The Old Era: My Witch's Gate

The story is simple, the writing is excellent, there is almost no description of women's clothing and female bodies, and there is zero description of female abortion. The setting of the genre, the integration of the game world and the real world, the gradient, the description of the battle scenes is full, the background setting is perfect, the game props are really perfectly written, and a mature power system is created. The only pity is that there is almost no description of the appearance of the characters. Whether it is the heroine or the various supporting characters, there is no other poisonous point. The multiple vests are wretched and developed, and I hope that the subsequent heroine can show her saintliness in front of no enemies, instead of continuing to be wretched and making sneak attacks behind the scenes. A piece of writing worth collecting.

I hope the pace won't be too fast and there will be more of a witch's daily life~

Come on, my witch brother who likes to write about sexual transformation. Stone, big stone

Come on, author. By the way, is this book a change order? If so, I can help you recommend the book.

It's very good. The protagonist carefully plans step by step in the different world and secretly gains strength from the chaos. Every step is exciting. The only problem is that the impact of the appearance of many different worlds on the current world has been paved before, as well as the exploration and growth of other players. I thought the plot would be like that in "The Naming Technique of the Night", with many people traveling back and forth between the inner and outer worlds. As a result, there was basically nothing to do with other players in this world. It only writes about the protagonist's exploration in a different world alone. However, the story is still exciting, and the plot is more condensed and coherent. Adding too many things may not be good. It's a pity that readers who expect other players and real-life plots will be a little disappointed 🤭

It's a very good novel, but in Luo Lao's original work, it can be said that Azathoth and Bubbles are on the same level (many Cthulhu novels now use the second-generation set, including the so-called alien god setting); Luo Lao's side only has vassal gods and eternal prototypes; the only conclusion that can be drawn from just reading Luo Lao's original work is that Azathoth and Bubbles are the main gods of different pantheons 😏[crying with laughter][crying with laughter][crying with laughter]

I like this setting very much. Good luck to the author~

It lacks a sense of excitement and the game has very little flavor. You have to watch Chapter 22 before the protagonist has his first attack skill. Before that, there is no sense of feedback when the protagonist becomes stronger. The protagonist's calmness makes me feel that he has indeed been reborn. The gender switch is just a frown. He cares more about the power he has gained than these. The male soul brings the thought of becoming stronger, and the female body brings the pleasure of beautiful appearance. This is the transformation story. Is it still him who is assimilated as soon as he transforms?

It's good and very consistent. There's nothing unreasonable about it. And I like this kind of plot. It's not like the other ones, which are not good to watch in Athens? The plot is very good, please update me quickly

Looks good (♥∀♥), cheers up Not bad, a little tired.