most cost-effective solution, knows to prepare for the worst, does not take chances, and will test all possibilities. This is a normal approach. Don't believe in luck or the halo of the protagonist, do your best, use your strengths and avoid weaknesses. That expert, in reality, as long as someone is willing to work hard, he will be the next one.

Very very beautiful

Not bad, but there are few words

It feels pretty good. It was just too frustrating in the early stages.

It was a little tough at the beginning, but it got better later on