Mine****

The writing is excellent, but the pace is a bit fast. The protagonist does not seem to have traveled through time, but more like a person who suddenly gained a memory that does not belong to him. He is more like a person of this era than a time traveler. I don't have much research into history, so I can't give you any good evaluation. I just feel that The chapters are 6,000 words, so the whole book looks like there are not many chapters, but a lot of content. However, the words can be divided into multiple chapters, which may be better. It is just a suggestion, just a suggestion.

I think it's pretty good, exciting!

You can write it well, good luck to the author.

It's okay. If you like to read cool articles, I think you can read system articles.

The author's writing style is very good, and he doesn't have any tricks, so it doesn't look like a white text.

Five-star reviews encourage authors.

Overall, it's okay. Although there are flaws or they may be intentional, they are still rare.

Very well written so far! It's eloquent, smooth, comfortable and charming, and the writing style is very good!