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Reader comments
Your book about Pokémon at the age of six is quite good. If there is anything bad in it, the protagonist is suppressed by his sister. Apart from that bad part, the other feelings are quite good. Also, your book has too few articles and updates are not as fast as others.
The advantage is that when you first start playing Pokémon, the Pokémon are very powerful, and the feeling of crushing them is really refreshing.
The plot design is good, but the only flaw is that the author's description skills are a bit shallow, making it read too plainly and lacking some appropriate description methods. I hope the author can write better and better
I just finished reading Chapter 12~ I haven't had enough time to read it yet~
Isn't it possible? The system gives the protagonist an invincible circle that can be moved. In this way, the protagonist can also become invincible. In this way, the protagonist does not need the protection of Pokemon
I like it very much. It's very beautiful. I like it very much. I like it very much. I hope it will continue until the end.
Although I like it very much. It's refreshing to subdue it like this. It's very refreshing and comfortable. These are my favorite Pokémon.
That is, can you not put them all together in piles? You should stay for a while.
The rating is actually five stars. Please keep updating the author [Making faces] [Blowing kisses]
Super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking
Your book about Pokémon at the age of six is quite good. If there is anything bad in it, the protagonist is suppressed by his sister. Apart from that bad part, the other feelings are quite good. Also, your book has too few articles and updates are not as fast as others. The advantage is that when you first start playing Pokémon, the Pokémon are very powerful, and the feeling of crushing them is really refreshing.
The plot design is good, but the only flaw is that the author's description skills are a bit shallow, making it read too plainly and lacking some appropriate description methods. I hope the author can write better and better
I just finished reading Chapter 12~ I haven't had enough time to read it yet~ Isn't it possible? The system gives the protagonist an invincible circle that can be moved. In this way, the protagonist can also become invincible. In this way, the protagonist does not need the protection of Pokemon
I like it very much. It's very beautiful. I like it very much. I like it very much. I hope it will continue until the end.
Although I like it very much. It's refreshing to subdue it like this. It's very refreshing and comfortable. These are my favorite Pokémon.
That is, can you not put them all together in piles? You should stay for a while.
The rating is actually five stars. Please keep updating the author [Making faces] [Blowing kisses]
Super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking
Good-looking (/ω＼) shy, so funny
Highly recommended, the content is pretty good
Writing skills need to be improved
This is too invincible
Very good, the details are very nice