The Sand Sculpture Junior Sister Is Crazy and Crazy, the Senior Brothers and Sisters Are All Biased

At first, I got into it through the AI ​​comics on Dy, but as I watched it, I became more and more obsessed with it! I especially like Ye Su's character and way of speaking. It's very interesting. I watched it for two days and it's still not enough. The author will update it soon [crying] [crying] The plot has not shifted the focus of writing because of the appearance of the male protagonist. The female protagonist is also growing step by step! Super recommended! ! ! !

I couldn't get enough of the AI comics and turned to novels. I didn't understand why such a good novel had such a low score. I couldn't stop laughing. (Unlock the reward function~Swipe the ads every day to give the author a small gift~Let's express your love~) No, I read a lot of book reviews and said that it would be better without cp. The introduction of the book states that it has cp. If you don't like it, don't read it. Why do you want to give a low score after reading it? What kind of brain circuit is this? What kind of sense of presence is there🙄🙄🙄 (ps: I only read it if there is CP!)

Dear readers, there is a CP in this article, but the CP appears late and has a low sense of presence. The heroine is the strongest. The CP only needs to provide beauty and emotional value to our heroine, and will not be stronger than the heroine. Let's go to the world of cultivation with Ye Su and a group of talented teenagers to cause trouble [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

I watched it because I saw the AI ​​comic. It's pretty good and funny. I haven't found any problems so far. It's still worth watching. The author's profile says that if you have a cp, you should be the senior brother. The male protagonist appeared twice before chapter 100, and appeared a little more after chapter 100. The male protagonist is not blindly cold and indifferent, he is the kind of little white flower who doesn't understand anything. Hahaha, this kind of male protagonist is rare, but it is quite interesting. I recommend it.

I haven't seen this type of Cultivation of Immortality for a long time. It's so good that I couldn't help but keep scrolling down. There are also many funny elements in it, which made me unable to close my mouth. It's really awesome. I recommend the author to update 10,000 chapters a day [Blow Kiss] Yeah, I think the succubus' physical contact with the senior brother in the secret realm doesn't need to be written, even though it was just touching the arm, thank you.

This book is really good, very, very good, and the writing is okay. The heroine got the golden finger before she could become an immortal. I think this is a bit stiff, but the heroine has many traces of cultivation, which is not bad at all. Moreover, I did not see any obscenity towards the heroine in this article, and rarely describes the female body. This makes me feel very comfortable.

Seriously comment and give full marks just to let more people see it. I think there is no problem with the portrayal of the heroine and the group portraits. What makes me most uncomfortable is that the emotional scene between the heroine and the senior brother is very deliberate, just like the heroine in an idol drama who falls must be supported by the hero. The big frame says there is CP, so as long as the two of them come together, it is to facilitate this task. People in the comment area have also been consuming some points that are really hard to agree with. So I chose to give up at this moment. It looked really good in front of me, but I couldn't accept this kind of feeling. I prefer the kind of love that happens naturally and for a reason, but this novel creates the feeling that because they become a couple later, everything before them is reasonable. This is my personal opinion and everyone has the right to express it. Don't try to argue with me. If you feel the same way, you can leave a like! ! ! ! I can't accept this flaw in the emotional drama, so I won't watch it, probably because no one will read my review seriously. But thank you anyway. I am serious about the rating I gave you this time.

I finished it in two days, and I personally feel that the plot develops smoothly and naturally, the small details are well handled, and the plot is also very interesting. Every 🕳️ is explained very well, just like the pastry seller who glanced at the senior brother. I thought it was because the senior brother was good-looking, but I didn't expect that he was also afraid of high cultivation. The heroine is very sober and has a good show, and the sects are also well portrayed. Each of the direct descendants is very interesting. The swordsmen of the Hidden Moon Sect are really funny (Chu Tiankuo is named and criticized hahahaha). Also, the demons forced them to take the position of the heroine and their dialect was so touching. Moreover, many plots are relatively clear and will not make me tired. It is very suitable for relaxing. (Although it is a bit difficult to see the car in Tomato, the contrast between the senior brother and me is so delicious😋Teacher, can you have more [KISS]) I just don't know if there will be any activities to name characters in the future [Thinking]

The description of the heroine's growth history is very interesting, and the other supporting characters also have quite a lot of character traits. I don't really like the emotional scene between the protagonist and Mu Chao [facepalm] and look forward to the plot of the battle between the outsiders and the cultivator.

So pretty! ! ! Yes, it's very silly, and everyone has their own characteristics😋 I like the male and female protagonists very much, it's so sweet, I want to crawl in darkness, but the male and female protagonists are also very bitter [crying]

Good-looking, really good-looking. I really like Ye Su, this article is light and funny. It was fascinating to watch. Recommended recommended. Just a quick mention. Can the author update 100 chapters a day? Try to update 100 chapters every day. Did the author see it? Author author. @Don't put coriander @Don't put coriander

Delicious😋😋The male protagonist is simply ignorant and "silly and sweet". . . So delicious

It's so beautiful, baby Ye Su is so cute [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] I especially like to watch her sweet daily life with her senior brother. I always firmly believe that low self-esteem is the best beauty treatment for men [Adoration] The daily life is so beautiful, they are all a group of very cute and lively people. Baby [makes a face] and the master, it feels like there are a lot of foreshadowings, I look forward to the subsequent plot🥰 (When will we be able to clear out those outsiders, I feel miserable for them😣) In short, boss, I will support you to become the top immortal cultivator in my heart! ! 🥺🎉🎉

It's really super good-looking. It's totally worth five stars. The author's writing style is not immature but sophisticated, and the concept is very good. One plot after another is fascinating and makes people want to watch it. As for the cp line, although some people say that group portraits are better without cp, but adding a little white flower senior brother as the male protagonist makes the story more interesting. I personally feel that the character of the male protagonist is very good. Although he is very strong, he feels like he is dependent on the female protagonist, and he has a sense of deja vu like a little pitiful puppy. , And I feel overweight. I feel like I often read comments. I hope to see my book review. I feel like the article you wrote is very good. It is a real female channel. The left and right halo is concentrated on the heroine. It does not use ruthless words and uses his father's words instead of other traditional words. The overall writing style is very relaxed and funny. It has many jokes. It is very interesting and imaginative. I don't know why the score is so low, but I personally feel that it should be above 9.5, Which is very good on Tomato.

At the moment, I think it's very nice and smooth. It's more of a group portrait, with a group of people walking side by side chattering. I like the character design of the female protagonist. The characters of the senior sisters and brothers are also good. The character of the male protagonist is relatively new, a little white flower who has no experience in the world. Jiang Ruanruan's character is a bit too thin. Her hatred for the heroine seems to come out of nowhere, but she seems to hate everyone for no reason.

I have read more than a hundred chapters, and it is really interesting. I like Ye Su's character very interestingly, and the images of other characters are also very well created. I don't give it five stars because it is not finished. I hope the author can keep writing like this and don't end it! ! ! !

The characters in the book are quite three-dimensional and rich, which really impressed me! The plot is also relatively compact. I read more than 500 chapters in one go. I like it very much. But what I feel most right now is that the heroine's sense of responsibility is not strong. She knows that she has the protection of heaven but she is not diligent enough. The plot of play is serious. In order to prevent the plot from being too heavy, it is understandable. However, the progress of the heroine cannot only rely on the help of props and the like. The description of her own efforts still feels insufficient. It makes people feel that the heroine has been shaped a lot, but it always feels like something is missing. However, it feels very good after watching it. Continue to pay attention [Thinking]

This is a book that I recently felt was particularly well written about the world view and character settings. It seems that the author has buried a lot of pitfalls. I hope the author will update it quickly (I heard that someone wrote a book in one day and gained 10 million fans [shy][shy][shy])

It's very interesting. I also read Ye Qiao's book. I think it's very different. This one is equally interesting, but the content is not the same. The author is updating it quickly. I've read it all in one sitting [crying] [crying]

It's very pretty, very pretty, and there's nothing I find boring so far. Who knows, when I'm fishing at work, the corners of my mouth just can't help but curl up.

Nice! There will be many funny points, and they are not deliberately funny. Although the heroine is very talented in cultivation, her speed and ability are not exaggerated. In the previous competition, according to some articles I have read, she will defeat the senior brother who has won seven games in a row, but here it is normal, and he is not defeated. The heroine's abilities are getting better and better in daily practice, and getting along with the senior brothers and sisters is also very interesting! In particular, the male protagonist is very beautiful, but very simple. I love this contrast!

Personally, I think the writing is pretty good. From what I saw, the male and female protagonists haven't had much contact with each other, and there aren't a lot of lyrics about running girls. I don't know why many people say the writing is stiff. I think it's actually okay. I didn't give it five stars because it's not finished yet, and I'm afraid that the author will abandon the story. After I finished it, I immediately added five stars.

This is quite good-looking. It's the kind of group portrait where you are cultivating immortals. Each character has his or her own emotional experience in life. There is no such thing as saying that everyone loves the female protagonist, or everyone likes the male protagonist. It's just the kind of heart-warming group portrait. It's quite beautiful.

I really like the senior brother and the junior sister, they are so sweet, they are both amazing, especially the succubus of that senior brother, the junior sister Tiantian Gou is really sweet, I like them so much, really. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's so pretty, you know? Unlike other good-looking articles, this article has a real sense of immersion, as if they are really appearing in front of you. It is a real story. I didn't jump to read it. There is no need to explain the concept [Like]

I like it. I haven't been so interested in a novel for a long time. When I read other novels, I always see some points that I can't understand, but not here. Although I was calm at first, [shy] the more I read, the more I like it. I hope the author can continue to write seriously and support it! ! !

A very good novel. The author's writing style is great. The language is concise but full of tension. Every character is very vivid. It's been a long time since I followed a novel so heartily. Come on, I hope this novel can be read by more people [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

A comedy-type novel about cultivating immortals, Ye Su's golden finger will not make people bored, it is very smart and lovable. There are modern words and settings, but they are smooth and acceptable, such as Huling. Com and Mobile Jade Slips hahaha. The group portraits of the seven major sects each have their own characteristics. Looking forward to the sequel of the battle of wits and courage with the scheming heroine Jiang Ruanruan. It's a light-hearted novel that relieves stress, I recommend it!

It's really good to watch, it's too over the top, and it's not finished at all. From morning to night, the character plot is very good, and it's also very funny. If the author adds more, it won't be enough. I'm waiting for the update every day [crying] [crying] [crying]

Jujujujuju looks great, everyone in Feixianmen is having fun, it's so funny. But why is this book only rated 8.1? It should be at least 8.9. The heroine has a strong sense of presence, and the whole story is narrated around the heroine. The villain has a strong presence, but the length is not long. It doesn't seem too disconnected, and the plot is also very coherent. Please keep updating and wait for the completion.