Commander, Can I Survive Another Day?

I'm not bragging, I feel it's better than the Goddess Force. The main character in that novel is the same as a big stallion. Although the plot has a strong point like this, it may be that I've read too many single female protagonists, and I feel disgusted when facing such a big stallion. However, this book is not abrupt at all, and the plot of various characters is also quite smooth. Not bad, but I discovered it a little early and a little bit, so I need to raise it. There is meat in more than 100 chapters, but why not Rabbi 😢, I have always been a rabbi viper 😢, I hope to give rabbi more drama 😢 Why don't I, Rabbi, eat meat...

Compared with other Goddess of Victory novels in Tomato, this one is much better. The protagonist is finally not a camera who only follows the plot, but a normal person who uses the plot to achieve his own goals. I read it for more than 120 chapters, and it was a pleasure to read it all in one go 😏, but in chapter 106 I finally got the meat, but why isn't it a Rabbi 🤦? Can we only talk about the value of the security guard?

The writing is very good. The process of fighting and game is very well written. There is no unnecessary description in the fight. If Gaba dies, he will be killed immediately. The game is also very detailed. There is no unnecessary description like a big stomach fat. The writing is quite exquisite. I personally think it is very good 😘😘

The early stage is a bit literate, but the look and feel is pretty good. Ordinary people are like this (it's only the early stage now). I really don't see what the protagonist's abilities are. I don't know if I can't remember the power station because I simply forgot or it was some kind of foreshadowing. It should be foreshadowing. The author has written it like this. If you say you just simply forgot, then I will attack you. It has the potential to become a good book, so you can wait and see. Is the protagonist set by Luo Bo?

Finally there is another very good novel written by Nikki The following contains spoilers, but the plot and period are handled well anyway. The protagonist has no system and is not down. Ark starts the game by delivering couriers. Because he couldn't survive by delivering couriers, and he didn't want to rely on the courier girl Nikki, he went to be a commander. Relying on familiarity with the plot, he defeated several battles. When Marianne was corroded, he used the information gap to lay out a plan. He tricked the fire dragon into threatening the goddess's troops to obtain the antidote and rescued Marianne. Then he cooperated with Eden to trick the fire dragon again, and used the fire dragon threat to threaten Annick to obtain the deputy commander and clean up a batch of bugs. Now it's tied, the good news is tied, the bad news is tied 😂

I have never played the game, but I have played it. Not to mention the plot, I hit two when I should, and Tata is on fire when I should. It has surpassed 90% of Tomato writers, and the characters are so lifelike that readers can always make up for the past characters. The disadvantage is that it is too lazy to post pictures, and it does not try its best to popularize the plot and character biographies for non-gamer readers. It is not very professional and is purely for love. (They are all based on popular knowledge from readers in the comment area) One sentence is that the author's writing style should be influenced by Niqing. He has probably read a lot, and he has quite a talent for writing. If more consideration is given to the reading experience of the audience and popular themes are introduced, the future will be promising enough to go to the starting point to prove the truth.

It's good. The author really writes well 👍, but if possible, I hope there are more female protagonists, not just ambiguous ones 🥺 It seems that I have to support it. I will support it for hundreds of chapters. I will skip the plots that I don't like. The incompetent commander is just a burden later on. I hope to reduce the number of scenes where the commander appears. It can serve as a background to unite Nikki. Every time I see the incompetent commander, I get angry.

It's well written, and the protagonist's IQ is online. So many Nicky's haven't been written yet, but the author has started to create original Nicky, which means, am I here to see you write original Nicky?

A very nice article, just reading Chapter 7 makes it very interesting and fascinating to read. The protagonist Lu Yun is not like the commander in the original plot. He was just an ordinary person who played the game at the beginning. In order to survive, he had no choice but to become a commander. As a result, he happened to be assigned to Rabi's team and met Marianne by chance (he replaced the previous commander of Rabi who shouted to death in the original plot). Later, the protagonist also secretly tried that his own blood was not the antidote. In the end, Marianne was corrupted, and he had to sacrifice Marianne's body as bait to defeat the tyrant blacksmith. I played the game Nikki, and Marianne's death left a big impression on me. It was very tragic. In the author's description, when the protagonist had to give up Marianne in order for everyone to survive, it was almost a replica of the original plot of shooting Marianne: the protagonist's inner struggle as a normal person, Rabi saying before the battle: Thank you for thinking about us living people, and Anis shouting after the battle: We never blame the commander... These plots are particularly beautiful. The subsequent plot is not always smooth sailing. The protagonist is like a survivor, making adequate preparations for every action in order to survive. Of course, there are still surprises... (I will spoil the story if I go on...) In short, this is a rare and good article. The author must have put a lot of effort into writing it. After reading Nikki's consultation, the characters are very consistent with their settings, and there are no girls given away. They are all conquered by the protagonist. Although there are some personal settings of the author in the article, they are all in line with Nikki's settings and are not obtrusive at all. It even makes people look forward to what new things will come next. It's just a different story line for Nicki. (The protagonist will become stronger later on, so you don't have to worry about the protagonist being weak all the time. But at this time, if he doesn't become stronger, nothing seems to threaten him.)

Yes, it has achieved something that many fans have failed to do. There is no extremely obvious and eye-catching OOC, which brings great convincing power, and the plot is smooth. It is a very good fan.