The author is a newbie, and I hope you guys can point out the things I wrote poorly, and I will correct them in time. Thank you (*^o^*), and I will give you a thumbs up! ! M(._.)M The introduction is weak, please move to the main text (actually the author cannot write an introduction (ﾉ´д｀))
Reader comments
A book with reasonable potential, at least it doesn't have too many problems, it's just minor ones, and the author doesn't pretend to be dead. He will respond to you with likes, which means he has read your comments. It's much better than those messy Warhammer fanfics. I hope the author can make progress in the future (give a five-star review first and see what happens next)
At least the hole dug is not too big [face covering] Like other Iron Breaking Warhammer fan fiction, they dug a big hole. I don't know how they fill it. A novel must be written slowly, especially this kind. Don't rush, otherwise it will be broken easily like I have read many similar novels.
It's okay, I understand the language problem, don't be a eunuch
The hammer smell is very light! ! !
The writing is very good, keep writing hard, come on
The main thing is that the author should not add extras in the early stage. After all, readers prefer to read the main story. Only in this way can it be popular. How should I put it? For example, people who download Tomato are looking for good books from shit, which is a great sense of accomplishment, but you also need good books. With such good writing, just writing extras without promoting the main story is in vain.
A book with reasonable potential, at least it doesn't have too many problems, it's just minor ones, and the author doesn't pretend to be dead. He will respond to you with likes, which means he has read your comments. It's much better than those messy Warhammer fanfics. I hope the author can make progress in the future (give a five-star review first and see what happens next) At least the hole dug is not too big [face covering] Like other Iron Breaking Warhammer fan fiction, they dug a big hole. I don't know how they fill it. A novel must be written slowly, especially this kind. Don't rush, otherwise it will be broken easily like I have read many similar novels.
It's okay, I understand the language problem, don't be a eunuch The hammer smell is very light! ! !
The writing is very good, keep writing hard, come on The main thing is that the author should not add extras in the early stage. After all, readers prefer to read the main story. Only in this way can it be popular. How should I put it? For example, people who download Tomato are looking for good books from shit, which is a great sense of accomplishment, but you also need good books. With such good writing, just writing extras without promoting the main story is in vain.
What a great book, kids [laughs]