Don't Move, I've Got You

The author's writing style is really, really good [shy] I really like it! I just finished reading it in one go. The only drawback is that it is serialized [crying][crying] Come on, I will watch it every day [shy][shy][shy]

It's a very good book. The writing is okay and there's a lot of room for improvement. However, I feel that the plot pace is too fast. Even if it is close to the compactness of a short story, it can be slowed down appropriately. Then there is the character design. I feel that the characters at each stage are somewhat different and very similar. I was stunned for a while. I guess it is because of the fast pace. Slow down the pace and bury some foreshadowing. I guess there will be no such problem. The author has great potential. Come on!

It's very beautiful, especially the description of details, and the details of the game are also very good!

It's really good-looking, and the words really make me feel bad. The baby Lin Nuo in it is like an angel. Gong is too duplicitous. Whenever you think he has changed, he starts to commit suicide again. I want to say, "Lu, stop it. You will cry when your wife runs away with someone else." (I have only read more than 30 chapters. I don't know if Gong will change in the future [laughs] Don't scold me [laughs])

It's really good to read, and if you think it's not good, please find someone who specializes in playing games to write it. If you can't write it, don't say it. Competitive games are inherently difficult to write about, and it's not your turn to comment [smile][smile][smile]

Very good, but the game content could be more realistic

It's pretty good, but the e-sports part needs to be strengthened. The emotional line is really great, I really like it so much, although Lu's dialogue in the early stage is not very good and a bit forced. I kind of hated Lu's behavior when I first watched it, but after I got the explanation in the middle and later stages, I really felt distressed. The two of them were struggling in the whirlpool of pain before they met again, which made me feel really distressed and distressed. . Lu and Yan, these two little bitter gourds, if Yan hadn't been set up four years ago, they might not have been like the beginning. Yan would not have chosen the future of his lover and left Lu, and Lu would not have suffered from depression. The two of them were still high-spirited teenagers, and they might have won their championship together earlier. But it all happened, but it didn't matter. They all survived, they were still by each other's side, and they also got the supreme glory that belonged to them. Finally, I wish the young couple 99 [love]

The writing is good, and many details are well described, but there is still room for improvement. The plot is also good. Overall, this book is very interesting. I recommend it. If you think the game content is not good, you can ask professional players to write it and see how well they write it. Can the author write extras? Looking for Lu Junyan and Su Yang online

Already finished reading. It looks good, mutual redemption, it can be said that the main CP and deputy CPs (Su Yang and Lu Junyan) also have mutual redemption. Lu was a little forced to love her in the early stage, but there was a reason for that. He was afraid that Yan would disappear again. Because Yan was threatened and then disappeared from the competition, he had a bad life for 4 years. In the four years since Lu Zaiyan disappeared, he suffered from severe depression and stress disorder, and the only people he hurt were himself. Therefore, he was threatened by Ye to separate from Yan in the later plot. Fortunately, Yan insisted on choosing Lu, and the rest was sweet. In the early stage, Lu didn't have a big mouth and just used his actions to make fun of his words. It was very painful for me to watch, but I slowly got better afterwards. It's quite uncomfortable to watch from the front, but it gets better and better the more you look at it from behind. Deputy CP, go and find out for yourself, I won't say more, it's redemption anyway. It's also very sweet, but the content is too little. Please come up with a side story of theirs. The e-sports elements are okay. Well, I'm not very familiar with Honor of Kings either. But it still feels a little lacking. It feels like most of the latter is describing how they (both the principal and the deputy) help each other deal with things (things that cannot be recalled, haze) It's a pity. The original idea was for the two of them to compete together and win the trophy together, but something happened to Lu's father. Lu couldn't take over the family business, and they couldn't compete together later. However, he watched Yan compete in the audience and won. Well, one competed with peace of mind, and the other sat at the back to make the competition fair. It's pretty good, but it's a bit of a pity. I wanted to give it four stars, but after thinking about it, I'd rather give it five.

Nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! Just... I want more knives~

Very nice! ! ! The character design suits my taste very well [laughs]

Reading this novel is no less than reading 188 [laughs]

It took me two nights to read it. The overall writing is very good, but who is the character in Chapter 147? The character who is a gentle scum in his 30s, I didn't seem to mention him in the follow-up after watching it, so I was a little curious.

It's pretty rough in the front, but it takes off sweetly in the back. I can't stand it anymore. I tied it after two days of chasing. ꒦^꒦

This book is really good to read. The author writes it very well, with delicate emotions. The main and secondary CPs are so exciting. Hee hee, it's very interesting, and it's also very interesting! ! ! Although bad things happened between them, they all stood behind each other, shared each other's burdens, and shouldered the burden together. Fortunately, everything changed, and the pain was finally over. "May we all meet again after a long separation"

Nice! It's super good-looking. Whether it's Lu Sijinyanche's sour feelings or the friendship of the GT team, it's all very eye-catching. The pictures of the game are also super clear, as if I'm immersed in the scene. The game against WS made me nervous! It's super pretty, I highly recommend it! No loss in investing!

It's pretty good. I usually can't read e-sports articles because I don't play games, but this one is okay. The overall article is also very good. I may think that the attack is not very good in the early stage, but I understand it in the later stage. There is also Shou's younger brother, which I think is a bit incomplete. Although he does not need to take up too much space, it is too little. In the later stage, he is almost missing. Even the last two people got married and there is no sentence describing him. It feels weird, but overall it is still good to read.

I think this kind of writing is particularly in line with my taste. It's very beautiful and supportive.

E-sports is the battlefield of youth. And you are the glory of my life. May all the deep love not be let down. May we all meet again after a long separation

It's so beautiful like this reunion, and although the front is very sweet, the back is really sweet, and then Xia Ran is also very cheerful, and I feel like Lin Nuo and others are all very beautiful.

Well, yes So well written Author I love you It can be seen that the author likes Honor of Kings very much [laughing][laughing]

Generally speaking, the content is very good. From the initial misunderstanding that caused mutual harm, to the subsequent resolution of the misunderstanding step by step, the two redeemed each other, and finally ended perfectly. It's just that the deputy CP felt that the ending was incomplete, CP Shen Ce only briefly mentioned it, and CP Su Yang didn't elaborate too much. It always felt like their ending was not very complete.

I really like this article, it's really good! ! ! ! For the first time in my life, I am willing to follow the series! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Like! ! ! ! !

This book is great

Damn, you tortured me to death [laughs]

Five stars, they deserve it

It's so cruel in front, my eyes are swollen from crying, I feel so distressed [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

This book is very beautiful

Very beautiful, highly recommended

Young lovers should be well