Move blood and split the mountain, engrave the title of a marquis, line up to make a king, and reach the pinnacle of humanity; then step on the divine way, fight fiercely in the imperial pass, take charge of the supreme, and finally become the immortal emperor, and use the blood and bones of the wild to create the legend of the heavens.
Reader comments
It belongs to the "high-quality opening" level, with strong readability and subsequent explosive potential. After polishing the details, it can score 9 points+
The first ten chapters have established a high-quality opening with "compact rhythm, three-dimensional characters, self-consistent logic, and perfect atmosphere". It not only satisfies the "burning and refreshing" needs of readers of fantasy novels, but also takes into account the plot's pursuit of "logic and depth" for readers, and allows the controller to feel the "temperature and growth" of the characters. There are no obvious shortcomings on the whole. It only needs further optimization in the differentiation of supporting characters and polishing of details to become a fantasy work with the potential to become a hit. As long as the current level is maintained in the future, there is a high probability that it will achieve a double harvest of word-of-mouth and popularity.
The supporting characters are not tools! Aman's sincerity and bravery, Shi Lie's uprightness and responsibility, and the witch doctor's calmness and wisdom, each has his or her own character and role. Aman grows up with the protagonist, Shi Lie goes from doubting at the beginning to full trust later, and the witch doctor is both a mentor and a supporter. Their interaction with the protagonist makes the Stone Tribe feel like a "real home" instead of the background of the protagonist. This bond in the wild world is a plus!
It belongs to the "high-quality opening" level, with strong readability and subsequent explosive potential. After polishing the details, it can score 9 points+ The first ten chapters have established a high-quality opening with "compact rhythm, three-dimensional characters, self-consistent logic, and perfect atmosphere". It not only satisfies the "burning and refreshing" needs of readers of fantasy novels, but also takes into account the plot's pursuit of "logic and depth" for readers, and allows the controller to feel the "temperature and growth" of the characters. There are no obvious shortcomings on the whole. It only needs further optimization in the differentiation of supporting characters and polishing of details to become a fantasy work with the potential to become a hit. As long as the current level is maintained in the future, there is a high probability that it will achieve a double harvest of word-of-mouth and popularity.
The supporting characters are not tools! Aman's sincerity and bravery, Shi Lie's uprightness and responsibility, and the witch doctor's calmness and wisdom, each has his or her own character and role. Aman grows up with the protagonist, Shi Lie goes from doubting at the beginning to full trust later, and the witch doctor is both a mentor and a supporter. Their interaction with the protagonist makes the Stone Tribe feel like a "real home" instead of the background of the protagonist. This bond in the wild world is a plus!