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It is a well-written original fan novel. I feel that entering the vast world of Pirates means going on adventures, rather than trying to overturn this and that every day like other fan books. It is purely sick. I have basically read the Pirates fanfics of Qidian and Tomato.

Some details are too elaborate and feel like Pirates of the Caribbean, such as the Hanaliu disease in the crew details, and even the low-quality intestines. These can be thrown to the ship's doctor, because the painting style of One Piece is inherently abstract, and the physical structures of real people are very different. This realistic and detailed description could be more general. It is suggested that the word "common people" can be replaced by "civilians" or "poor people", and it can also be extended to the meaning of "slums", which makes it appear lower than common people. Nowadays, in life or in games, the word "common people" is used more often. The overall writing style is pretty good, it's the gold among Tomato's many shit works, come on

It's a pretty good adventure story. When I first started reading One Piece, I just watched Luffy and his gang going on adventures in various places. Now, One Piece novels are basically about flying into the air every second, and then getting entangled with Rocks and his gang.

It's very interesting to watch, the plot settings are good, the combat power has been steadily improved, and there are no bad points. The only poisonous thing is the protagonist's fruit haha. The stinging jellyfish is really poisonous, but I don't know if it is a phantom beast species. I will make a bold guess about the animal type, the human fruit, the phantom beast species, and the moon jellyfish form. (In ancient Japanese mythology, jellyfish are called "Ugetsu", which means the moon in the sea. They are the messengers of the ocean gods.)

This is the pirate world of my dreams, my hope for the distance and my desire for adventure. A longing for the world. Bonds with partners. The exhilaration of traveling the world. The wonderful struggle for dreams and ideals. Each character is vivid and flesh-and-blood. . It takes me back to the time I watched One Piece. Isn't this what we are pursuing? The fascinating new sea route among pirates, the primitive world of desert ice and the legendary sky island. Everything is my childhood dream. [Cry][cry][cry]

A very good One Piece fanfic, even if I don't watch One Piece I can still read it Here are the pros and cons Advantages (personal opinion) 1. The protagonist does not have the mentality of a time traveler, but really integrates into this world. 2. The protagonist is not a god and will make mistakes and lose. But the mind is strong. 3. The plot is not static and will change according to the actions of the protagonist. 4. Combat power increases steadily and will not suddenly increase to a very high level or become very low. 5. The protagonist's outlook on life is normal. 6. The supporting characters and protagonists have good emotional descriptions. Disadvantages 1. Some plots are draggy 2. The reason why Warring States identified the protagonist is slightly lacking in details. 3. The early plot transition was too fast, and the more detailed growth process of the protagonist was lost. Overall review: A very good fan fiction, worth reading. Detailed rating 4.2 Points (out of 5 points)

Although the storyline is relatively smooth, it is very suitable for a slow pace. Reading their stories is like watching a new group of adventures. There is no particularly fast or unexpected strength improvement, and there are no particularly weird or abrupt plot connections. It is a book that is very suitable for slow reading.

The early stage is great, and I can see the adventurous spirit that is different from other pirate novels. The disadvantage is that the protagonist's abilities are not obvious. In the middle period, we experienced major events, and there were many more plots in which the protagonist used his abilities. But Moji said that his strength has improved. When fighting, he either runs away or runs away. The legendary king of defeat and the legendary king of escape. I was disgusted when I saw the Wano Country chapter. I gave it up after reading the previous chapter.

It's good and very interesting. This novel doesn't just focus on descriptions of powerful moves. It doesn't focus on killing without thinking. Instead, it focuses on scene selection. It's more like a travelogue. The adventures of a jellyfish captain are a rare category for Tomatoes. I personally think it's very good. It's very relaxing and natural. I support it with five stars!

It's very interesting, with lots of details and good writing. It's slow-paced. The author portrays the protagonist very well. It gives me a sense of adventure and growth like in the early and middle stages of One Piece. Moreover, the author writes a lot of six or seven chapters a day.

There is no excessive favoritism or conspiracy theories about either pirates or navy like fast-food novels. The three views are also relatively normal. There is no darkness of excessive burning, killing and looting. It has an adventurer mentality similar to Luffy and Roger's group. I have seen the latest chapter so far, but I haven't seen the heroine. Anyway, it is not a plot where a small head controls a big head. I can accept it whether there is a heroine in the later stage. And there are more, 5/6 chapters a day, well done to the author, he didn't lose his position [laughter]

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It's very good to watch, the main character is pretty good, and it's very comfortable to watch. The protagonist's ship has a good atmosphere, ideals, bonds, and passion, and it can be considered an adventure group. The part about the dachshund that I feel is a bit poisonous at the moment is the part about the dachshund. It stands to reason that the protagonist has traveled through time and has a good understanding of the world. He should know the characteristics of the animal system, or he may have let down his guard. Fortunately, no one died. The betting part is okay. The strength improvement is reasonable, there are also foreshadowings of domineering, and the logic is smooth, but there is not much description of the protagonist's development of the fruit. It feels that the fruit development is not enough, and the protagonist's fighting scenes are relatively few, and the description is average. It feels like they are all cruelty, or the subordinates should be more powerful. The Pirates fic on Tomato is really good, I'm still looking forward to it.

The writing is indeed good, the plot can be read normally, and some minor flaws are innocuous. It would be better if the protagonist's character could be more decisive and ruthless, and less needlessly nosy. After all, the pirate world does not need the Virgin. The Virgin does not deserve sympathy, and there is no need to forcefully save everything. The plot is getting more and more boring

So far it's pretty good, the protagonist is strong, but not to the point of being enjoyable. Among pirates, it's at the top but not yet a top genius. I mainly like the relationship between the protagonist and his subordinates, and it's not a passionate adventure in the name of a pirate, but a pirate group with a bottom line, similar to the one with red hair and white beard.

What I love most is this kind of unsystematic and full of growth. It's not like that which is not strong in the early stage and then takes off directly in the later stage and flies very fast. This is not good. I think this looks good, I keep looking at it

I have been following this novel for a long time, and it would be an 8 out of 10. It is a good fanfic, even if you have not read the original work, it will not be affected. The article is more daily, and the male protagonist, a time traveler, has integrated well. He does not spend all day recalling the plot of the original work like other time travellers. , The shortcomings are also obvious, the battle is too strenuous, the early stage is okay, the combat power is not high, but the later stage is much worse. In terms of the male protagonist's bounty, he is already the third pirate group, but after reading the whole story, I feel that the male protagonist is still a little Karami, if I hadn't read After reading the original work, I knew that the people he fought against were all masters. From the description in the article, I could not tell the strength of the male protagonist at all. I originally thought that Karai Bali and Wano Congress would be the hot spots, which could fully demonstrate the strength of the male protagonist. After all, one involves the Celestial Dragons. A bounty has skyrocketed, but I didn't expect to win all of it, especially in Wano. After seeing such a crotch-pulling performance, I no longer have the desire to pursue it. I write down this feeling here, in case I want to read it someday and I can get it back. I hope the author writes better and better. We are destined to meet again.

It's really interesting, The logic of the plot is normal, and your opponent has brains. It has a strong pirate flavor, and the protagonist is not a treacherous person. Have a bottom line and a conscience, He is a normal person under our nine-year compulsory education, and we can understand his mood very well. If he is successful, he will help the world, and if he is poor, he will be alone. In the later stage, it started to become watery, and there was no longer the same smell as in the early stage. Little information, not enough comedy, fewer conflicts, no life details, lively dialogues, less popularity Similar to an emperor, he began to recruit gangs to conquer the world The plot rhythm starts to feel weak

The update volume is large and the content is full of the author's own thinking. It is rated as a super big cup. The only shortcoming is that the protagonist has few highlight moments and the voyage is faster than the progress of strength. The first part was pretty good, but around the 300th or 400th chapter, in order to slow down the pace and keep suppressing the combat power, the protagonist was exhausted and his brain was deteriorating. It is written like a mindless plot from more than ten years ago. If you have the strength to crush your opponent, you have to write about how strong the opponent is, and the fight with the protagonist is back and forth, and then the protagonist sighs a few words, and then defeats the opponent, so that you can stay in the water for many days. Before the end of the novel, the author began to think about retirement, and his writing did not have the passion of a pirate.

The plot is very good, with brotherhood, hard work, and dreams. It's just that the fruit's ability is a bit weak in the later stages (it's just an animal-type jellyfish fruit after all). It's best to awaken in the later stages and become a phantom beast. After all, the fruit's ability is very important. At present, it seems that no general-level devil fruit is an ordinary animal-type devil fruit. I hope I won't give up on powerful fruits because of Wen Qing

A great novel, I caught up with the latest chapter in two days. The protagonist's pirate group has a size of about 100 to 150, and the characters on the ship are all original (except for the cuter ones who seem to be joining), and you can see that everyone is getting stronger step by step. The overall pirate group is more adventurous, but they can also kill marines, and there is a human touch on the ship. The supporting characters do not overshadow the main role, and the opponents who should be offline will be offline. The protagonist's combat power increases normally, which can be considered a cool article. The shortcomings, in my opinion: The protagonist's Devil Fruit abilities are less displayed, that is, poisoning, strengthening arms, and strong recovery. (Maybe not a disadvantage)

It is a good-looking pirate work, with a reasonable plot design and interesting character descriptions. It is one of the best quality works in the world of pirates that I have seen so far. It is a five-star review. I hope the author will continue to produce such good works. I also wish the author and all readers a Happy New Year—!

The writing is very good, I just hope the author can update it three times a day, I just hope it will be updated three times a day, and then continue. I like to read Pirates fan fiction, but there are too many better Pirates books. They are obviously very good, but they are discontinued and then not updated. They are just slow to update. I hope the author can update more, if possible, I hope the author can update every day. Come on, author. I personally feel that this book deserves a rating of at least 9.5. I don't know why it is so low.

Wow, this article is wonderful! Looking forward to the next update is as difficult as reaching the sky! I have read all the old chapters, but I am still confused about the new ones. There is no news from day and night, and it is difficult to sit still and feel at ease. But when I saw the empty space in front of the screen, my fingertips were filled with thoughts. I also heard that everyone else was asking each other, worried about the empty mountain. It is difficult to look forward to the update, it is difficult to climb up to the blue sky, to make people wither their beauty! Three autumns in one day are like every other year, and my heart is tossing and turning. Leaning on the railing and sighing in the distance, I caress the scrolls and think for a long time, feeling sad. When will you return the pen? Lovesickness is endless and unattainable. I just read the good articles and continue the new rhyme, and my soul and dreams linger in my heart. I also heard the clear wind blowing up the moon at night, and I felt sad about the empty mountains. Looking forward to the update is as difficult as climbing to the sky. I turn sideways and look to the west and sigh! I only hope that the Jun family will use their pen and ink to spread a new chapter to comfort the crazy thoughts!

I read it in one sitting, a very good pirate fanfic. However, the background of the world is set in 1470, the era of Rocks. The protagonist ate the jellyfish fruit and set off from the West Sea with his partners. There were basically no plot characters in the early stage, and the recruits were all cultivated by themselves. After entering the new world, it became exciting, passionate, partners, and fighting adventures. Recommend!

After reading it, I only saw two bad points in the early stage, but it was very refreshing later on. The first is that the protagonist knows that this is a pirate world, but still has hope for the navy? Gangsters who are arrogant and domineering must have official protection Second, after catching the esper, just tie him up. Even if there is no sea tower stone, he can still soak in the sea water. It feels really good in the later stages, and the final score should be 8.6

I haven't seen such refreshing writing in a long time. The characters are full and very enjoyable. Rating: State Banquet

I have the indescribable feeling of the early masterpieces of One Piece. That is the original One Piece. It is very good. Come on, the author [learned] [learned] [learned] [learned] [learned] [learned] [learned] [learned] [learned] [learned] [learned] [learned]

Hurry, hurry, update quickly! ! The original characters are almost just borrowed backgrounds to explore the world of pirates. I didn't feel the poisonous spots or the dementia scenes. It's logical, not very intelligent, but certainly not mentally retarded. It's not a Long Aotian-style plot either. Good reviews.

Anyone who has read One Piece can give a good rating. This book is really well written. [Like] The author's writing is smooth! Adventure, fantasy, treasure hunting, companionship, cruelty, conspiracy, decision-making, and steadily improving strength are not like the system flow that makes people bored after reading dozens of chapters. The author of this book has written it carefully [like it] to make people want to keep reading! This book is definitely worth a rating of 8.8 Or above [like] What's going on? Written by Wano Country? Has someone been replaced? 6, 6, Can't afford to offend