The World-Weary Me Entered the Dungeon and Became a Heartthrob?

The setting is very novel and the writing is very good. It is a good book but it does have its flaws. I feel like the author wanted to write the protagonist who was cold and powerful but occasionally showed a contrasting cuteness. For example, at the beginning, he beat up the boy named Lin, which made people feel very happy. That part was very well written! But when the protagonist of Happy House went to the player lobby after watching it, Gulu looked a little embarrassed. He helped others buy things, and was there a hero in the end? (Perhaps you want to write a contrasting cuteness, gentleness that is different from the outside, and some dissatisfaction with the cruel reality?) And the memories of seeing the ghost groom and discovering that could be a side effect of memory loss? The protagonist seemed to be here for the second or nth time. The ghost groom also compared the difference between the last time he came and this time. He was lively and empty. I feel that at 18 years old, he must have experienced a lot. Please book a seat for Xiao Kugua. After losing his memory, he will be different from before. I don't know if he will slowly recover in the future. Anyway, now that I see some of the weak and out-of-control characters in this dungeon, as well as the stupefaction that does not match his own strength, I still feel a bit like that. After all, I had a great time watching the protagonist's battle process of being handsome and killing people in the House of Fun. Then I saw a lot of nosy people and some weird and stupid Ts appearing later. At last! The dungeon and plot are refreshing and well written. Happy House is the best. The players in the player lobby are also very interesting! It's just that sometimes the word needs to be divided into paragraphs, and sometimes it suddenly breaks into a whole paragraph at a glance! Segmentation would be better! Or when writing the protagonist, there are a few improvements, and the author may want to give all the cool characters and types to the stars, contrasting with cuteness, madness, heartthrobs, melancholy, etc., Etc.! It might be a little too stuffed now! It may also be that I am still in a state of amnesia. Maybe it will be good to restore my memory! Other high-level players can be described in more detail! The rest is beyond doubt! Come on come on

Yu Xing's character is really cute. The level of heartthrob is moderate, with just the right feeling of being particularly close but not too out of the ordinary. It looks really comfortable and not embarrassing. Narcissus and other things are so delicious. It's a really good book

The writing is very good, there are many foreshadowings and it can close the loop. I'm not very good at speaking, but in short, it's awesome Klass😏😏😏😏

Very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very.

Overall, it's okay. If I have to say it, some parts are a bit verbose, repetitive, and descriptive. It's not so easy to attract people's attention. The key parts are not so prominent. Everything else is okay. Most of the protagonist's characters are in line with my XP. I hope the author will get better as he writes.

It can only be said that it is shocking and delicious ᗜ ᴗ ᗜ

Shocking and delicious [adoration][adoration][adoration][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss] much more

It's so good to watch, every character has a soul, I always like Li An, I'm willing to watch half an hour of commercials to resurrect you [Love] [KISS]

I believe it is really good-looking. The plot is very rich, there are foreshadowings, the characters are well created, and the overall style is refreshing, although it is a bit sour (os hehe, every couple is so annoying)

Who knows? The protagonist of this book is completely on my xp, and the various descriptions in the plot are also very rich. I can see that the author's composition must be very good, and the detailed descriptions in the text are also very rich. After reading it, I can think of that picture in my mind. In summary, it is very beautiful.

It's very beautiful! The further you look at it, the more interesting it becomes!

It suits my taste very well. I finished reading it in one night [shy]

Yes, I quite like this type of food. Although it makes the author sad to say this, I can't find it, so I want to ask if there is any meal replacement?

It looks okay so far. [Shy]

Look, look, look, look, come on, teacher, come on, teacher, come on, teacher!

This is very beautiful˶>ᗜ<˶

Looks very comfortable! Well written

It's beautiful, I really like the character of the main character! ! !

The character structure is vivid and three-dimensional, and the plot is rich and colorful. I like it very much.

It's pretty good, the plot is tight

The protagonist's character is very good, and the plot is also very interesting!

Although some places are a bit awkward, overall it's pretty nice.