Behind the Scenes of a Transformation, Starting with Shinobu Kocho

It's okay, I'll read it when I'm bored, and there are really very few people behind the scenes in this real world. Generally speaking, the subject matter is okay, but don't stop updating it. This kind of subject matter is difficult to write. After all, it's impossible to have big ups and downs all the time. Come on. The most difficult thing about writing about this kind of subject is combat power. As an author, you must have your own fair understanding of the characters and not be disturbed by comments. Otherwise, you will have to go about your daily routine, otherwise it may be unfinished after all, the combat power has collapsed.

The subject matter is good, but the pace is too fast. At the 27th chapter, 7 characters have appeared. Each character has a scattered plot. The story of the butterfly ninja has not even started yet, and it has moved to the plot of the next character. The pace is too fast. The previous story just started to get better, and I started to read it seriously, so I switched roles. Here I suggest you play one copy at a time. First, you should explain the butterfly ninja and the ghost. At least, you should finish the head-on conflict before changing the copy. During this period, you can add a few characters to advance the plot. Open multiple copies at the same time, and it will be chaotic at the same time. , And it's a drama. You know, once readers start thinking about which plot it is, they have no desire to continue reading. At least, they are interrupted when they fall into the reading state. At least, I have no desire to continue reading, but I am not willing to delete it. I can only open it on a whim next time and continue reading [Learned]

So far it's not bad, but people will definitely die in the follow-up. I don't know how to write it. Don't upgrade your combat power too fast, otherwise everyone will die. Who will give the emotional value? The strength of the good and the bad guys must be balanced, the order must be stable, and sustainable development

I haven't finished reading it yet! I'm not waiting for the author to finish! I can't fall! Return of the Three Qi, Dragon Royal Guest, Nine Pattern Dragon Protection, Qi Hushan, Hidden Dragon Qi Explosion, Shaking Dragon Hammer, Whirling Dragon Fang, Chaos Dragon Fist, Dragon Claw Strike, Dragon Roaring Wave, Carry Flash, Orange Dragon Clear Eyes, Dragon Gate, Dragon Man Nirvana, Qi Wall, Autobiography Wandering Dragon Qi Wall, Dragon Qi, Purple Gold Dragon Shaped Qi Strength, Qi Hushan, Qi Covering Mountains and Rivers, One Qi Qi Explosion, Reverse Insect Dragon

Joining the official organization directly may dissuade some people.

There used to be a behind-the-scenes version of this movie, which should be regarded as a pseudo-clone. It didn't lick, its IQ was above average, and it was normal to bleed like a river. At least it's considered good in Tomato. I followed too little at that time and wanted to keep some books. After a few months, the book was blocked. Now I can only read it to see who understands my feelings 🙂🙂🙂 That book seems to have something to do with carving monsters. The first one is a werewolf. I have forgotten the name now. Anyway, the book has been sealed 🤦

It's good to watch, I love watching it, but there are fewer villains. Now there are Wuhan, Su Nuo (one finger), Makima (gray character) and Odin (possibly). Will Kaz (JoJo character), Aizen (Reaper character) appear later...?

After all, the other comprehensive black hands in front of me are better, but Wuxian still has insufficient numerical values. It is best to connect some natural disasters that can resist nuclear bombs and will not move randomly, and stand in one place to let everyone know, such as Antuen. You can also get a character who likes to have fun, such as the Bentie Happy Person, or a character who likes fighting, like the people in Dragon Ball

The creativity is indeed quite good and attracts more attention. Anyway, the beginning is quite attractive.

It's a novel book. It's quite rare in Tomato. It's quite creative. The main reason is that the little ambiguity described by the author is very good, but you can't describe it. Others describe ambiguity to prepare for the first and deeper intimacy. If you create such an atmosphere, wouldn't it be in vain if you don't write in depth? The author uses his own strengths.