Lelouch of the Rebellion: Rise of an Empire

It's okay, but I missed c. C. What are you going to do with immortality? Lelouch is also a serious problem. Let's see how you write later.

There are too few articles in Lulu, so I must support it. It is indeed quite novel to start with the federal feudal towns, and I have the desire to read it. As for the shortcomings, the combat description is still a bit poor, especially the mecha does not have that passionate feeling.

When did the author start taking the emperor as his wife, so that he can peacefully transition to control the center, and order Li Xing to help fight against Suzaku. He can not only gain combat power, but also gain a nominal claim to control the entire federation. It can also prove that the protagonist really wants to increase the strength of the federation, rather than becoming a licking dog who only cares about appearance. Only by making the protagonist worthy of his consciousness can it meet the brief. You can have emotional scenes but not licking. [Thinking][thinking]

This is a rare Lelouch fan who describes the war very well. A rough game is played like a sad game, and a top game is played like a top game. I feel like Yuffie handled that part very poorly. There are many ways to detonate a situation, and it is very unpleasant to follow the original work completely. At most, he could save Yuffie in exchange for Cornelia's favor. After this, Yuffie can be said to have no value at all. Her ideals, self, reputation, and rights are all shattered, leaving only her life. For readers who like Yuffie in the original novel, the impression can be said to be a complete failure. Secondly, it is also a huge blow to the character of the protagonist of this book. Inaction or lack of action on the premise of knowing the plot defaults to the established track. A lot of the previous emotional shaping was in vain, interests came first, and the image of absolute self was crucified. If a similar situation arises in the future where you need to choose between feelings and interests, the choice will be very simple. If you choose interests, you will be scolded by readers who like the original characters; if you choose emotions, you will be scolded by both the original novels and passers-by. If you don't handle it well, you are not a human being inside and out. I think you still need to think more about how to deal with the original characters. The conflicts will become more and more acute later on. In the end, if Lelouch, Suzaku, or other characters get involved with the protagonist, you should kill them or not.

When will the Qingjun side begin?

I hope to write it quickly and unify the Eastern Hemisphere as soon as possible

[Laughing evilly] When Gundam 00 comes to this world, he can use dimensionality reduction to strike.

The male protagonist doesn't have G yet, or this book doesn't involve G yet. I'm very curious about what he will do when facing Lelouch and several people with G in the future, or whether the two will form an alliance in the future.

A semi-fanfic that draws on worldviews

It's rare to see Lelouch fans

Just don't be the heroine Yuffie, it's better to be the emperor. Isn't this really a group portrait? I can't see the protagonist in these ten chapters

This is a rare Lelouch fan. I support you, but I haven't seen much of the geass element. I hope there will be geass of the protagonist in the future.

Good reviews, the author must keep writing them, I'll feed you by watching the ads [Thinking] This kind of book is inherently difficult to write. It has to conform to the background view of the original work and also show a different style on this basis. It is a test of writing skills and a lot of work. Come on.

Okay, ok, ok, ok

Big cheers for the author

The writing is okay, it has the same feeling as when I first started reading fan fiction (⁰▿⁰)◜✧The author writes very well. Although there are some flaws so far, there is nothing that I can't stand. Please work hard and finish writing [sending heartfelt wishes]

An old fan, worth watching

A very nice book. Highly recommended. Highly recommended.

Come on! I've read several fanfics, Lelouch of Honkai Impact There are also some other Lelouch fans I also watched Red Alert and Lelouch There's also World War II and Lelouch. Come on, I hope it doesn't end badly.

Not bad, I hope I can finish it

Come on, author, and ask if there is a female protagonist.

Bragging, you can also see the Battle of Stalingrad in Lelouch Fans

A rare Lelouch fan, with good descriptions of war and rigorous logic.

I'm looking forward to the final showdown between the male protagonist and Lelouch!

It looks good, it would be better if a female protagonist could be added to the protagonist

Not bad, I hope I can finish it

The first Lelouch fanfic book!

Very well written, come on, come on.

I hope it will continue to be updated

Very good, worth having