[Goddess of Victory: Nikki] + [No system]
Can ordinary people survive safely when they travel to Nikki's world?
Lu Yun didn't know clearly, but from the moment he chose to be a commander because he was desperate, he had only one way to go.
But fortunately, he has the advantage of a prophet and can handle most difficulties, even if...
He glanced at the heretics surrounding him.
There was a moment of silence and a chuckle.
Even if you rebel against Ark! I want to live and breathe!
Reader comments
I'm not bragging, I feel it's better than the Goddess Force. The main character in that novel is the same as a big stallion. Although the plot has a strong point like this, it may be that I've read too many single female protagonists, and I feel disgusted when facing such a big stallion. However, this book is not abrupt at all, and the plot of various characters is also quite smooth. Not bad, but I discovered it a little early and a little bit, so I need to raise it.
There is meat in more than 100 chapters, but why not Rabbi [crying],
I have always been a rabbi viper [crying], I hope to give rabbi more drama [crying]
Why don't I, Rabbi, eat meat...
Compared with other Goddess of Victory novels in Tomato, this one is much better. The protagonist is finally not a camera who only follows the plot, but a normal person who uses the plot to achieve his own goals.
I read it for more than 120 chapters, and it was a pleasure to read it all in one go [laughing evilly], but in chapter 106 I finally got the meat, but why isn't it a Rabbi [face covering]? Can we only talk about the value of the security guard?
The writing is very good. The process of fighting and game is very well written. There is no unnecessary description in the fight. If Gaba dies, he will be killed immediately. The game is also very detailed. There is no unnecessary description like a big stomach fat. The writing is quite exquisite. I personally think it is very good [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
The early stage is a bit literate, but the look and feel is pretty good. Ordinary people are like this (it's only the early stage now). I really don't see what the protagonist's abilities are. I don't know if I can't remember the power station because I simply forgot or it was some kind of foreshadowing. It should be foreshadowing. The author has written it like this. If you say you just simply forgot, then I will attack you. It has the potential to become a good book, so you can wait and see.
Is the protagonist set by Luo Bo?
Finally there is another very good novel written by Nikki
The following contains spoilers, but the plot and period are handled well anyway.
The protagonist has no system and is not down. Ark starts the game by delivering couriers. Because he couldn't survive by delivering couriers, and he didn't want to rely on the courier girl Nikki, he went to be a commander. Relying on familiarity with the plot, he defeated several battles. When Marianne was corroded, he used the information gap to lay out a plan. He tricked the fire dragon into threatening the goddess's troops to obtain the antidote and rescued Marianne. Then he cooperated with Eden to trick the fire dragon again, and used the fire dragon threat to threaten Annick to obtain the deputy commander and clean up a batch of bugs.
Now it's tied, the good news is tied, the bad news is tied 😂
I have never played the game, but I have played it. Not to mention the plot, I hit two when I should, and Tata is on fire when I should. It has surpassed 90% of Tomato writers, and the characters are so lifelike that readers can always make up for the past characters. The disadvantage is that it is too lazy to post pictures, and it does not try its best to popularize the plot and character biographies for non-gamer readers. It is not very professional and is purely for love. (They are all based on popular knowledge from readers in the comment area) One sentence is that the author's writing style should be influenced by Niqing. He has probably read a lot, and he has quite a talent for writing. If more consideration is given to the reading experience of the audience and popular themes are introduced, the future will be promising enough to go to the starting point to prove the truth.
It's good. The author really writes well [like], but if possible, I hope there are more female protagonists, not just ambiguous ones [grievance]
It seems that I have to support it. I will support it for hundreds of chapters. I will skip the plots that I don't like. The incompetent commander is just a burden later on. I hope to reduce the number of scenes where the commander appears. It can serve as a background to unite Nikki. Every time I see the incompetent commander, I get angry.
It's well written, and the protagonist's IQ is online.
So many Nicky's haven't been written yet, but the author has started to create original Nicky, which means, am I here to see you write original Nicky?
Yes, it has achieved something that many fans have failed to do. There is no extremely obvious and eye-catching OOC, which brings great convincing power, and the plot is smooth. It is a very good fan.
A very nice article, just reading Chapter 7 makes it very interesting and fascinating to read.
The protagonist Lu Yun is not like the commander in the original plot. He was just an ordinary person who played the game at the beginning. In order to survive, he had no choice but to become a commander. As a result, he happened to be assigned to Rabi's team and met Marianne by chance (he replaced the previous commander of Rabi who shouted to death in the original plot).
Later, the protagonist also secretly tried that his own blood was not the antidote. In the end, Marianne was corrupted, and he had to sacrifice Marianne's body as bait to defeat the tyrant blacksmith.
I played the game Nikki, and Marianne's death left a big impression on me. It was very tragic. In the author's description, when the protagonist had to give up Marianne in order for everyone to survive, it was almost a replica of the original plot of shooting Marianne: the protagonist's inner struggle as a normal person, Rabi saying before the battle: Thank you for thinking about us living people, and Anis shouting after the battle: We never blame the commander... These plots are particularly beautiful.
The subsequent plot is not always smooth sailing. The protagonist is like a survivor, making adequate preparations for every action in order to survive. Of course, there are still surprises... (I will spoil the story if I go on...)
In short, this is a rare and good article. The author must have put a lot of effort into writing it. After reading Nikki's consultation, the characters are very consistent with their settings, and there are no girls given away. They are all conquered by the protagonist.
Although there are some personal settings of the author in the article, they are all in line with Nikki's settings and are not obtrusive at all. It even makes people look forward to what new things will come next.
It's just a different story line for Nicki.
(The protagonist will become stronger later on, so you don't have to worry about the protagonist being weak all the time. But at this time, if he doesn't become stronger, nothing seems to threaten him.)
5 Stars, must be 5 stars. I felt so good after reading it in one go () As a fanfic, it does require you to understand the game plot and even part of the characters, but it is undeniable that this is still a very good novel, and the character of the male protagonist is very suitable to my taste. As for the poisonous points directly caused by the plot and the game, I can only say which fanfic author will not be stabbed in the back? I personally feel that this book is not rated 9 or above, but giving it 8.5 Is not excessive at all. I highly recommend you to read it, and I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on [Like]
A rare NIKKE article, very well written!
It's a top-notch Nikke fan at the moment, but after playing Nikke, I think it's just a piece of cake. The character design fits the game very well, and there's basically nothing too OOC about it.
As evidenced by the length of study, high-quality food and grass can be tasted.
I've only read 8 chapters and I'm already giving it a thumbs up. The author writes well and is very contagious. Here, I hope the author will continue to write like this and not be politically correct. This is a different world, not the earth. There are always many books that like to include personal items, I hope this one will not
For now, the full text is quite good, except for Nikke's perverted setting and Nikki's past, but you can read it normally if you don't understand it. The lack of a system really adds points to the spin-offs. After reading it for so long, most of it is about the system. I hope it won't break down in the future. I'm really looking forward to its future development.
It's very interesting, especially the latest part where Lao Yun dies. I have never played the game, but I have gained an insight into the appearance of that world in the author's words, and the appearance of Marianne, Rabi, and Anis. I hope that he, them, and that not-so-beautiful world will have a good ending.
Summary: The main plot is well sorted out, and it can be seen that it is different from the original main plot. However, because the protagonist has too much information, the main plot of Ark was written too quickly, and some Nikki (my Helen) are missing. In short, you, the author, get full marks. (If there are more Ark extras, I will still have a mystery)
Outsiders can still watch it, but the only drawback is that the game is so poorly known that no one posts pictures to increase the sense of immersion. The logic is okay. As for the high-level cerebral palsy... I have a little understanding of the plot. In fact, many official plots are also very cerebral palsy strictly speaking. For example, the fire dragon takes Lilivis's torso and bites the inhibitor to weaken the queen, which directly causes the queen to take over Lilivis's body.
It's good to read. The reason why it's missing one star is that starting from Marianne's return, the plot is particularly stomach-churning, comparable to the White Album (not talking about the plot). I'm starting to read the book now from the latest three chapters. I'll look at the rhythm and read it again. My good mood these days has been wiped out. To be honest, I asked the author, and the author ignored me. Of course, I don't recommend it. This book is really good (it looks good in the front)
The author's writing is so beautiful. I hope he keeps writing. It's great.
The best nikke fanfic I have ever seen. The characters are well created, but some plots may be a little less. After all, there are so many nikkes. The most comfortable thing is the protagonist. There is no system or brainless plug-in. From the beginning, he lives on the streets delivering food to the deputy commander of Ark. He is gentle but also decisive at critical moments. The part about thunderous methods is even more exciting. Whoever has the strength is still being wronged in Ark
Great, no need to say more
Brothers, this is much better than the other fanfic. At least I really like the character of the protagonist. He is not arrogant and complacent, and he is humble and cautious in everything he does. Although the subsequent plot is different from the original work, it is very interesting. We can finally see Shu En kneeling down to beg for help. [Laughing evilly][Like][Like][Like]
It took me a while to read it, and then I remembered that I didn't give a review. This is basically the most reasonable and interesting Victory Goddess novel in all of Tomato [face covering] Very strong character creation (appreciation) But when will the author come back to the trap😡😡😡 and update me👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿
It's okay, this is probably a fanfic for a game, and it's quite attractive to me, an outsider. It's just that the authors of 🍅 all like the male protagonist to be cut off by others. Also, can you put a picture of him when the new character debuts?
And it turns out to be a fan. I hope I can redeem the tragedy in the game. Although it tests the author's writing skills, the ending of the fan should be ne. Personally, I think the ending of be is ugly.
There are only two books to read about Goddess of Victory, and one of them can only read 80 chapters. Come on, you are the only one who can earn it. Although there are still some flaws, but it seems that there are no big poison points at present. I will finish it for you in one go. Come on, I hope you don't come up with some plots that are too heaven-defying. The original plot of Ark is too heaven-defying. If I don't have enough poison resistance, I will really break my defense.
This is the best Niki novel that can be found under the plot of "Three Anniversary Shit" and can heal the soul. It is worth reading.
It shouldn't be given such a low score at all. Even for readers who have been following it all the way, this book must have at least a 9.2. Whether it is the creation of characters or the depiction of plots, they are at the top level among fans. As a reader who has never played Nikki, in my opinion this book is really good. Big cheers for the author! I hope to see the end of this book [Sending Hearts]
It's interesting. Although I don't play that game, this novel fits my taste. There are no invincible plug-ins, there are no systems everywhere, there are only ordinary selves. Unlike what I see now, the system of Long Aotian is reborn at the beginning, or there are plug-ins everywhere, waiting to be picked up.
It's beautiful. The author made me, a guy who has never read Nikke, read it with gusto. You will know how beautiful this book is.
It's better than the book next door, the plot is smooth, and the character lines are still being read. It's okay for now, but the number of words is small.
I'm not bragging, I feel it's better than the Goddess Force. The main character in that novel is the same as a big stallion. Although the plot has a strong point like this, it may be that I've read too many single female protagonists, and I feel disgusted when facing such a big stallion. However, this book is not abrupt at all, and the plot of various characters is also quite smooth. Not bad, but I discovered it a little early and a little bit, so I need to raise it. There is meat in more than 100 chapters, but why not Rabbi [crying], I have always been a rabbi viper [crying], I hope to give rabbi more drama [crying] Why don't I, Rabbi, eat meat...
Compared with other Goddess of Victory novels in Tomato, this one is much better. The protagonist is finally not a camera who only follows the plot, but a normal person who uses the plot to achieve his own goals. I read it for more than 120 chapters, and it was a pleasure to read it all in one go [laughing evilly], but in chapter 106 I finally got the meat, but why isn't it a Rabbi [face covering]? Can we only talk about the value of the security guard?
The writing is very good. The process of fighting and game is very well written. There is no unnecessary description in the fight. If Gaba dies, he will be killed immediately. The game is also very detailed. There is no unnecessary description like a big stomach fat. The writing is quite exquisite. I personally think it is very good [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
The early stage is a bit literate, but the look and feel is pretty good. Ordinary people are like this (it's only the early stage now). I really don't see what the protagonist's abilities are. I don't know if I can't remember the power station because I simply forgot or it was some kind of foreshadowing. It should be foreshadowing. The author has written it like this. If you say you just simply forgot, then I will attack you. It has the potential to become a good book, so you can wait and see. Is the protagonist set by Luo Bo?
Finally there is another very good novel written by Nikki The following contains spoilers, but the plot and period are handled well anyway. The protagonist has no system and is not down. Ark starts the game by delivering couriers. Because he couldn't survive by delivering couriers, and he didn't want to rely on the courier girl Nikki, he went to be a commander. Relying on familiarity with the plot, he defeated several battles. When Marianne was corroded, he used the information gap to lay out a plan. He tricked the fire dragon into threatening the goddess's troops to obtain the antidote and rescued Marianne. Then he cooperated with Eden to trick the fire dragon again, and used the fire dragon threat to threaten Annick to obtain the deputy commander and clean up a batch of bugs. Now it's tied, the good news is tied, the bad news is tied 😂
I have never played the game, but I have played it. Not to mention the plot, I hit two when I should, and Tata is on fire when I should. It has surpassed 90% of Tomato writers, and the characters are so lifelike that readers can always make up for the past characters. The disadvantage is that it is too lazy to post pictures, and it does not try its best to popularize the plot and character biographies for non-gamer readers. It is not very professional and is purely for love. (They are all based on popular knowledge from readers in the comment area) One sentence is that the author's writing style should be influenced by Niqing. He has probably read a lot, and he has quite a talent for writing. If more consideration is given to the reading experience of the audience and popular themes are introduced, the future will be promising enough to go to the starting point to prove the truth.
It's good. The author really writes well [like], but if possible, I hope there are more female protagonists, not just ambiguous ones [grievance] It seems that I have to support it. I will support it for hundreds of chapters. I will skip the plots that I don't like. The incompetent commander is just a burden later on. I hope to reduce the number of scenes where the commander appears. It can serve as a background to unite Nikki. Every time I see the incompetent commander, I get angry.
It's well written, and the protagonist's IQ is online. So many Nicky's haven't been written yet, but the author has started to create original Nicky, which means, am I here to see you write original Nicky?
Yes, it has achieved something that many fans have failed to do. There is no extremely obvious and eye-catching OOC, which brings great convincing power, and the plot is smooth. It is a very good fan.
A very nice article, just reading Chapter 7 makes it very interesting and fascinating to read. The protagonist Lu Yun is not like the commander in the original plot. He was just an ordinary person who played the game at the beginning. In order to survive, he had no choice but to become a commander. As a result, he happened to be assigned to Rabi's team and met Marianne by chance (he replaced the previous commander of Rabi who shouted to death in the original plot). Later, the protagonist also secretly tried that his own blood was not the antidote. In the end, Marianne was corrupted, and he had to sacrifice Marianne's body as bait to defeat the tyrant blacksmith. I played the game Nikki, and Marianne's death left a big impression on me. It was very tragic. In the author's description, when the protagonist had to give up Marianne in order for everyone to survive, it was almost a replica of the original plot of shooting Marianne: the protagonist's inner struggle as a normal person, Rabi saying before the battle: Thank you for thinking about us living people, and Anis shouting after the battle: We never blame the commander... These plots are particularly beautiful. The subsequent plot is not always smooth sailing. The protagonist is like a survivor, making adequate preparations for every action in order to survive. Of course, there are still surprises... (I will spoil the story if I go on...) In short, this is a rare and good article. The author must have put a lot of effort into writing it. After reading Nikki's consultation, the characters are very consistent with their settings, and there are no girls given away. They are all conquered by the protagonist. Although there are some personal settings of the author in the article, they are all in line with Nikki's settings and are not obtrusive at all. It even makes people look forward to what new things will come next. It's just a different story line for Nicki. (The protagonist will become stronger later on, so you don't have to worry about the protagonist being weak all the time. But at this time, if he doesn't become stronger, nothing seems to threaten him.)
5 Stars, must be 5 stars. I felt so good after reading it in one go () As a fanfic, it does require you to understand the game plot and even part of the characters, but it is undeniable that this is still a very good novel, and the character of the male protagonist is very suitable to my taste. As for the poisonous points directly caused by the plot and the game, I can only say which fanfic author will not be stabbed in the back? I personally feel that this book is not rated 9 or above, but giving it 8.5 Is not excessive at all. I highly recommend you to read it, and I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on [Like]
A rare NIKKE article, very well written!
It's a top-notch Nikke fan at the moment, but after playing Nikke, I think it's just a piece of cake. The character design fits the game very well, and there's basically nothing too OOC about it. As evidenced by the length of study, high-quality food and grass can be tasted.
I've only read 8 chapters and I'm already giving it a thumbs up. The author writes well and is very contagious. Here, I hope the author will continue to write like this and not be politically correct. This is a different world, not the earth. There are always many books that like to include personal items, I hope this one will not
For now, the full text is quite good, except for Nikke's perverted setting and Nikki's past, but you can read it normally if you don't understand it. The lack of a system really adds points to the spin-offs. After reading it for so long, most of it is about the system. I hope it won't break down in the future. I'm really looking forward to its future development.
It's very interesting, especially the latest part where Lao Yun dies. I have never played the game, but I have gained an insight into the appearance of that world in the author's words, and the appearance of Marianne, Rabi, and Anis. I hope that he, them, and that not-so-beautiful world will have a good ending.
Summary: The main plot is well sorted out, and it can be seen that it is different from the original main plot. However, because the protagonist has too much information, the main plot of Ark was written too quickly, and some Nikki (my Helen) are missing. In short, you, the author, get full marks. (If there are more Ark extras, I will still have a mystery)
Outsiders can still watch it, but the only drawback is that the game is so poorly known that no one posts pictures to increase the sense of immersion. The logic is okay. As for the high-level cerebral palsy... I have a little understanding of the plot. In fact, many official plots are also very cerebral palsy strictly speaking. For example, the fire dragon takes Lilivis's torso and bites the inhibitor to weaken the queen, which directly causes the queen to take over Lilivis's body.
It's good to read. The reason why it's missing one star is that starting from Marianne's return, the plot is particularly stomach-churning, comparable to the White Album (not talking about the plot). I'm starting to read the book now from the latest three chapters. I'll look at the rhythm and read it again. My good mood these days has been wiped out. To be honest, I asked the author, and the author ignored me. Of course, I don't recommend it. This book is really good (it looks good in the front)
The author's writing is so beautiful. I hope he keeps writing. It's great.
The best nikke fanfic I have ever seen. The characters are well created, but some plots may be a little less. After all, there are so many nikkes. The most comfortable thing is the protagonist. There is no system or brainless plug-in. From the beginning, he lives on the streets delivering food to the deputy commander of Ark. He is gentle but also decisive at critical moments. The part about thunderous methods is even more exciting. Whoever has the strength is still being wronged in Ark Great, no need to say more
Brothers, this is much better than the other fanfic. At least I really like the character of the protagonist. He is not arrogant and complacent, and he is humble and cautious in everything he does. Although the subsequent plot is different from the original work, it is very interesting. We can finally see Shu En kneeling down to beg for help. [Laughing evilly][Like][Like][Like]
It took me a while to read it, and then I remembered that I didn't give a review. This is basically the most reasonable and interesting Victory Goddess novel in all of Tomato [face covering] Very strong character creation (appreciation) But when will the author come back to the trap😡😡😡 and update me👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿
It's okay, this is probably a fanfic for a game, and it's quite attractive to me, an outsider. It's just that the authors of 🍅 all like the male protagonist to be cut off by others. Also, can you put a picture of him when the new character debuts? And it turns out to be a fan. I hope I can redeem the tragedy in the game. Although it tests the author's writing skills, the ending of the fan should be ne. Personally, I think the ending of be is ugly.
There are only two books to read about Goddess of Victory, and one of them can only read 80 chapters. Come on, you are the only one who can earn it. Although there are still some flaws, but it seems that there are no big poison points at present. I will finish it for you in one go. Come on, I hope you don't come up with some plots that are too heaven-defying. The original plot of Ark is too heaven-defying. If I don't have enough poison resistance, I will really break my defense.
This is the best Niki novel that can be found under the plot of "Three Anniversary Shit" and can heal the soul. It is worth reading.
It shouldn't be given such a low score at all. Even for readers who have been following it all the way, this book must have at least a 9.2. Whether it is the creation of characters or the depiction of plots, they are at the top level among fans. As a reader who has never played Nikki, in my opinion this book is really good. Big cheers for the author! I hope to see the end of this book [Sending Hearts]
It's interesting. Although I don't play that game, this novel fits my taste. There are no invincible plug-ins, there are no systems everywhere, there are only ordinary selves. Unlike what I see now, the system of Long Aotian is reborn at the beginning, or there are plug-ins everywhere, waiting to be picked up.
It's beautiful. The author made me, a guy who has never read Nikke, read it with gusto. You will know how beautiful this book is.
It's better than the book next door, the plot is smooth, and the character lines are still being read. It's okay for now, but the number of words is small.